O.S. 'Radha Tu Main Kanha' by Aman(grintson)&Lily

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Radha tu main Kanha

By Aman ( Grintson ) & Riya ( lily.lotus.rosy )

Hello Amitians. This is our first joint attempt to pen an O.S. for U. Please give your valuable feed back after going through it.

Amit is jealous of Siddhant as he feels Sid resembles Amita's dream man. We know already that Amita is the Radha now & Sid is Kanha. But can our Amit Shah let this happen? In the following story let's watch Amit's reaction & action to this newly arrived situation.

Amit contacted with the girl who was Radha but later rejected by Sid. We will refer her as Rejected Radha. Now this dejected & rejected Radha along with Amit had decided to teach Sid ( their common enemy ) a lesson..Reason coz Sid is the love interest of that rejected Radha.

Aur kya khuub Jodi bani hain..kyunki Amit ke liye Sid Kans mama se kam nahi hain to uski love interest ( rejected radha )Amit ki maami hui aur asal mein Radha ji Kanha jee ki maami hain na???😉

Uske baad Ammu aur Sid ne bhi than li ki theek hain..aagar Jung ladna hain to yehi sahi

Ab jung ke maidaan mein Main stage par dono finalist ready hain. Ek taraf Sid aur Ammu toh dusri taraf rejected radha aur Amit.

Jab stage pe utri Amit aur rejected Radha ki Jodi,

Use Amit ke saath chipku dance karta dekh ammu beech mein hi stage pe ja chadhi,

aur boli " hatt re pao kilo ki Radha chhori,

Amit Kanha ke saath benegi sirf meri Jodi.

B.G.

Madhuban mein jo Kanhaiya kisi Gopi se Mile, kabhi muskaye kabhi chhede kabhi baat kare, Radha kaise na jale...

Phir amit aur sid bhi jung k maidaan me jump maari.

Amit to Sid: Aa dekhen zara.. kisme kitna hai dumm... Jamm ke rakhna kadam. O re nachaniya..

Sid to Amit : Hum bhi hain josh mein.. baatein kar hosh mein.. yun na aapne Hot aankhein dikha..kyunki.. kya karun haaye... mujhe Kuchh kuchh hota hai 😳😳 and romantically drools at Amit.

Amit sharmake Sid ke taraf aankhein jhuka ke😳 gaane laga:

Haan pehli baar, haan pehli baar, ek ladka mere haath pakad ke bole han re haan..

Sid to Amit: Pehli nazar me kaisa jadoo kar diya, tera ban baitha hain mera jeeya, jane kya hoga, kya hoga kya pata, iss pal ko milke aa jee le zara.

Amit : Samne yeh kaun aaya dil mein hui hulchul, dekh ke bas ek hi jhalak ho gaye hum pagal..

Tab Ammu Kanha ji ki murti ki saamne gir girate huye aur rote huye gaa rahi

O paalan hare nirgun aur nyare, tumre bin humra kauno nahi, humri uljhan suljhao Bhagwan tumre bin humra kauno nahi.😭

Rejected Radha sings for Sid, Bhala hain bura hain jaisa bhi hain, mera Pati mera devta hai.

A2 in shock -- PATI !!!!! 😲😲

Sid aur Amit ki biwiyan unhe ek doosre se dur le jane ki koshish kar rahi hain par Sid-Amit ko yeh judai manzur nahi aur who gane lagte hain,

Chahunga main tujhe saanjh savere, phir bhi kabhi ab naam ko tere aawaaz main na dunga...

Amit aur Sid apne wives se haath chhuda lete hain aur gaate hain:

Hum bane.. tum bane.. ek duje ke liye

Ammu & Rejected Radha out of severe shock sing We don't know what u say, we don't know what u say

Then Amit & Sid together sing WE ARE MAD FOR EACH OTHER SAMJHE???

Fir achanak stage ke upar tent par kaam karte huye ek bande ke haath se fevicol ka dabba Amit aur Sid ke haathon par gir jata hain and their hands are glued now.

Amit & Sid happily walk out hand in hand.

BG: Wo pehli baar jab hum mile, haathon mein haath jab num chale, hogaya yeh dil deewana, hota hain pyar kya humne jaana, teri aankhon mein jannat basa ke chala, teri zulfo ki chhaon mein chalta chala, tere nainon mein chain, tere lab pe khushi, tujhko hi main mohabbat bana ke chala.

Amit & Sid romantic eyelock & Sid about to kiss Amit, achanak baarish aa jati hai aur dono ke hands chhoot jaate hain..Both got embarassed..maano hosh mein aa jate hain & immediately run from there in opposite directions.

Mean while Ammu crying infront of Kanha 😭 and singing:

Man Mohona, Man Mohona, Kanha suno naa,Tum bin pau kaise chain,Tarsu tumhi ko din rayn..

Amit comes running to Amita. Ammu Amit ko apne pass aate dekh kar pehle toh khush hui par baad mein gusse n shock se boli, "Amit aap WO ho!!??

AMit said " nahi reee ..main to humesha se hi aap hi ka wo hun " Amita Ka Amit" Yeh sab to mera plan tha so that you don't dance with that Kans mama ( Sid ).

Ammu gets annoyed. Amit knife leke apne wrist pe rakhke gaana gata hain:

Amit : Keh do ki tum ho meri warna, jeena nahi mujhe hain marna

Amita : Dekho kabhi na aisa kehna ,dekho kabhi na aisa kehna

Amit : Yehi adaa to ek sitam hain

Amita : Suno tumhe meri kasam hain

She comes and hugs him.

BG: Jeene laga hun pehle se zyada, pehle se zyada tumpe marne laga hu..

Amit is about to kiss amita on lips, but She senses it and shyly turns her back to him..

Amit uske neck se baal hata kar kiss karta hain aur Ammu fir se use hug karti hai & they head towards their car. Its raining heavily .

Amit's car shakes..people gather outside & try to peep in through the window..an elderly lady asks her friend " Rukmani Rukmani, car ke andar kya kya hua, kaun haara kaun jeeta, khidki mein se dekho zara ❤️❤️

Toh aapko ye OS kaisa laga doston zarur btana..

Attention: Presenting Amit and Sid as gay for a while in this OS was purely for entertainment purpose and not to offend anyone. Please do not mind this.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pahle to aman aur lily[riya]...ek bahot badi HUG lelo.🤗..haye merii jaan kya lekha hai yaar...sach me i am serching for a words...Blow Kiss
B.G...was mindblowing...selection of songs was...too good...kudoss to ur thinking...masha allaha......thank u for this O.S
rejected radha...was too good
end me "rukmini rukmini was fantastic...kya baat hai...kaha se aaye ye yaare ideas...
i like this lines more n more..."Amit is about to kiss amita on lips, but She senses it and shyly turns her back to him.."Amit uske neck se baal hata kar kiss karta hain aur Ammu fir se use hug karti hai & they head towards their car. Its raining heavily .

Ammu & Rejected Radha out of severe shock sing We don't know what u say, we don't know what u say

Then Amit & Sid together sing WE ARE MAD FOR EACH OTHER SAMJHE???

this lines were too funny..😆😆😆
This O.S. is SuperDuper HIT ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanaya16

pahle to aman aur lily[riya]...ek bahot badi HUG lelo.🤗..haye merii jaan kya lekha hai yaar...sach me i am serching for a words...Blow Kiss

B.G...was mindblowing...selection of songs was...too good...kudoss to ur thinking...masha allaha......thank u for this O.S
rejected radha...was too good
end me "rukmini rukmini was fantastic...kya baat hai...kaha se aaye ye yaare ideas...
i like this lines more n more..."Amit is about to kiss amita on lips, but She senses it and shyly turns her back to him.."Amit uske neck se baal hata kar kiss karta hain aur Ammu fir se use hug karti hai & they head towards their car. Its raining heavily .

Ammu & Rejected Radha out of severe shock sing We don't know what u say, we don't know what u say

Then Amit & Sid together sing WE ARE MAD FOR EACH OTHER SAMJHE???

this lines were too funny..😆😆😆
This O.S. is SuperDuper HIT ...


Yaar Aanaya first of all..This was just our humble attempt to make u all smile...Dear the way you have appreciated uske liye bahut bahutYou know such appreciation from heart gives us soo much of inspiration..so
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳

Originally posted by: lily.lotus.rosy

Radha tu main Kanha

By Aman ( Grintson ) & Riya ( lily.lotus.rosy )

Hello Amitians. This is our first joint attempt to pen an O.S. for U. Please give your valuable feed back after going through it.

Amit is jealous of Siddhant as he feels Sid resembles Amita's dream man. We know already that Amita is the Radha now & Sid is Kanha. But can our Amit Shah let this happen? In the following story let's watch Amit's reaction & action to this newly arrived situation.

Amit contacted with the girl who was Radha but later rejected by Sid. We will refer her as Rejected Radha. Now this dejected & rejected Radha along with Amit had decided to teach Sid ( their common enemy ) a lesson..Reason coz Sid is the love interest of that rejected Radha. (kya connection nikala👏)

Aur kya khuub Jodi bani hain..kyunki Amit ke liye Sid Kans mama se kam nahi hain to uski love interest ( rejected radha )Amit ki maami hui aur asal mein Radha ji Kanha jee ki maami hain na???😉(haye main toh wari jawa,)

Uske baad Ammu aur Sid ne bhi than li ki theek hain..aagar Jung ladna hain to yehi sahi

Ab jung ke maidaan mein Main stage par dono finalist ready hain. Ek taraf Sid aur Ammu toh dusri taraf rejected radha aur Amit.

Jab stage pe utri Amit aur rejected Radha ki Jodi,

Use Amit ke saath chipku dance karta dekh ammu beech mein hi stage pe ja chadhi,(well done ammu ,that's the spirit)

aur boli " hatt re pao kilo ki Radha chhori,

Amit Kanha ke saath benegi sirf meri Jodi.

B.G.

Madhuban mein jo Kanhaiya kisi Gopi se Mile, kabhi muskaye kabhi chhede kabhi baat kare, Radha kaise na jale...

Phir amit aur sid bhi jung k maidaan me jump maari.

Amit to Sid: Aa dekhen zara.. kisme kitna hai dumm... Jamm ke rakhna kadam. O re nachaniya..

Sid to Amit : Hum bhi hain josh mein.. baatein kar hosh mein.. yun na aapne Hot aankhein dikha..kyunki.. kya karun haaye... mujhe Kuchh kuchh hota hai 😳😳 and romantically drools at Amit. (😲now i'm having a biiig doubt on sid,yeh ho sakta hai! well thought👏)

Amit sharmake Sid ke taraf aankhein jhuka ke😳 gaane laga:( nahiii()

Haan pehli baar, haan pehli baar, ek ladka mere haath pakad ke bole han re haan.. (🤣)

Sid to Amit: Pehli nazar me kaisa jadoo kar diya, tera ban baitha hain mera jeeya, jane kya hoga, kya hoga kya pata, iss pal ko milke aa jee le zara.

Amit : Samne yeh kaun aaya dil mein hui hulchul, dekh ke bas ek hi jhalak ho gaye hum pagal..

Tab Ammu Kanha ji ki murti ki saamne gir girate huye aur rote huye gaa rahi

O paalan hare nirgun aur nyare, tumre bin humra kauno nahi, humri uljhan suljhao Bhagwan tumre bin humra kauno nahi.😭

Rejected Radha sings for Sid, Bhala hain bura hain jaisa bhi hain, mera Pati mera devta hai.

A2 in shock -- PATI !!!!! 😲😲(me too)

Sid aur Amit ki biwiyan unhe ek doosre se dur le jane ki koshish kar rahi hain par Sid-Amit ko yeh judai manzur nahi aur who gane lagte hain,(🤣🤣🤣)

Chahunga main tujhe saanjh savere, phir bhi kabhi ab naam ko tere aawaaz main na dunga...(ore babare)

Amit aur Sid apne wives se haath chhuda lete hain aur gaate hain:(hayeee😭)

Hum bane.. tum bane.. ek duje ke liye(🤣)

Ammu & Rejected Radha out of severe shock sing We don't know what u say, we don't know what u say

Then Amit & Sid together sing WE ARE MAD FOR EACH OTHER SAMJHE???(🤢)

Fir achanak stage ke upar tent par kaam karte huye ek bande ke haath se fevicol ka dabba Amit aur Sid ke haathon par gir jata hain and their hands are glued now.( 😳)

Amit & Sid happily walk out hand in hand. (kya baat kya baat)

BG: Wo pehli baar jab hum mile, haathon mein haath jab num chale, hogaya yeh dil deewana, hota hain pyar kya humne jaana, teri aankhon mein jannat basa ke chala, teri zulfo ki chhaon mein chalta chala, tere nainon mein chain, tere lab pe khushi, tujhko hi main mohabbat bana ke chala.( can't take any more🤢)

Amit & Sid romantic eyelock & Sid about to kiss Amit, achanak baarish aa jati hai aur dono ke hands chhoot jaate hain..Both got embarassed..maano hosh mein aa jate hain & immediately run from there in opposite directions. (lovely demonstration)

Mean while Ammu crying infront of Kanha 😭 and singing:

Man Mohona, Man Mohona, Kanha suno naa,Tum bin pau kaise chain,Tarsu tumhi ko din rayn..

Amit comes running to Amita. Ammu Amit ko apne pass aate dekh kar pehle toh khush hui par baad mein gusse n shock se boli, "Amit aap WO ho!!??

AMit said " nahi reee ..main to humesha se hi aap hi ka wo hun " Amita Ka Amit" Yeh sab to mera plan tha so that you don't dance with that Kans mama ( Sid ).( A ah ! acha toh ye baat hai😈)

Ammu gets annoyed. Amit knife leke apne wrist pe rakhke gaana gata hain:( ooo our hero😆)

Amit : Keh do ki tum ho meri warna, jeena nahi mujhe hain marna

Amita : Dekho kabhi na aisa kehna ,dekho kabhi na aisa kehna

Amit : Yehi adaa to ek sitam hain

Amita : Suno tumhe meri kasam hain

She comes and hugs him.

BG: Jeene laga hun pehle se zyada, pehle se zyada tumpe marne laga hu..

Amit is about to kiss amita on lips, but She senses it and shyly turns her back to him..

Amit uske neck se baal hata kar kiss karta hain aur Ammu fir se use hug karti hai & they head towards their car. Its raining heavily .(awsome)

Amit's car shakes..people gather outside & try to peep in through the window..an elderly lady asks her friend " Rukmani Rukmani, car ke andar kya ky hua, kaun haara kaun jeeta, khidki mein se dekho zara ❤️❤️

( 😳...)

Toh aapko ye OS kaisa laga doston zarur btana..

Attention: Presenting Amit and Sid as gay for a while in this OS was purely for entertainment purpose and not to offend anyone. Please do not mind this.


COMMENTS IN B/W IN BOLD LETTERS


kisi ka pata nehi but for me this was a masterpiece👏 👏jitni talia bajau kam hai

this was lyk a paisa vasool masala film, emotions ,drama,dance ,music, romance,woh😳
kya nehi tha!
this is for u two
🤗
Edited by aphrodite143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanaya16

pahle to aman aur lily[riya]...ek bahot badi HUG lelo.🤗..haye merii jaan kya lekha hai yaar...sach me i am serching for a words...Blow Kiss

B.G...was mindblowing...selection of songs was...too good...kudoss to ur thinking...masha allaha......thank u for this O.S
rejected radha...was too good
end me "rukmini rukmini was fantastic...kya baat hai...kaha se aaye ye yaare ideas...
i like this lines more n more..."Amit is about to kiss amita on lips, but She senses it and shyly turns her back to him.."Amit uske neck se baal hata kar kiss karta hain aur Ammu fir se use hug karti hai & they head towards their car. Its raining heavily .

Ammu & Rejected Radha out of severe shock sing We don't know what u say, we don't know what u say

Then Amit & Sid together sing WE ARE MAD FOR EACH OTHER SAMJHE???

this lines were too funny..😆😆😆
This O.S. is SuperDuper HIT ...


haaye anya.. thank u so much for ur appreciation yaar... means a lot to us... m very very glad dt u enjoyed it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aphrodite143

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COMMENTS IN B/W IN BOLD LETTERS


kisi ka pata nehi but for me this was a masterpiece👏 👏jitni talia bajau kam hai

this was lyk a paisa vasool masala film, emotions ,drama,dance ,music, romance,woh😳
kya nehi tha!
this is for u two
🤗

Hey dearie first of all a biiiggg to U for loving our write up & for your inspiring appreciation!! Your comment " paisa wasool masala film" is our greatest reward!! For patient reading & loving it so much a biig
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Originally posted by: lily.lotus.rosy


Yaar Aanaya first of all..This was just our humble attempt to make u all smile...Dear the way you have appreciated uske liye bahut bahutYou know such appreciation from heart gives us soo much of inspiration..so

haye re meri jaan😉...sach me reding again n again 👍🏼...n smiling.😃...from last half an hour smiling only..😃😃...ye tum dono ne kya kar diya...tussi great ho yaaro...love u BOTH👏👏👏🤗AGAIN i am saying this O.S. is superduper HIT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanaya16

haye re meri jaan😉...sach me reding again n again 👍🏼...n smiling.😃...from last half an hour smiling only..😃😃...ye tum dono ne kya kar diya...tussi great ho yaaro...love u BOTH🤗AGAIN i am saying this O.S. is superduper HIT

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder...so for a beautiful & cute friend like Aanaya just wanna say woh bhise re...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye hoye rabchick mirch masala hawt OS hai reee loved it freakingly great job jaans
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi.. Sorry yr i didn't like it .my amit is a sweetheart darling he can nvr plan against any1 he won't do anythn like that .he lovs me n if i wana leave him he ll let me go. (amita)

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