A night to remember... MAAN FF.. Part5 PG 15- 28/11 - Page 4

Haaye dil ko thandak mil gai jalte bhunte Vanya ko dekh kar

Show me anu dumb hai tere story me apna Anuj dumb hai....bhai bandi tere ko hotel me ek ghante baad bula rahi kuch to hint samajh.....ab hockey khelne to bulaegi nahi waha par😆

Update it soon dear.... I'm eagerly waiting❤️

Originally posted by: Meriam25

Disclaimer: I'm a very horrible writer yes an amazing reader but a horrible writer so pls bear with me 🤣.

Those who read my posts will know for sure I don't proofread my posts likewise here .

This is probably the first time I'm writing a FF 😅. So depending on your comment and feedback will think of continuing or not ☺️.

Thank you in advance for taking time out and reading. Also the promo has made me fed up m looking for maan in alternative universe or rather maan time travelled in the future. So this is my coping mechanism from the trauma of the promo . Hopefully it is for you all too ☺️☺️

Premise :

Vanya are working for a small concern as his cafe is ruined and they're working on a project for thr AK group. Vanya's boss doesn't want any mishap with AK and warns them to never get into his bad books knowing their history, geography

Maan are married though they are in love with eo . They are quite awkward while thinking about the physical intimacy. And also they're too engrossed in taking care of anu's kids that they don't have enough time to think about it. They're Happy talking over hot chocolate laughing out loud to their hearts content . Sharing every happiness and problems facing the issues of the world together. They feel that's enough in a relationship.

Ok here goes hopefully I don't disappoint this story writing in a way is therapy to me .

However, one day anu's mom tells her how important is physical intimacy in a relationship. She makes her understand that though her relationship is complete in all aspects so so so better than hers with her ex, though they understand eo so very well even the silences but physical intimacy strengthens the bond between two people and fosters closeness, love and affection. Anu is left pondering over this . Always been so shy around him yet thinking what thoughts Anuj might have on the same .

She decides to take the step forward as with her proposal to him declaring her love knowing he will never initiate things but will always support . Though a bit nervous , she goes aboard with making the arrangements. As her kids are at home with ofc gk she decides to book a suite in a hotel and she gives instructions to decorate it to serve the purpose.

With all the things ready she decides to call Anuj .

Anuj (in office) : I don't know why anu said she doesn't feel like coming today .. normally mujhe sab pata chalta hai but today there was something different about her . She seemed to be so so happy. Kanha ji mere anu ko hamesha aise khush rakhna . I hope she is feeling well woh kabhi kaam se chutti nahi leti inspite of me telling otherwise so many times . Agar woh rest karna chahti hai to teekh hai. Rest karna bhi hai. I jus hope sab kuch teekh ho . Mere anu ke zindagi me aur koi pareshani nahi kanha ji

Ok guyss this is the intro some fun some romance and some mushiness in store hopefully I do a decent job will update the first part soon .

Ty for reading this is probably the first FF I have ever written

Kitna difficult hain

Kudos to all the writers for the fantastic job

Let me know if it was ok

Will update soonish.

Also have some joker part for Vanya in store

Wowww this is sooo cuteee..weekend was so busy was waiting to read it. Want to read more ..loved it

Nyccc part dear plz update your next part soon

First.part is already updated dear

Do check it out ☺️

Haina usko toh koi umeed nahi hai na

Isliye ☺️☺️☺️

Hopefully will update the next part soon ty 🙂💖

Tysm da

Will update hopefully by tonight

Yahaan be storm alert hai aur chutti bhi hai is liye

Thank you all for the words of encouragement. This is the second part . Hopefully it's enjoyable

Part 2: En route to Radisson Blu

It's around 6:30 PM, Anuj is still in the parking lot of his office. Trying to start his car which isn't due to the heavy downpour.

Anuj : pata nahi jab bhi anu ko milne jarahi hoon yeh gaadi mere dushman kyun ban jati hai. 26 saal pehle woh sala bunty ka scooty pichle baar jab anu ka first flight tha tab bhi aur ab anu mushkil main hai aur ab yeh mere na layak gaadi .waise anu kabhi bhi pareshani me.ho toh akele samaal leti hai even if I try to intervene woh intervention ko pasand nahi karti hai. Aaj achanak pata nahi kya hua pehle.off nahi ayi aur pata nahi kyun hotel chali gayi aur suite mein kya kar rahi hai..hey kanha ji I hope she ain't in trouble. Aur yeh gaadi bhi shit

Anuj beta agar der laga di toh anu tujhe nahi chodegi saari raat bol bol kar torture karegi . Uska bhad bhad sweet torture toh hai par apna quality time jhagde mein waste nahi karna chahati hoon

I guess it s better I hail an auto or.taxi .

Anuj goes to the nearby bus stop. Owing to the heavy downpour, he is completely drenched from.head to toe . Uss chaos mein bhi he can't help but think of their first.moment in the rain where he held her hand . Touching her raw skin under the chilling water had sent shivers down. His body .

Anuj(in thought):Agar uske chooone se gale lag ja ne se pata nahin kya hoga tera par asar uski phy proximity se uski kiss se . Kaash hum dono aise bheeg rahe hote aise baarish mein aur thand mein

Anuj : Focus ! Focus kya hogaya tujhko Anuj . Aaj aise kaise khayal aate hain pata nahi yeh sab hoga ya nahi tumhari kismat mein. Hmm arre Anuj Focus yaar wahaan anu mushkil mein hai aur tum Physical thought soch rahi ho . Har kisi ke liye rain romantic thodi hoti hai bohat saare logon ko problems khadi hoti hai aise baarish mein. Pata nahi kya prob hai aaj anu kuch bata bhi nahi rahe hai aur main Yahaan already drenched hoon aur cab ya auto bhi nahi mil rahi hai

Suddenly a car stops in front of them and someone calls.out his name

Arre Anuj beta!!!

Anuj turns around and sees it's bapuji sitting at the back side of the car , vanraj and baa in the front .

Bapuji: arre Anuj beta kya hua gaadi kharab ho gayi kya.? Tum toh sar se paon tak bheeg chuki ho . Andar ajao tumhe ghar chod deti hoon aise bohat time rahogi toh bimar pad jaogi .

Vanraj and baa are annoyed that they have to meet him again. Baa has come to terms for maan marriage due to bapuji insistence but still loathes maan together and blames her family falling apart on anu and Anuj. Also seeing her son faltering in life personally and professionally, trying hard to make ends meet and anu basking in love and luxury, jealousy is shown so clearly on her face.

Anuj : arre bapuji what a pleasant surprise, mere.gaadi start nahi ho rahi hain isliye aur cab ya auto nahi mil rahi hai

Bapuji: woh toh dikh raha hai beta shukar hai humne tumme dekh liya . Chalo andar hum tumhe ghar drop karenge. Beti se bhi milkar jaongi bohat din hogaya

Vanraj: par bapuji ??

Bapuji : kuch prob hai?

Vanraj : nahi bapuji , chaliye Mr Kapadia

Vanraj is hesitant and doesn't want to go to Anuj ka ghar . He will be unable to keep a normal straight face seeing the love and respect and understanding oozing out of maan . Something he wished he had with kavya . But it took almost two failed marriages to see what he is missing. Though his underdeveloped brain couldn't put a word to the emotion which married couple should have which he clearly saw in maan . Now again he didn't want to see all that and again go jealous. But he has always taken Ak for granted done with him treated him as he pleased like how he treated anupama. But now the stakes are high. He rather not disappoint Ak and his anu even to the tiniest bit as he knew how much anu and her happiness and his company and his brand image mattered ro him and he has also seen the small instances of his fury which had scared him honestly but didn't show

Vanraj took a detour towards anuj's ghar

Anuj: Mr shah ! Right nahi yahaan se seedha left lijiye aur highway pakadna hai

V: par Mr. Kapadia aapke ghar toh right turn ke baad aata haina

Anuj : haan ghar toh right turn ke baad aata hai . Par aaj main ghar nahi ja rahi hoon. Can u pls drop me on Radisson Blu hotel?

Vanraj (thinking) paaka iska kuch khaas dost wahan hogi . I knew it je must be having an affair tabhi toh he isn't going home . Waise bhi woh masaale ke badbo wali anu ke saath intimate toh nahi jo paya hoga kaun intimate ho sakta hain jiske paas masale ke badbo aati hai. Par I must say kya natak kar raha sab ke samne jaise biwi ka Ghulam hain biwi ko be intehaa pyaar karne ki. Mard toh mard hi hota hain and m sure inka relationship abhi bhi Physical nahi hui hogi

Vanraj is disturbed from his thoughts by bapuji

Bapuji : hotel kyun beta ?

Anuj (not wanting to alarm him) woh kya hai na bohat important meeting hain is liye woh nipta kar.ghar chali.jaongi

Bapuji: acha teekh hai beta. (Getting a bit emotional) socha beti se mil loon aur garma garam chai pee loon bohat din ho gayi hai. Pata nahi aj subah se uski yaad Arshi hai. Woh ghar ghar nahi lagta Anupama ke.bina

Anuj: bapuji ab jab chahe ghar a sakte hai apne beti ko milne ke liye . Actually aap gk ke saath sleepover bhi rakh sakte hai 😊😊. Unko bhi company milegi chess khelne ke liye . Apki beti aap ko miss karti hai toh agar aap ayenge toh anu ko bohat khushi milegi 😊.

Bapuji : ty beta ..anu ki zindagi mein tum jaisa ladka hi aana chahiye. Warna kuch log uski maa ko usse.milne ke liye aur anu ko apne maa se milne ke liye bhi tokh dete hai.kash 26 saal pehle ab dono mile toh kitna acha hota .

Vanraj and baa glaring at bapuji thro the rear view

Anuj : 26 saal baad mile woh bhi ache hai bapuji warna pita samaan apka rishta nahi milta na sab kuch ache ke liye

Anuj(phone ringing)

Anu; ab kahaan hai itne der kyun sab teekh hai na

Anuj: (hushed tone) car start nahi ho rahi thi isliye aur abhi lift mili hai toh arahi hoon

Vanraj looking at him thro the rear view and thinking pakka koi gf hain jisse baat kar raha hai par must say unlike me bohat chalu hai yeh banda .

Anuj on phone reassuring he is fine also asking if anu is fine .

Anu : main teekh ho kabhi kabhi apne baare mein bhi soch liya kijiye jaldi ajayi ga

Anuj : par prob kya hai tum kuch kyun nahi bata rahi ho

Anu ; aree aap aye toh pehle phone mein kaise bataungi . Aaap ayiye bas.

Anuj : teekh hai arahi hoon.

Bapuji : kya hua beta pareshan laf rahi ho.

V: kuch ladki ki awaas thi Mr Kapadia (smirking 😏)

Anuj : haan khaas dost hai aur kuch jaana hai?

Vanraj remain silent but bapuji sense soemthing fishy and pesters him to tell the matter

Anuj : main aapko pareshan nahi karna chata tha isliye nahi bataya..woh act ek khaas insaan ne bulaya hai aur main naa nahi kar payi woh prob mein hai shayad

Bapuji : kaun khaas

Vanraj and baaa almost certain kuch toh locha hai 😂

Anuj : woh bapuji anu ka call tha she seemed restless not worried act I dk why 🤔🤔 . But haan she said ek prob hai aur usne bulaya mujhe yahaan

Baa and esp vanraj are shock to realise it was anu he was talking too and bapuji was shocked kinanu was in trouble and Anuj didn't tell us

Bapuji : vanraj jaldi jao hotel pata nahi meri beti kaunsi musibat mein hogi

V : ji babuji

Anuj: pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun laf raha hai ki koi prob nahi hai. Aur pata nahi mujhe kyun lagra hai ki agar mein sab ke saath gayi anu mujhe nahi chodegi woh baar baar bolna akele aane ka pata nahi kya matlab hain. Jo bhi ho uske safety se badh kar kuch nahi hai.

And they reach the hotel and Anuj asks for.room nk 703

Receptionist: par woh toh hamare exclusive couple suite hain 😍❤️.

Anuj : meri wife wahaan par hai shayad koi prob hai. Is liye

Vanraj is kinda figuring out what's the matter and is almost pestering baa bapuji to go home with him .

He tries to persuade baa or go home as they be left Anuj here and he will TC

Baa: aree main maan ko saath dekh kar ghussa ho jata hoon par anu ne bohat kuch kiya hai aur ab woh musibat mein hai to humme help karni padegi truth is agar hum sab ek chat ke neeche hai usi ke kaaran as she paid the loan and also gave us our house back

Vanraj is pissed off by now teekh hain u both go I'll wait .

Bapuji: yeh phal aur kuch mitaai maine anu ke liye.liya tha socha kal ghar aaka r de dungi par agar anu yahi hai toh yahi sahi. Vanraj us basket ko lekhar aao gaadi se .

Vanraj : bapuji kal de hi sakta hai

Bapuji : aree fresh fruits hain dry fruits hain takat ke.liye anu anuj ko zarrorat hai itna kaam jo karte hain.

Vanraj is able.to fetch hidden meaning.in all this

Vanraj: ok main ja kar woh basket leke aata hoon aap pls leke jayiga main lobby mein intezaar karungi

Baa : woh heavy basket main nahi carry kar sakti tum leke aao room tak

Vanraj fuming in anger

Anuj : it's ok baa bapuji main lekhe aaongi

Bapuji ; nahi beta vanraj lekar ayega aur koi kaam bhi toh nahi hai itna toh karhi sakta hain. Kyun vanraj

Vanraj ; teekh hai bapuji .(fuming inside )

Anuj : chaliye bapuji

Bapuji : yeh anu itne bade hotel main couple suite mein kya kar rahi hain pata nahi kya mushkil hai

Anuj : (in a way figuring out things hoping it's true also scared if she's actually in trouble, wondering what's gonna be her reaction on seeing adharniya baa and bapuji in the hotel suite ) pata nahi bapuji . Chalte hain yeh floor sirf high profile couple ke.liye yeh floor ke.liye alag butler hai.

All of them incl vanraj carrying the big basket enter the floor. The floor butler greets them and escorts them to the room.

The butler to le vanraj: tum.yahi ruko basket mujhe dedo servants not allowed. Tip agar room ke malkin denge toh main tumhe de dunga .

Ok so this is the part 2

Ik including vanraj only to derive utmost sadistic pleasure to see him burn . Nothing else . Also got a bit off focus for this part idk how well it was written. Do gimme your valuable suggestions like I said this is therapy and also continuous holiday here owing to heavy rain so idle mind putting into good use

P.s : no proofreading never do 🤣😂🤣😂

poor Vanraj but i can see how embarrassed Anu and Anuj will be.

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sukuun se padhke wapis aati hun... 🤗