A night to remember... MAAN FF.. Part5 PG 15- 28/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

OOO godddd I'm feeling second hand embarresment on behalf of Anuj and anupamaa🤣🤣

I was praying ki anu koi sexy si nighty pehen k na nikle room se baapu g k saamne🤣

Aur ye Anuj kya gadha hai🤣🤣hotel room me kaun si musibat hogi be wo bhi exactly ek ghante baad🤦🏼‍♀️


I just love your story yaaar....mast saddistic pleasure milta hai jalte bhunte vanar ko dekh kar


Last but not the least....thanks for mentioning bunty in your story....I felt like it was added specially for us bunty fans😎

"Sala bunty" awwwwwww my heart is stuck on this line😆

Edited by shrizz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Thank you for all your feedback thoroughly enjoyed reading them . Like I said again 😂 m nor a very good writer 🤣. Hopefully this part is good enough ☺️


Part 3 - The Radisson Blu hotel, Room no 703

As Anuj is about to knock the door of room no 703, they hear loud argument down the corridor. They see vanraj picking fight with the butler ans babuji hits his head

Bapuji : yeh ladka kahin bhi shuru ho jaata hai pata nahi kaunsi janam ka paap Kiya Maine

Leela : ab chup kijaye chaliye jaake dekhte hain

Bapuji n baa go to v and with much struggle calm things and v is adamant to go home now and pesters baa bapuji

Bapuji : Par Anupama ?

Anuj : (in a releived way) bapuji main hoon Na sab kuch sambhal loongi ap jaiye. Thank you for dropping me Mr.shah

Baa and bapuji esp after. alot of pestering finally bid goodbye .

Vanraj : take care mr Kapadia sorry for almost spoiling your eve enjoy ( in a frustrated tone )

Anuj : thank you mr shah . We will . This way to the lift. Bye 😎.

Anuj wishing whatever he's thinking is right and anu is really not into trouble. Knocks on the door room no 703.

Knocking knocking.

No answer ..

Now anuj starts panicking.

He knocks again

No answer...










Eventually he realises the door is opened and then realised the butler did say that anu had left the door open and had asked to allow only.him.inside .

Hitting his head he slowly enters inside calling out her name . There is no response . He's drippping wet from head and toe and with the AC on shivering and the cold air had formed a mist on his glasses and so is unable to see anything.

He removes his coat and using his handkerchief whichh is also already wet tries to wipe his glasses. Calling out to his anu again ina corner of his heart panicking if everything all right .

Anuj : Anu yaar Kahaan ho tum. Pls ajao ghabrahat ho rahi hai.

Anu !!

Anu!!





Suddenly the light go on ....

He turns to see the whole room beautifully decorated with flowers the whole theme of it is in white and he sees the bed decorated with red petals and on the wall amidst the decorations he sees the words .

I love you Anuj ❤️❤️..

Though he in a way expected something of this sort almost half.way through the journey as he could sense anu didnt sound tensed at all . He was shook. and pleasantly surprised that his anu would do something for him so special . Mostly in their relationship right from the partner phase to becoming friends and eventually becoming lovers , he was the one who was more.into surprising her with gifts . This was probably one of the first time and. he couldn't contain his excitement. His anu had done all this just for him. From the. time anu proposed to him.because she knew he would never initiate things. They were typical soulmates understanding eo including the silences and also what went onto eo.minds

.with god's grace their understanding love and companionship was perfect and everyone around agreed to.

But this took their relationship to the next level according to him as from tonight onwards there won't. be any distance physically too and physical intimacy was so imperative in a relationship. It will bring them even closer take away any differences or insecurities if any off from the relationship.

Basking in the beauty of the room he suddenly heard a voice soft yet loud enough and clear his heart almost skipped.a beat. Only she could.have such an effect on him.even after 26 freaking years that he still felt a teenage basking falling all.over in his first.love..

A little trembling, he turned around and he saw her




There she was standing draping a beautiful white sari thin transparent with a sleeveless blouse . Hair left loose wearing a beautiful white diamond set with matching earrings.

She looked so divine so etheral like a goddess .

Even in the normalcy of days , he'd keep staring at her but today he couldn't help it and was dumbdounded with words as always .

Anu: anuj kya hua aise aap bheeg gaye

Anuj : haan m wet completely 🥰🥰🥰🥰.

Anu : haan wahi toh aap aise rahenge toh bhukar hojayegi.

Anuj : bohat garmi hai yahaan

Anu; arre ac chalu hai apko garmi lag rahi hai hey bhagwan aapko bhukar toh nahi haina

Anuj; woh main main 😳😳😳

Anuj was standing there with his mouth agape. Anu after asking him Q's with no response came near him

Anu: kya hogaya apko fever hain kya.

And she was about to touch his forehead. Anuj was so deeply affected by her proximity in that beautiful saree and open hair his poor heart couldn't take it . He went back as she approached.

Anu came further toward him and he again went a bit back almost tripped on the side table and fell on her on the bed .

His body was literally on her , his weight completely on her. His wet shirt sticking to his broad torso and her body covered by such a thin saree did bare.min to stop their desire from oozing out ..the proximity was affecting them both and their bodies were touching literally rubbing eo. And Anuj noticed the droplets from.his hair had fallen on her face near her cheeks .


Anuj slowly took his hand and traced the water droplets from.her cheeks towwrds her lips. And slowly touched her 👄. Anu was experiencing emotions like never before. As his fingers moved.on her lips it parted .

Overcome with Physical desire he never knew he possessed towards her , he came near her to touch his lips with hers as he went nearby, her eyes closed. And he became. a bit hesitant thinking is. she really ok happy with whatever m. trying to do or is she obliging as. a wife . He stopped.midway pondering over the same


She slowly opened her eyes wondering why she couldn't feel his lips on her she was almost burning with desire also due to his wet body and their phy intimacy seeing him stopped midway looking closely into her eyes trying to read her expressions.

Anu(in.mind ) : gadha kahi ka

Anuj; woh main ......

Anu pulled him. by his tie and touched his lips with hers arching. A bit forward.

Their lips touched and both could feel the heat even in that cold room during the monsoon night ..they started kissing slowly and a.bit passionately and as they were about to kiss more deeply, the doorbell rang.

They were deeply engrossed and so didn't hear the doorbel ring at first then after one two bells they finally broke.loose. still burning with desire unable.to let. go but eventually did and anu wnt to open the door

Receptionist: maam sorry ro disturb you

she let a.small giggle seeing anu disheveled hair which anu made it straight.

Anu: I told no one.to disturbed us

Anuj : uh huh (blushing)

Anu: chup !!

Receptionist: mam I hope the decorations are as per.your liking we did everything as per your demand and sir liking as u said his fav colour is white .

Anuj:(feeling so blissful looks at anu)

Anu: yes it's perfect ty ❤️. I'll add feedback on your register tomorrow aur kuch

Anuj can't stop smiling and smirks

Anuj: patience. ☺️😚

Anu giving him an angry glare which he finds even more. cute

Anu: aur kuch hai?

Receptionist: yes mam we forgot to. give u this box which we normally place.on the bed for.such couple (and she winked ). So here it is.

Anu; thank you

By the time she sees anuj coughing severely

Anu thinking he will definitely catch a cold.asks the receptionist to bring kada to her room for.anuj .

Anuj : no kada no pls Annu no kada.

Anu: aap chaliye main apke chef ko personally instructions dena chati hoon .

And she turns to Anuj

Anu: tab tak aap.change kijiye maine apka night suit cupboard mein rakha hain.

Anuj nods ..anu asks the receptionist to keep the box on the bed and goes with her to give the chef instructions on the food and to bring kada for.anuj

Anuj smiling thinking how lucky he is to have her and sees the box wondering what it.may be

Maybe some chocolate or fruits I'm so hungry I'll gobble one or two saying so je opens the box and is shocked

He takes. his night suit and runs off to thr bathroom














That's it folks remaining part ll.post.later.

It's gona be. along night

Hope this was enjoyable

Sorry if disappointing





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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Thank you for the tag😃

And it was not boring, i was on the edge of my seat😆 (excitement dekho)

Acha hua v and company sarak lie😆 varna baa ko toh trauma ho jana tha.

Hm hm ..anu in white and anuj ka fish face. Could imagine

Anuj ka dheere dheere peeche jana, anu ka aage aana and then there is tripping, dripping and some kissing☺️

Anuj's thoughtfulness was really appreciable. "I hope she is not obliging as a wife" i really loved this line. Kudos for this❤️

"Gadha kahin ka" and then anu pulled him by his tie. Oof, that was my fav😆

Bas dabbe ke mention se hi samajh gyi thi main🤪

Ab jaldi jaldi agla part do

Class adhoori nhi chodte🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Mast hai👏

I completely enjoyed it☺️🤪🤗

Anuj is shooo cute

Edited by sushups - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Tu samajh gayi dabbe ka andar kya hain?

Waah tysm ❤️❤️ happy you enjoyed it . First detailed feedback feels good 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 🤪🤣😂🤣

Pata nahi agar my husband sees my writings such content mera toh first time FF. pelikna

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Haina apna banda toh bohat cute hot hain 😍🔥


Is lye hmare yeh haal if

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58


mazaa aaya gaya yaar!!! super cute Anuj hahahah

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

I am so glad Shah’s nikal gaye but somewhere in my heart I wanted V to witness superhot Anu ready to take her marriage to next level. Just to rub it in his face 😂

Superlike. Perfect portrayal of Anuj’s hesitation and Anupama taking initiatives and being caring.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

Haina apna banda toh bohat cute hot hain 😍🔥


Is lye hmare yeh haal if

wahi toh....issilye toh hum bura phasee haine😆

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