Written Update 11 Nov

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Hello friends!

How r u all?

Well first of tall I am sorry for the late update.

Secondly m sorry I missed the first section of the story as there was no electricity..

I will update it as soon as I see the repeat telecast as I m not able to see the video over here.


This story starts after the song of akela..

In an Office we can see 3 men talking about last night party n one of them is asking about a girl name Ritu n what happened to her last night and where is she this morning? one of the man replies that she must have load of drinks n they all start laughing..

We see the men working on their table n one of them going to the canteen to have a coffee n come across a girl who is walking n they greet each other, the men says Good morning Ritu n she replies good morning Rakesh n they carry on where thy going.

The next scene we see ritu walking in the ladies washroom, the washroom is a huge one n we see her rectifying her make up n every thing is blurt like someone's watching her she too feels the presents of someone in the washroom n turns to see who it is but there is no one, she continues the make up n turns again when she hears a noise n is afraid n tries to run but the door is locked n the power goes off n we hear ritu saying nahin nahin n then we see the staff of that particular office hearing her scream n running towards the wash room n trying to open the door but its locked the 3 men ( rakesh n his 2 buddies Atul n Bablu, the same one who were talking abt the party in the morning) tells each other that lets break the door n thy see Ritu's body lying in her stomach but her hands n face is turned towards the ceiling, Atul checks if there is somebody in the washroom but they don't find anybody over there n they call the police.

Ranvir is making coffee at his place n we hear savio laughing loudly n ranvir tells him to stop watching the cartoon how many times will u watch the same cartoon n reminds him that he is not a kid anymore n ranvir changes the channel to a news one n savio is objecting n telling him to put the cartoon on. In the news they see the murdered scene of Ritu n hear the news reader saying that this case has left the police upturned n then ranvir says to savio that this is not an ordinary murdered, this must have been done by a shetan. Savio says that fun khatam n duty shuru.

They go to the office and ask every one where they were when they heard the scream

Shreya says she was in her cabin working, atul n bablu says we were sitting over here working n rakesh says that I was in the canteen taking the coffee when I heard n ran to see everyone gathered around the door n then we break the door at that time the power goes off again, bablu finds some candles n ask Atul for the lighter. Ranvir says to savio that something is not right n they see a shadow in the corridor n runs behind him n they are able to see the men who is wearing jail cloths and his number is 320 n then he disappears at the end of the corridor. Ranvir talking to savio that we have to find about him in all the jails in this city.

We see ranvir driving the car n they both remember the road n says that this is the same road when we met for the first time for a mission n thn savio n ranvir jodi become famous. They reach the jail n asked the jailor about kadi no 320 n sees his file n ask him what he was punished for, the jailor says his name was jaggie n he was a serial killer but he used to kill only ladies n he got fasi ki saza, ranvir ask him if there is any staff he was close to so we can knw abt him more, the jailor says I m new over here but u can asked the former jailor who has an antic shop now.

They go to the antic shop n finds the ex jailor over there n ask him that u were close to jaggie n the jailor agrees that we were very closed n used to talk a lot, ranvir ask him to tell something abt jaggie. The jailour starts saying the story that he was in love with a girl called Rachi n after sometimes he found out that the girl loved someone else so in his anger he killed the girl he loved n after that he used to kill all the girls he met n he got his punishment for killing all those girls.

Ranvir ask him whether he left something with u n the ex jailor says yes he told me that u r the only one who I have been close too n this things I want to give it to u before I go, the jailour asking jaggie what will he do with the things n he said that the first thing I want u to do is burn the diary n this bracelet keep it with u as it is closed to ma heart as it was a present from Rachi her GF. Ranvir asks where is the bracelet n the ex jailor says that all this time I had the bracelet but now I don't have as ma assistant sold it to someone n he ask ranvir y u asking ? ranvir says that he thinks coz of the bracelet the murder of the girl has been done n the jailour says that plz find the bracelet as whoever wears it jaggies athma will get inside that person n he will start killing again.

Ranvir comes to the Office where Ritu was murdered n tells everything to sherya that the person who murdered Ritu is among u guys as he knws all ur moves etc. now u have to find that person who is wearing the bracelet n sherya is afraid but ranvir is able to convice her that I m with u n nothing will happened to u.

Sherya Goes to the cabin where Rakesh, Bablu & Atul are working n they ask her what she is doing this late n she says that she have some work to finish before she goes n thn rakesh starts flirting with sherya n thn she notice that bablu has a bandage in his wrist n ask what happened to him n he is uncomfortable while replying, now she sees that rakesh is wearing a long sleeves shirt n wants to see if he is having the bracelet or not so she ask him for a cup of tea n accidentally drops it in his hand n he is furious and goes to the washroom to clean the tea.

Atul says that he is very tired n will work from home n he leaves, n bablu too says that he too must go as its late n leaves too leaving Sherya alone in the cabin.

Sherya is thinking that there is something wrong with bablu n rakesh as they behaved very strangely n suddenly she get a call from rakesh asking her to come to the conference room n ask her not to tell anybody where she is going as its urgent. Sherya is thinking why rakesh called me when he is in the washroom n she thinks that rakesh is the one n he wants to kill her that y he called her in the conference room, she calls ranvir n tells him n ranvir says that don't go in the conference room till he comes there. Sherya is waiting for ranvir n is getting afraid by the events n ranvir comes n tells her to go in the conference room n not to be afraid as he will be behind her.

Sherya goes in the room but nobody is there, she calls rakesh rakesh where are you n I don't like this type of games u playing but there is no answer, we see a man walking behind sherya n puts his hand on her shoulder n in a panic sherya drops her mobile phone n turns to see its ranvir n she says that rakesh is not over here, at that moment we hear the scream n see body of rakesh (the same was as ritu) lying on his stomach but the hands n face is turned. All of the staff remaining runs to the body including bablu but atul is a bit late. Ranvir sees a burn mark in rakesh hands n thinking where did he get this from?

He tells atul to take care of sherya as he is going to the conference room to find some evidence n atul says that he is taking sherya home as she is not ok, ranvir aggress.

In the conference room ranvir finds the lighter which Atul had it while lighting the candles n he knws that the person wearing jaggie bracelet is none other then Atul himself, He tries to ring Sherya to warn her but her mob is in the conference itself.

At home sherya is sitting in the sitting room n is afraid and atul tries to console her that don't worry ranvir will find the killer n he touches her face n says that u have a fever, just relax n I will make the coffee for u, sherya sees the bracelet in his hand n comes to knw that he is the one n is very much afraid n tries to find her mob to tell ranvir but she remembers that she dropped it in the conference room.

She hides behind some shelves from atul but atul finds her when he brings the coffee but sherya ducks him n runs in a room n locks the door.

Atul tries to open it but luckily ranvir reaches over there on time n Atul tells him that I killed rakesh coz he found out abt me now m going to kill u too ranvir. Ranvir n Atul Aka Jaggie has a fight n we can see that atul face changes to jaggie while fighting at last ranvir Conner's atul n was able to take out that bracelet from his hand n atul falls down in a faint. Sherya comes out n says what happens now n ranvir says don't worry atul will be okay.

The End.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you for the updates...

IT will much thrilling to watch,, but i am afraid to watch such serials so i enjoy reading.... 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tasneem, great update as usual. Did you like this episode?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Belle1989

Tasneem, great update as usual. Did you like this episode?



thnx natasha... it was good not bad but if u wanna judge by ma ratings thn it is 3/5 looking forward to see next week epi s the promos shown is interesting😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u welcome😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushavvi

Thank you for the updates...

IT will much thrilling to watch,, but i am afraid to watch such serials so i enjoy reading.... 😆 😆



u welcome yaar,
well its something common for being afraid to watch such type of shows but hope u not afraid to read 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh i was waiting for the update for this show...i missed the begining....thx sooo much...

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