AKA FF Takraar...phir Ikraar? Chapter 6B (pg 15, 21 Dec)

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AMAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

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mujse b nahi pammy... yaar aage kya hoga... mai soch rahi hoon A2 college me takerayenge kaise... i mean unki pehli meet kaisi hogi...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: grintson
mujse b nahi pammy... yaar aage kya hoga... mai soch rahi hoon A2 college me takerayenge kaise... i mean unki pehli meet kaisi hogi...

ha aman raga story kab continue karegi.

amita hi pehel amit se tak rayegi.😉

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AMAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

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mere khyal se scene hoga k when A2 will collide, Amita ka bag khul kar gir jayega aur usme se dher sara cosmetics things spread ho jayengi.. aur amit ke haath me dher saari books ka bundle girega.. amit toh amita ki itni saari things dekh ke surprised ho jaega...

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ragaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow!!
Never expected I would get such amazing responses!
Ab tum logon ne pressure badhaa diyaa yaar.
Ok first things first, FF= Fan Fiction wherein the characters will be the same from your favorite serial but the situations/story will be the author's imagination.

IF has a forum exclusively for fan fictions, check it out:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_topics.asp?FID=94

guy3 and I are huge Arnav-Khushi (from Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon) story fans. Believe me, there are some amazing stories out there that completely engage you every waking hour and waste your time😆
In fact, I am atleast better, I only come to IF when I login from my laptop (which explains why I dont login over weekends-I hate touching my laptop over weekends!). guy3 toh is almost 24X7 hooked and our favorite topic during lunch is some new ArShi story that either of us found and are reading...

Anyway, enough of FF bak-bak and back to the story...
Thank you again, guys for all your feedback and comments! I ❤️ you all! 😊

I'll update the first chapter either today or tomorrow.

For the diehard and not-so-diehard romantics: this is a rom-com (romantic comedy) and my ideas are from stories I have read and movies I have watched. And since this is my first attempt, I hope you all will be patient with me and provide me frank feedback so that I can learn from my mistakes.

So, see you soon in chapter one!

-ragaya

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lily.lotus.rosy

@lily.lotus.rosy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Excellent FF Gayatri!! Lage raho!!😊

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ragaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 1 Pehli Mulaqaat hai Ya Doosri Mulaqaat hai?!

"Thakur Vidya mandir", the arch above the wrought iron gates proclaimed. "Looks majestic but makes it sound like we are still in school!" Amita quipped. "Well, it is true though, right?" Preeti countered. "This compound has both the school and college."
Jigna pointed out, "Why are you girls complaining anyway? You know our dads. They would never let us stay in a hostel and study and this is the best college we could get within 10 kms radius. Ithink they still would not have agreed to this one if it were not for Atul and Himanshu certifying that this college is safe for us, girls! Or would you rather have preferred continuing in the Immaculate Lady's girls college after all those torturous years at the Immaculate Convent?"
All the others rapidly shook their heads, recollecting their strict, uptight school principal and teachers.
Aarti quickly recovered to put Jigna in a spot,"Jigna, I know you are thanking your lucky stars for getting into the same college as Himanshu but you do remember your parents' condition of finishing college before tying the knot, don't you?" She winked.
"Ya, ya!" Jigna replied and tried to cut further teasing saying," Hey, there's Himanshu! I promised him I'll meet him for coffee at the canteen. See you girls later in class, bye!"

The classroom assignment was displayed on the noticeboard near the administration offices. Needless to say, there was a milling crowd of students trying to look over one another's heads at thelist. "Excuse me, excuse me!" Aarti was pushing through the crowd with Amita and Preeti just behind her ducking, dodging and saying a number of "Sorry!"s as they tried to avoid shoving and getting shoved. "First year, first year, Commerce, Commerce, Commerce...there it is! Room 7C!" Aarti jubilantly declared and they quickly came out of the crowd to hunt down their classroom.

"Imagine keeping the first years so far away from the staffroom! Doesn't it put them at risk for ragging?" the ever-thoughtful Preeti observed while climbing up the stairs. "Arre, it must be intentional! What's college without a bit of ragging, yaar?" Aarti cheerfully consoled her. " Anyway, why are you worried? There would be more boys proposing to you than ragging you!" she laughed as Preeti blushed and hit her arm lightly,"Chup kar, Aarti! Arre, yeh Ammu kahaan reh gayi?" They turned to see Amita had stopped one floor below them and was busy digging into her backpack. Aarti and Preeti doubled back to where she was and Aarti started teasing her,"Ammu, you just finished breakfast at home and lunch ke liye abhi time hai. You are taking a snack break already?" "Shut up, Aarti, I just noticed my bracelet is missing. Pataa nahi kahaan hai. Arre, it was my favorite one, the one with the fairy on crescent moon charm!( https://www.dhgate.com/product/getProductImages.do? act=getProductImages&itemcode=163013534&pid=ff8080813ef41d79013f18ba4b874d22 )Papa-Mummy had gifted it on my birthday last year. They'll scold me for sure!" "Ok, ok, sorry! Lets do a thing. We can go to class and phir baithke aaraam se tere backpack mein search karte hain. Dont worry, usee mein hogi" Aarti consoled her.

Meanwhile...
"Good morning, Thapaji! Aapki family se milke aaye chhutti mein?" Amit and Batuk smiled at the security guard as they crossed the gates. Thapaji grinned back, "Haan, haan, sob theek hai! Agla time hum bolega unko ki tum poochha"

"They never learn, do they? And they expect us to" Amit said annoyed, "Har saal classroom assignment noticeboard pe daalte hain and har saal, all of us crowd around it trying to look up our classrooms. Either they should fix our classrooms to be same every year or they should email us the classroom assignment. This is so frustrating!" Batuk chuckled next to him, "Relax, Padhaaku Shah! We will reach the class in time for the first lecture." "Third year Commerce-7C" Amit said running his finger along the line to confirm, "Chal, Batuk! We have get there before the 9 am lecture starts." They got out of the crowd and started heading towards the C Wing.

"Hey, guys, wait up!" Sanjay called out from behind. "Yeh lo, hero aa gaya" teased Batuk. "Ha, ha!" Sanjay saidsarcastically, "But yeh ajeeb cheez kya hai, Amit?" he said, tugging Amit's sleeve and then, Amit noticed it, some long sparkling string hanging from his sleeve. He stopped in his tracks and untangled it from his sleeve. He looked closely at the chain-like thing in his palm. It was sparkling and had a pendant-like thing hanging from it, "What is it?" Batuk said, "It looks like a girl's
bracelet. Amit, I was just next to you. Tune yeh kab kiya? Aur woh kaun hai?", he teased. "What? What nonsense, Batuk! Someone must have bumped into me in the stupid crowd. How would I know?" He was about to throw it but Sanjay stopped him, "Arre, it looks precious yaar. Why don't you hand it over at the Lost and Found office during lunch break? Abhi ke liye, chalo, we have to get to class on time. What took you guys so long anyway? I was waiting near the bike parking for you guys and didn't notice you had already come here" "This stupid Batuk was late and on top of that, he wanted
to stop at my place for his second sumptuous breakfast." said Amit putting the bracelet in his shirt pocket. "Shut up and where are your athithi devo bhava sanskaar, Amit! Aunty was ready to serve me but you had to rush us here" "Bas bhi kar, Mote and hurry up!" Amit laughed and the trio started bounding up the stairs.

When Aarti, Amita and Preeti finally reached the class and looked in, it looked like anything but the first year class. There were boys and girls seated on desks and chairs either in pairs or groups merrily chatting and laughing. And as soon as they saw the trio, some guys started hooting and whistling. "Hey, look! Juniors khud aa gaye humaare paas ragging karwaane!" One of them said. "Good, we need not wait for the Freshers' welcome party then!" Another commented and they all started laughing. The trio turned around,held one another's hands and started running before they got into further trouble. In her hurry, the ever-clumsy Amita bumped into someone rushing in the opposite direction, "Ouch!" Aarti felt a tug on her arm as Amita abruptly stopped and so, she stepped back to her friend's side and rudely said, "Hey! Are you blind? Cant you see where you are going? Or are you one of those who do this on purpose to find an excuse of talking to a girl? Loser!" That totally rubbed Amit Shah the wrong way. "Excuse me? You should watch it. I know girls like you aate hi ho college shamelessly seniors pe line maarne. You bump into me on purpose and and
blame me instead?" He retorted looking from Aarti to Amita. Amita was already on the verge of tears from losing her bracelet and with nervousness on finding herself in the wrong classroom, that too seniors' classroom! She was afraid to look up and mumbled, " Sorry, sir! We were looking for the first year classroom and I didn't see you coming". Aarti was about to continue arguing," Arre, tu kyun isko sorry bol rahi hai..." but she was cut off by Amita saying in a half-whisper,"Chal, Aarti! Please, lets get out of here" "First year classes are on first floor by the way." Amit called out over his shoulder after having recovered from his initial irritation and having composed himself. Amita, while running down, tried looking back to thank him but he and his two friends had
already disappeared into one of the classrooms.

Preeti had worked it out by the time they had come to first floor, "Aarti, you must have seen 7 instead of 1 on the list. We were already almost in trouble. Imagine if we had entered 7C! And why did you have to be so rude to that guy? He must have been a senior. Ab dekhna, zaroor woh humein dhhoond nikaalega aur rag karega" She was worried. Amita, though upset about her bracelet, had, by now, recovered from her nervousness after the senior had given them a helpful pointer to the right floor. She wished she could have stopped to thank him and said sorry again for Aarti's behaviour.
"Nahi, yaar, he seemed like a nice guy. But Aarti, tujhe bhi na react karne se pehle thoda sochna chaahiye tha. Baat ka batangad ban jaata. Ab chalo, we have to settle down and I need to check my backpack for the bracelet". They entered 1C and found Jigna in one of the benches. "Kahaan reh gaye tum log? I was waiting here for so long!" The three of them walked over and settled down next to her. "Arre, pooch mat! We were in danger of being ragged badly all thanks to Aarti here looking up the wrong classroom." Preeti dramatically exclaimed. Aarti was annoyed, "Arre, sorry, yaar! Ho
gayi galti list dekhne mein. You saw how crowded it was! But that annoying, over-reacting guy! Kabhi mere haath lag jaaye na toh main..." Amita cut her off, "Oh, please, Aarti! You started it. I had bumped into him, na! Tu kyun beech mein aayi aur daantne lagi?" "Yeh lo, madad karo aur daant bhi khao. Oye meri rajdhani, if we had waited for you to speak up and sort out, by now, we would be in the middle with seniors all surrounding us and happily ragging us. Tujhse se toh kuch jaldi hota nahi hai..." "Aur tujhse sab jaldbaazi mein hota hai. Aarti, sorry but I agree with Ammu. You
have been hasty with your actions and words today", the wise Preeti quipped "Fine!" Aarti grumpily crossed her arms and sat down. "Oye, mela bachha! Ok, baba, sorry and thank you for jumping to my defense. Ab khush?" Amita sat by Aarti and hugged her making her reluctantly and slowly smile. "Fine, but you owe me a treat." Amita nodded while Jigna and Preeti shook their heads smiling. Jigna exclaimed, "Ammu, you let her talk you into treating her again. Your dad will run out of business with all your treats!" "Arre chalta hai! Waise bhi I have been dying to try the chocolate boondi laddoo that Dad made. This gives me an excuse!" Amita winked.

Sorry for the delay, guys! This chapter turned out longer than I anticipated. And the dialogues take a bit more time to write down. Hope you liked it. Feedback please😊

Chapter 2

Edited by ragaya - 11 years ago

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AMAN

@grintson

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

kya baat hai gayatri... kya mazedaar likha hai rey... sahi jaa reli hai baap... 👍🏼 maza aa gayaa...maza aa gayaa... waaooo...mind blowing...

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ragaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Thanks, Aman! arre thoda detail feedback do yaar. Did you like this pehli-doosri mulaakaat instead of Bollywood style bumping into each other with books and bags falling?

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urmi

@khushi987

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

wow gayatri Kya likhi ho... Kya imagination...its a chumeswari...
Muje laga ki me koi novel pad rhi hu...super like... Muje thapaji ka role pasand aya... aur Jo fusion tmne likha h ekdam maja aa gYa... amita amit ka pehla meeting Muje bht pasand aya Ek dam nok jhok wali... Kya bat h... plz continue gayatri...

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ragaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: urmi987
wow gayatri Kya likhi ho... Kya imagination...its a chumeswari...
Muje laga ki me koi novel pad rhi hu...super like... Muje thapaji ka role pasand aya... aur Jo fusion tmne likha h ekdam maja aa gYa... amita amit ka pehla meeting Muje bht pasand aya Ek dam nok jhok wali... Kya bat h... plz continue gayatri...

Thanks so much, Urmi! U know, yesterday, I located the 11th July episode and watched it again just to get Thapaji's name😊 and the college name.
Need to give it a rest of atleast 2-3 days now to think about the next chapter.

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