OS of AGNI (NAVI AND DIMPLE) last updated on page4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys, this is OS of "AGNI" for u all jo NAVI aur DIMPLE ko miss kar rahe hai meri tarah...😭 LOVE IS FOREVER
N:-Nimrit
A:-Agam
ye maa bhi na kya jarurat thi hume bahar bhejane ki, Agam apane dil me soch raha tha... maa ne bhi pata nahi kyu hum dono ko bahar bhejane ka man bana liya hai, nimrit bhi apane mann me yahi soch rahi thi. nimrit ji aur meri shaadi to arranged marriage thi na mai unhe achhe se jaanta tha na woh. par kuch dino se meri aur nimrit ji ki dosti ho gayi hai aur maa ne ye nayi farmaish kar di ab kya soch rahi hogi nimrit ji mere baare me? agam khud se hi kah raha tha... agam beta packing ho gayi kya? ..."haan maa ho gayi bas aa rahe hai hum...
gaadi me bags rakhate huye A:- maine aapki baat maan li par gaadi mai hi chalaunga maa"...achha thik hai tu hi chala par apana aur meri bahu ka khyal rakhana samjhe...A:- haan maa...N:- aap chinta mat kijiye mummiji agan ji hai na mere saath wo mera pura khayal rakhenge... agam aur nimrit ne ek dusare ki taraf dekha aur halki si smile unke chehare par khill gayi...
N :-bye mummiji
A :- bye maa
bye beta , aaram se jaana...
A :- nimrit ji aapko garmi ho rahi hogi ek kaam kijiye window khol lijiye...
N:- ji thik hai .
nimrit se window nahi khulate dekh agam ne gaadi roki aur khud hi nimrit ki madad karne laga.agam ko pata hi nahi chala ki wo nimrit ke kitane kareeb tha jab uska dhyan gaya ki nimrit to use bas dekh hi rahi bina palake jhukaye... wo dono ek pal ke liye ekdusare ki aakhon me kahi kho gaye... ek hawa ke jhoke se nimrit ke baal usake chehare pe aa gaye agam ne halke se unhe apane fingers se nimrit ke chehare se hataaye. nimrit ne apani aakhein band kar li wo sparsh use bahot achha laga.. achanak horn ki aawaz se dono hosh me aaye.
N :- aur kitna door hai agam ji wo resort?
A :- bas 1 KM aur hai.
N:- ye to pura jungle ka area lag raha hai...
A :- haan. ye resort puri tarah se jungle se surrounded hai.
N :- kya hua agam ji aapne gaadi kyu rok di?
A :- wo lagata hai gaadi me kuch problem aa gayi hai isliye gaadi band ho gayi hai
N :- ab kya hoga agam ji ? yaha to door door tak koi gaadi bhi nazar nahi aa rahi dusari!
A :- aap tension mat lijiye nimrit ji. hume gaadi se utarana hoga...
A :- sach me yaha se hume lift nahi mill sakti hai... aur isase pahale ki andhera ho jaaye hume resort pahuchna hi hoga..par kaise?
N :- agam ji aapane hi kaha na ki resort sirf 1 KM door hai to hum chal kar bhi to jaa sakte hai na..
A :- kya?
N :- haan aur hum dono saath hai to rastayu hi kat jaayega baato me..
A :- thik hai nimrit ji.
agam aur nimrit raste par paidal hi nikal pade..
N :- to bataaiye aapko nature aur bahar ghumna firna kya pasand nahi hai?
A :- nahi aisi baat nahi hai par mai jyaada aisi jagah par aaya nahi hoon.
N :- mujhe to bahot pasand hai khubsurat vaadiya , ped paudhe, waterfalls , paani ki kalkal , birds ki awaaje. kitani khubsurati hati hai na iname..agam ji!!
nimrit baate kiye jaa rahi aur agam bas usake bhole se chehare ko dekhe jaa raha tha. aur soch raha tha ki kitani khubsurat hai ye , kitani maasumiyat, innoccence hai inaki baato me... ye mai kya soch raha hu... aakhir ye kaisa ehsaas hai??? jo mujhe nimrit ji ki taraf attract kar raha hai??
N :- wo dekhiye agam ji !!!
agam appne khayalo se bahar aa gaya...
N :- waha ek waterfall hai .. chaliye na hum waha chalate hai...
( TO BE CONTINUED... IF U ALL WANT PLZZ TELL ME)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing OS anu... awesome begining...
was missing our AgNi (navi & dimple) so much... you just made it so good...
cud imagine both of them walking down the forest road with Nimrit chattering away & Agam lost in Nimrit's beauty and innocence... too good😊
please do continue... looking forward to the next update...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nicely written one shot Archu..👏

could visualise each scene esp nimrit chatting non stop and agam lost in her innocent face..

Enjoy reading it keeping in mind Dimple..Navi As agam..nimrit..Do continue..
Edited by saveeta24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cjs369

amazing OS anu... awesome begining...

was missing our AgNi (navi & dimple) so much... you just made it so good...
cud imagine both of them walking down the forest road with Nimrit chattering away & Agam lost in Nimrit's beauty and innocence... too good😊
please do continue... looking forward to the next update...😃

thank u soo much. charu.
right ab sirf YAADEIN rah gayi hai baaki. par hamaari yaado me bhi zinda hai AGNI aur hamesh rahenge.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saveeta24

nicely written one shot Archu..👏


could visualise each scene esp nimrit chatting non stop and agam lost in her innocent face..

Enjoy reading it keeping in mind Dimple..Navi As agam..nimrit..Do continue..

thaks a lot savee. jo mai soch rahi thi aur dekhana chahati thi wo to CV's ne destroy kar diya par maine apane OS ke jariye unhe phir se zinda kiya hai... thanks agian.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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anu sabne teri taarif ki thi.mai bas itna kehna chahtha hoon ki continue writing this...
really its far better than the present story shown in AM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's beautiful dear..
do cont...
missing Dimple..
btw i hv quit the show...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Updated part :-:

A:-par nimrit ji..


N :- chaliye na please..
A :- thik hai

waterfall ke kareeb jaate hi nimrit ka to khushi ka koi thikana hi nahi tha. wo paani ko apane haatho me lekar usase khelane lagi. agam use sirf dekh raha tha.
N :- aap bhi aaiye na yaha agam ji!!
A :- mai?

N :-haan dekhiye kitana shudhha paani hai ye , aur thanda bhi
A :- par mai ... wo
N :- aaiye na
nimrit ki baat ko agam taal hi nahi saka aur waterfall ke kareeb aa gaya. tabhi nimrit ne paani ko hathoo me lekar agam ke upar feka. aur jor jor se hasane lagiagam to shocked ho gaya par nimrit ko hasata dekh use bahot achha lag raha tha gussa hone ki jagah.

N :- sorry agam ji
agam ne kuch bhi nahi kaha sirf smile di.

A :- achha nimrit ji ab humein chalana chahiye yaha se bahot der ho gayi hai.

N :- ji agam ji.

resort me pahochne ke baad dono ne bags rakhe. tabhi ek waitor waha aaya " sir ye aap dono liye tea.

A :- rakh dijiye. thank u.
tea khatm hone ke baad

N :- agam ji abhi to sirf evening huye hai kya hum kahi bahar ghumne chale? mera bahot mann kar raha hai.

A :- ji thik hai.

bahar nikalate hi waha charo aur greenary hi greenary thi. colorfull flowers ke plants the . aur gahari khaiya bhi thi.
nimrit to bahot khush thi aur agam bhi.

N :- kitna khubsurat nazaara hai na agam ji.

A :- haan nimrit ji. par aapase zyaada nahi.

N :- kya? kuch kaha aapane?

A :- nahi to , kuch bhi nahi..

N :- mujhe bahot pasand hai ye.

A :- aur mujhe aap...

N :- kya? is baar to jarur kuch kaha hai aapane?

A :- nahi mai to bas ye kah raha tha ki sach me bahot khubsurati hai yaha mere akho ke saamne...
NEXT UPDATE ON :- PAGE 2
Edited by Anurna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: azeeth

anu sabne teri taarif ki thi.mai bas itna kehna chahtha hoon ki continue writing this...

really its far better than the present story shown in AM

thanks a lot. i will continue it. plz read and give ur views.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: akki-rockstar

it's beautiful dear..

do cont...
missing Dimple..
btw i hv quit the show...

thanks akki for apreciation

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