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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Folks! Here's an OS. I hope you enjoy reading it. Its a short one( many instances are implied )
Do leave your valuable comments and likes. 😊
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OS - A queer encounter.
Stars danced over a moonless sky. Thick cascade of woods rustled as unwieldy winds ominously sent shivers and pricked like a sharp knife grazing the skin before piercing itself deep.

Rusty and old, a lone light flickered, casting its white shadiness over a silhouette, in the dark milieu. Velvety words transpired with frightening steadiness, in his low, husky voice, showing their authority.

"I love Shobha... "

He turned to stare at another being, those very eyes that used to shimmer and dance in joy at his presence, her lips conjuring a sweet, contagious smile that would make his heart skip a beat. All those wonderful moments...

"LIES! ALL ARE LIES! YOU ARE LYING VIKRAM! "

Every moment with her was a generous delusion, embracing him in a complex mesh of undecipherable perspective. Like a lone leaf, he drifted apart from his own self, floating away in a sway of melodious yet deceptive breeze of emotions.

Naive and deficient he felt, overlooking her undeniable attitude that easily blinded him to a point where hope and faith shattered into million pieces and feelings became an abysmal vagueness.

Every second, her appearance haunted, scared him, kept him awake. Those memories were a sweet poison, which in gradual time would obliterate any life left in him.

On a strange fateful instance, she was before him.

Convulsed and confused, his petrified mind had almost agreed to give a chance. Another opportunity to a menacing personality who mercilessly destroyed his innocent love. If it wasn't for a chance, he'd have never realised the ghoulish appearance of the woman he loved.

A face he had loved, stood before him. That very face adorned with deceit and grimace.

Seeing her affliction and exasperation of losing him again, he smirked.

"YOU STILL LOVE ME..! "

She was a witch in guise, cunningly manipulating his innocent heart, using it and discarding it away as a rag.

His eyes manifested indignation and annoyance for being a fool in comprehending his folly. His mind constantly conspired innumerable excuses to deny his own heart felt emotions and feelings. Straightforward and simple, stubborn yet loving, Shobha's presence he cared deeply for. Her opinions and talks mattered. Realisation dawned upon him late. But not too late to change. He actualized his elation, his perturbed heart awkwardly chasing after evident emotions he felt. Joy he witnessed when her smile brightened up his dull, unremarkable routines. His perception of perceiving everything that ever mattered to him, changed. Shobha was a channeling force, that regarded his strength to fight his own demons and emerge victorious.

She inched towards him, her eyes burning with a vengeance and hatred of their own.

Standstill, he stared with absolute passiveness. He cared no more of death, life had already killed him once aggressively.

Her thin long fingers rose tracing his jaw line. Her sudden touch sent shivers down his spine.
She whispered. "You still love me... "

"I don't. Accept it."
He chuckled, his voice reverberating in the chilly atmosphere.

Her crooked smile turned to a frown, as her hands closed over his neck slowly tightening their grip, her face turning into a mixture of rage and sadistic pleasure.

"THEN DIE! I murdered Abhay! Now, it's your turn! " she laughed in a shrilly tone." "You are an idiot Vikram! I used you, played with you, still you came back to me. This explains all. Better not disappoint me, again..! "

A flurry of emotions washed his rather inscrutable face. He explicitly knew his mistakes were huge. It was time to make amends.

"Who's disappointing whom? "
He smiled.

She glared with confusion.

In a swift moment, he yanked her hands off him and freed himself from her grasp.
"An opportunist like you deserves a better treatment."

He fleetingly gazed at the camera lens resting on the lamppost, before disappearing in the darkness.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow marvellous os šŸ‘ loved it very much wish it really happens in adhy keep writing more os like this 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just Brillant !! Wow everything was infront of my eyes!! Could visualize it May !! šŸ‘
I really Hope this way she is caught & punished !!

Keep it coming dear !! Something shud click in real

Vikrams sweet revenge & the pain hr kept for many years due to this horrid woman !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shiningstar2014

Wow marvellous os šŸ‘ loved it very much wish it really happens in adhy keep writing more os like this 😳

Thanks dear (what should I call you?) . 😳
I am glad you liked it. Yeah, yeah! I have already written quite a no. of OSesšŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Just Brillant !! Wow everything was infront of my eyes!! Could visualize it May !! šŸ‘
I really Hope this way she is caught & punished !!

Keep it coming dear !! Something shud click in real

Vikrams sweet revenge & the pain hr kept for many years due to this horrid woman !!

Thanks a lot Shanti šŸ¤—
Your comments make me happyšŸ¤—
I so wish they show something on those lines.
Also there's this new article about the impending leap.. I hope Vikram realises his mistake and leta go of his past..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes see the leap is important at this stage of transition as the love which they sowed was in muddy waters floating away but they have grabbed it tight & the soil of foundation with respect trust & understanding b/w Vibha will sow a small shoot with branches of pure love between partners .. I was discussing with Rekha & she came up with the thought that Vikram may never meet sarika at present & ne moves on to see a bright rainbow after the dark clouds vanished & who is sarika to him the isentity face he knew was Madhura Kashyap .. He may go to see Shobha & her mom & the precap may be them there & someone else at Sarika's may be the camera i stalling guy to take back equipment !!

Look at my brains running extra mile..
Also this storm needs to shut & new beginning & hope that scales high in foundation for Vibha!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Yes see the leap is important at this stage of transition as the love which they sowed was in muddy waters floating away but they have grabbed it tight & the soil of foundation with respect trust & understanding b/w Vibha will sow a small shoot with branches of pure love between partners .. I was discussing with Rekha & she came up with the thought that Vikram may never meet sarika at present & ne moves on to see a bright rainbow after the dark clouds vanished & who is sarika to him the isentity face he knew was Madhura Kashyap .. He may go to see Shobha & her mom & the precap may be them there & someone else at Sarika's may be the camera i stalling guy to take A equipment !!

So agree with you Shanti. There is 100% chance that Vikram and Sarika may never meet. Precaps are always misleading, such that they keep the viewers excited.

If Vikram had come face to face with Sarika , he wouldn't have been able to move on ( knowing Vikram's emotional state regarding her)
Oh that cctv guy! šŸ˜†
Thats a possibility!



Look at my brains running extra mile..
Also this storm needs to shut & new beginning & hope that scales high in foundation for Vibha!!

You are not alone! I am eagerly waiting for ViBha track! Can't wait to see them already in lovešŸ˜†


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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG thats awesome May😳
how perfectly u construe Vikram's emotions
hopefully he will forgot his past & MOVE ON in his life 😊
& what a revenge girl 😃 i wish CV's just heist ur idea & we can see this in show šŸ˜†
superbly penned down šŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1


Thanks dear (what should I call you?) . 😳
I am glad you liked it. Yeah, yeah! I have already written quite a no. of OSesšŸ˜†

Hi May I am Sweta I had read some of ur previous Os they were awesome loved them 😳 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written OS
Hope this is how Sarika is caught & punished and Vikram is finally able to get rid of her toxic hold on him.

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