NEW TWO SHOT ON CURRENT TRACK!

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Hey guys i just watched all the episodes of this show and loved it so im writing a quick two shot... hope you guys like it... please do comment... :)

LOVE NIKI :)


PART ONE - SHOBHA POV

Shobha was sitting on the cold, dirty floor of the cell, wrapping herself around with her sari pallu to shield herself from the cold. Possibly not a day had passed since she had felt this cold, not just physically but emotionally too. Her husband had decived her, her mother-in-law wanted him out at all and any costs, and her children. Oh, her poor children! Rehan was ill because he hadn't eaten, Jiyu was crying her eyes out, and her heart, a mother's heart was breaking. She felt helpless, she felt disgusted that she could not be there when her children needed her the most. She was yearning to talk to jiyu once more, just one more time she wanted to hear her little angel's voice. She was shocked to see Vikram here, why had he come? When all her own kin had left her side then why was he here? Why did he even care? But he had done what no other had done he had tried to calm a mother's heart and for that she would ever be grateful to him. Her mind flew back to her daughter's brave face and tears started cascading down her cheeks.
"Chaliye Mam" Said the policewoman. Shobha looked up in fear lest she had to meet any more interrogators.
"Kahan? Kya huya hai?" She asked fearfully. The policewoman smiled, she pitied her condition and her heart went out to the docile woman in the cell.
"Ghabrayi mat Mam, aapko bail mil gayai hain, aap ghar jaa sakti hain ab" She replied. The words were like a healing balm to Shobha, she lookedup unbelievably.
"Kon dilaya hain mujhe bail?" She asked tears of gratefulness flooding down her cheeks.
"Who yahin hain, aapko ghar lene aayie hain woh, aap chalien" She said smiling encouragingly. Shobha stood up and walked out of the jail cell, tears of relief pooling in her eyes. She walked to where the policewoman led her and after signing on her bail form she turned to ask the policewoman where the person who had bailed her out was.
"Who aapki liye bahar intzar kar raha hain" She said. Shobha pulled thesari pallu tighter around her and started walking outside and she saw a man standing facing his back towards her. As he heard her approaching he turned and her breath almost stopped short. Standing there in front of her was the owner of Pinnacle Industries, Vikram Ahuja.
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PART TWO VIKRAM POV:
Vikram didn't know why he had fought so vigourously, so passionately for this woman. Why was she affecting him like this? He had told himself that he was only doing it because of her kids ut when he met her in jail personally, her tears, her helplessness had all touched him in a way which he had never felt before. Vikram Ahuja had then and there decided that he must get her out. He had put it to his mind, and then he had come up with the solution, maybe he wasn't able to prove that Shobha was innocent but he could prove that Samarth was a dirty criminal. Yes, that is exactly what he would do and it would also put Samarth's stupid mother at bay.
He had worked all night, collecting evidence yet when Nani had called, he denied doing any such thing, why did anyone else need to know this? Then he had hired one of the best lawyers to fight his own friend in court. He had got a call an hour ago saying that the court had granted Shobha a bail and that she could go home. He insisted that he be the one to bring her home as he wasn't even sure if anyone would could to take her home. He stood outside the jail, waiting for her arrival and when he sensed footsteps behind him, he turned.
She came walking out cautiously, draped in a stiff sari. Her hair was tasselled and hung in waves down her shoulders. She stopped in shock when she saw him there and her eyes froze on him, tears pooling in them. Through her eyes he read everything, he felt her gratitude all her pain, humiliation and suffering. He felt a strong surge of pity and empathy for this woman, she had faced so many troubles in her life, after all she had loved and lost and now her children were in pain, yet she strived to go on, for them.
"Vikram Sir ..." She said, trying to express her gratitude through her tears. He understood and simply nodded as consolingly as possible.
"Chalo Shobha, mein tumhe ghar chod deta hoon, bacche tumare intezar kar rahe honge" He said, trying to keep the emotion out of his voice. She nodded and sat in the car. He started the car and drove out of the building, as she sat silently.
"Aapne kyun madat kiya mera sir?" She asked all of a sudden.
"Kyun, nahi karna tha, kya?" He asked, hoping to dismiss her question.
"Nahi sir, mera matlab who nahi tha. Lekin aap toh mujhe thik tare se jaante bhi nahi aur aapne mujhe itni badi musibat se bachaya, kyun?" She persisted.
"Maine job hi kiya woh sirf tumari bacche ki liye kiya. Who pehele hi bikhar chuke hain, ab agar unki maa bhi chala jaati toh who toh poori tarah se toot jaati the" I said, finding the most logical answer despite my conscious telling me that it was not this simple. She smiled at my answer, staring out the window, her hands, resting on her lap. I realised soon enough that she must be cold, without her shawl in the air conditioned car and so i automatically switched off the air conditioner.
The rest of the ride was silent, not an uncomfortable silence, rather a comforting one. As we reached the house I saw the eagerness and impatient air in her eyes to see her children. As I parked the car, she hurried outside and I followed suit. I reached out to press the lift button the sae time she did, my hand briefly touching hers. She withdrew her hand quickly and I pressed the button, with a tingling sensation in my hand. As she rang the doorbell and waited I could see the rejoice on her face. Little Jiyu opened the door and upon catching sight of her mother she flung herself into her arms, squealing with joy. Rehan saw his mother and flung at her two. The sight of her caused a small chuckle to escape from my lips. She turned at the sound and I smiled at her. "Thank You" she mouthed while I nodded, walking away with a happy feeling in my heart at last.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg!!! Nikkii 🤗 The no more Ghrina gal! 😉 😆 🤗
So glad to see you here re!
Loved the OS so much! ❤️ 😳 The way you have portrayed both, shobha's and Vikram's condition..their POVs... EXCELLENT! Very subtle and beautiful..
I had a smile reading the OS! Good Job! 😃 🤗
Nancy!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww such a lovely scenes, beautifully expressed by u😊
great work Niki👏 wonderful OS😳
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LOvely work !! 👏 I hope somthing on these lines would be great !!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great OS, hope something similar to appear in the serial.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Omg!!! Nikkii 🤗 The no more Ghrina gal! 😉 😆 🤗

So glad to see you here re!
Loved the OS so much! ❤️ 😳 The way you have portrayed both, shobha's and Vikram's condition..their POVs... EXCELLENT! Very subtle and beautiful..
I had a smile reading the OS! Good Job! 😃 🤗
Nancy!😳


Thanks! Im so surprised u remember me from that other forum 😳 Glad you like it! 😃

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