viditi ss:Into the bottom of sea! ch 9 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Champi scene was damn cute
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks all for ur lovely comments itne sweet comments padke kahi mujhe diabetes na ho jaye🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Arre bada hi cute tha yr!!!!!! @riya diabetes tume nhi hume ho jayegi itni cute+sweet se viditi moment padhkar...thanku...please next part jaldi karna❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Champi!!!!!!Haye!Aur woh wala I am always there for u was best. Update soon plzzz.
Aaj time hai toh sabki stories padh Rahi hoon. All are awesome. Mere Jane k baad kaafi writers paida ho Gaye.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CH4
so aditi woke up with good mood due to champi she lazily sat on the couch and started to search something on her phone she facing a glass window through which sunlight is peeping out and fall on her face she tried to hid her face with hand but it doesnot work vikrant came there with coffee in his hand and noticed this prob he headed to the window with coffee and stood infront of it just to block the sunlight from falling on adus face
aditi noticed his cute behaviour and smiled at him
vik; goodmorning aditi neend kaisi aiyin
adu;aachi because of u
vik; the pleasure is all mine(with smile on his face) chalo aab breakfast karlo vikrant special parathe
adu;isme spcl kya hain ingredients toh wahin hain(taking a bite)
vik; arey aditi vikrant singhal jo bhi banata hain wo spcl he hota
adu;aacha bas bas acp saab itni tareef maat kijiye waise parathe tasty hain.
suddenly adu phone rings it was her dad.
dad;hello
o adu beta thik se pahuch gayin wahn kahan wana khaya ki nahin
adu;papa aap mujhe bolne denge ki nahin main thik hoon aur aabhi khana khaa rahin hoon vikrant spcl parathe(with a look on vik) vik smiled at her response
suddenly there was problem in network and adu tucked her phone btw her shoulder and ear took her coffee cup and the newsppr and moved to balcony there was heavy wind blowing and show her hair was falling on her face and disturbing her she couldnot tuck it as her hands are busy
vik who finally came to balcony to take fresh air noticed this and he himself tuck her hair beside her ear she was mesmerized by her touch and stopped talking to her father vik was very close to her she could feel her breath
adu;papa main apse baad mein baat karti hoon.
adu;vik...r.ant(she was stammering to how to react)
vik noticed this and moved aside he could she her cheeks turned red
adu; vikrant jaldi tayaar ho jao party ke liye late ho jayenge(tried to change the topic and ran inside)
after sometime
adu:yeh kya pehna hain vik tumne
vik;kyun isme kya burai hain
adu;vikrant hum chauki nahin jaa rahen party mein jaa rahen hain kuch formal pehno
vik;but..
adu just gave a look and he changed(vik is senior but now a bheegi billi)
they enjoyed the party and retired to their room early at midnight adu woke up and saw a lady from her window moving toward the sea she felt disturbed and followed her she seems like hypnotized and reached deepest point of see then two iron hands pulled her
vik;aditi tum yahan kya kaar rahi ho aur kahan jaa rahin thi
aditi came out of hypnotizam and fell unconsious
YEH CH THODA BADA THA AGAR BORE HO GAYEN HO TOH SORRY HOPE U ALL DONT MIND😊FLOW KE SAATH ITNA LIKH DIYA
Edited by Riya95 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Hey it was not boring
Vik always listen to aditi nice update dear
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Hey, nice one! And it involves a case too!
Keep writing!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Bore!!!!!! Nahi yr mera toh aur padhne ka mann kar raha hai!!!! Btw awesome update...vik adu ke ek ishaare mein hi baat maan jata hai how cute yr!!!!!! Love it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
bina bole hi vik aditi ki sari baat samajh raha hai ohhh waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Flow mein aur thoda likh deti hum bilkul mind nahi karte Riya ..
Ekdum mast update tha .
Kha se lati ho itne cute scenes

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