|Fantasy|- MaAn shots ( Act 13-A-ii PG 40 UPDTD 14 march)(16+) - Page 25

This was fantastic. Loved it all. You wrote it so beautifully.

I had written some more and then India forums crashed. So i don't remember what all I had typed hahaha.

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Wow Nish... so so so beautiful.

Really enjoyed that "Then you should just do it, rather than taking all those insults!"

The rains and then her I Love You on knees, simple pure acceptance and then Anuj's "I am not crying, You are". This man is adorbs ❤️❤️❤️

Also the lines "Jaisa bhi hu tumhara hi hu." brings a nice sense of belonging and sealing the deal and there life's with a pinky promise 🥳🥳

Don't want to sound cheesy, but Maggi is the best comfort food ever. Period. 🤪🤪

I too will remember this confession more than original as its simplicity, dil ko chuu gayi.. thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: Km181

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Wow Nish... so so so beautiful.

Thanks yaar! Reading your reviews is my joy.

Really enjoyed that "Then you should just do it, rather than taking all those insults!"

The rains and then her I Love You on knees, simple pure acceptance and then Anuj's "I am not crying, You are". This man is adorbs ❤️❤️❤️

This all just happened while I was writing. I imagined the scene, and God! It felt so right!

Also the lines "Jaisa bhi hu tumhara hi hu." brings a nice sense of belonging and sealing the deal and there life's with a pinky promise 🥳🥳

Don't want to sound cheesy, but Maggi is the best comfort food ever. Period. 🤪🤪

I am a yipee person😆 but I am aware of Maggie's fan base and thought that as long as the company is right, everything will taste good and Maggie fits the quickie bill too ( I try to adhere to logic if possible🤣)

I too will remember this confession more than original as its simplicity, dil ko chuu gayi.. thank you 🤗

Aww...thank you! And next update is going to be Sweet revenge, so look forward to it.

Loved it. I swear this is SOOOO much better than what they showed. The dancing, singing, filmypana was a bit much and a bit down market.

This is truly romantic, spontaneous and so MaAn.

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Awesome yaar… loved the simplicity and spontaneous confession ❤️❤️❤️❤️


“Then you should just do it, rather than taking all those insults!”She burst out, surprising him …. Wish we get something like that in the show and Anuj too acts upon it.

Damnnn this one is soooo Beautiful 😭😭😭

Her kneeing down in rain😭 saying her feelings for him "kya aap mujhe apna banayenge 🙈🙈💖....

As expected he instantly dropped in his knees 🥺...Like forever vada wala pinky promise is done ❤️... really loved this sooo much 😭❤️

Hyeeee nyccc part dear plz update soon

Thank you very much for tagging me!

Love it! What a beautiful alternative❤️❤️❤️

Your version was way better than what we saw in the show.❤️❤️❤️