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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful dear
update asap
loved it 😊
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It is going so well ... the way u r describing the whole story is beautiful ... loved it ... plse update soon :)
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Awesome update.. And pls pm me... When u update..
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

Iam loving this story so much.

Yes most important of all,whenever you send you should send the hyperlink and post the link of the page where you updates the chapter dont send the first page link.

Keepi it up,looking forward to it


Thanks and I will keep that in mind
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Originally posted by: Princessnidhii

beautiful dear

update asap
loved it 😊


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Chapter 2

Chapter 3

My Feelings


Few days later Ananya has her flight to Mumbai. After landing her flight in Mumbai she leaves the airport and heads to the hotel. After reaching the hotel Ananya goes to the reception to check in. The receptionist tells her the room number and gives her the room key. Ananya looks at the key and gives a sad smile and leaves. On reaching the room she sighs and says "Last time this room was yours and now I've gotten the same room" and she enters it.

After freshening up Ananya calls for room service and orders a light meal. After having her meal, she lies on the bed to relax a bit. She keeps changing her posture on the bed until her eyes fall on a side of a wall and she keeps staring at it. Then she says as if addressing Akash "Remember the last time we were here Akash..."

The hotel is shown and then a food court is shown where Akash and Natasha are having coffee together. The convo:-

Natasha: So our flight is in next two days

Akash: Yes

Natasha: So you'll be flying again with that First Officer

Akash: Yes

Natasha: (irritated) I don't know what's wrong with the management

Akash: (Confused) Why?

Natasha: It feels as if there are no other First Officers except her to be your co-pilot. It might also be her plan to trap you in her beauty

Akash: What nonsense are you talking about?

Natasha: But Akash just think about it, there are a lot of other co-pilots but they always choose her for you

Akash: You are thinking too much about it. It doesn't matter to me even if I fly with her. She's just a co-pilot.

Natasha somewhat gets convinced with his words and then she changes the topic

Natasha: Let's not talk about her. Say Akash why don't we go shopping tomorrow as I want to buy some stuff

Akash: But Natasha, you always buy stuff and all and last time also you bought a lot of stuff and you also had to buy an extra suitcase for it remember

Natasha: But this time I won't overdo it I promise

Akash: Okay I'll think about it

Natasha: Thank you I'll decide the time and inform you

Later after finishing their coffee they head back to their respective rooms.

Ananya's flight reaches Mumbai and the crew checks in the hotel. Ananya gets her room key and goes to her room and settles in. After freshening up she orders for room service and later takes a nap.

After a while she wakes up and realizes that she had slept a lot. Then after freshening up again, she goes and opens her suitcase and then sees a document and takes it out and says to herself "Oh God, Mr Sen told me to give this document to Captain Akash and I completely forgot about it". Then she goes to pick the phone but then she notices the time and says "No, it's not a good time to go, as it is late. I better give it to him tomorrow".

Then the next day for change Ananya decides to go to the food court. On the other hand Akash is shown having coffee in the food court and Natasha come there and spots him. Then she goes to Akash. At that time Ananya enters the food court and looks around and spots Akash and Natasha. She plans on going and informing Akash about the document Mr Sen gave her. But suddenly Mahima stops her and takes her away.

Natasha tells Akash:-

Natasha: Hey Akash

Akash: Hi Natasha

Natasha: Akash, I've decided that we'll go shopping today at 4pm

Akash: That's good but Natasha; I don't think I'll be able to go with you

Natasha: But why Akash, after all that planning

Akash: Sorry Natasha, but I've got some important work to do today

Natasha: Leave your work for tomorrow. I don't think delaying the work one day will hurt

Akash: Sorry Natasha, but I can't

At this point Natasha gets angry and says "I don't care Akash. You said that you are coming and I won't listen to anything else. I will come and get you at 4 so be ready". Then she leaves from there angrily. Then Akash too leaves. At that time Ananya returns back to the court and sees that Akash and Natasha are leaving the court.

Later at 3:45 Ananya calls the reception and gets Akash's room number. Then she dresses up and leaves. Akash on the other hand is resting in his room. Then he hears a knock on the door, he opens his eyes, gets up and goes to the door and sees through the door hole that it's Ananya. He opens the door for her. He welcomes her in.

Ananya notices that Akash is kind of restless and asks him "Captain, are you alright?" Akash says "Yes, I'm fine" and says "Why did you come here, anything important?" Ananya says "Actually Mr Sen told me to give you this document" and hands it to him. Akash takes it and says "Thank you". Ananya says "Okay then, I'll get going". Then as she approaches the door. Both Akash and Ananya hear knocks at the door. Natasha says "Akash, open the door I know you're in there." Ananya says "Looks like Natasha is at the door, I better leave" then as she extends her hand to the door handle. Akash holds her hand and moves it away. Ananya says "Captain what are you..." Akash covers her mouth and pins her to the wall. While Natasha keeps knocking the door and says "Akash open the door". Ananya being in this situation gets restless and says to herself "W-What? Hold on! H-Huh! No! Be still my beating heart!" Akash on the other hand looking at the door says to himself "Just leave Natasha, I'm not coming". Then he looks towards Ananya and they have an eye-lock. Natasha says "God, he's not there, I'll not leave you when you come back" and leaves from there angrily.

In the room Ananya unable to breathe pushes Akash away. Akash coming back to his senses moves away from her and says "Sorry". Ananya moves away trying to control her nerves. Then she turns back to Akash and angrily says "What were you doing all of a sudden". Then Akash sternly says "Are you gonna stay here all day?" Ananya feels offended and says "I was about to leave". Then Akash rudely says "If you've done with your business would you just get out". Ananya gets angry and says "Well sorry about that" and storms out of the room. Akash sighs after she leaves.


At that time I was really angry with you that I wanted to break your head but then...

As Ananya walks angrily towards the elevator she says "what the hell was that about" and says "He could've said it in a slightly better way, after all I went all the way to give him the document to his room". Then she puts her and on her face and says "Jeez my face is still hot". Then she suddenly stops and worriedly says "Hot!" Then she feels something wrong. The she says (tensed) "Even if I go back, I'll still be called a hindrance again after all wouldn't I". Then she turns back and walks towards Akash's room and says (worriedly) "it might be my imagination". Then she reaches Akash's room and stops in front of it and says "It might be my imagination but still..." And says "I've felt Akash's cold hand once before" and says "And now it was hot as if it was burning"

Ananya finds the door of Akash's room open, so she enters it and looks for him and as she reaches the bed she get shocked seeing Akash sitting against the wall and he's almost unconscious. She rushes to him and says "Akash" and sits next to him and says "Akash can you hear me?" Then she takes out her handkerchief and wipes out Akash's sweating face. Then she says "I'll go get a doctor, so please hold on". Then as she gets up Akash grabs her hand tightly and says "Stop". Ananya looks at him and he says (weakly)"Making such a fuss... Is annoying". Ananya says "this isn't the time to be saying such things right?" and tries to free her hand. She says "Let go my hand Akash". Then seeing his condition she gives up and sits next to him. Then Akash gets closer to her and Ananya gets uncormfortable then he rests his head on her shoulder and passes out. Ananya again tries to free her hand but she was not able to as Akash's grip was too tight.

Later after an hour. Akash opens his eyes and as he raises his head, he gets surprised seeing Ananya sleeping next to him. Then he sees down and realizes that he was holding her hand and he leaves it. Akash wonders what Ananya is doing here. Then he remembers Ananya brought a document to him from Mr Sen and how he rudely told her to leave and after Ananya left, he turns back and suddenly sees everything getting dark in front of him, he tries to reach the bed but he can't walk as he's already in bad shape. He reaches the wall next to the bed and stops there as he can't move any further and he sits down against the wall.Then Akash says "Did she come back to check on me?" Then Ananya raises her hand and rubs herself as she feels cold and Akash notices it


I didn't know that you were not feeling well at that time, I was just mad at you at that time, but I felt bad about it. But then I ...

At 7 Ananya slowly opens her eyes and says "Akash" looking for him. Then she gives a shocked look and says "I can't believe this! He left without saying a word!?" Then she realizes that she's being covered in a blanket and says (wonder) "Could it be... Akash?" Then she gets up and arranges the blanket on the bed and leaves Akash's room.

Later at 9 Ananya hears a knock on the door of her room and opens it and finds Akash infront of her door. She gets surprised and says "Captain... What are you doing here?" Akash says "If you don't mind can I come in?" Ananya welcomes him in. Ananya asks "Are you feeling okay?" Akash says "Yes". Ananya says "I see that's good". Then Akash says "Ananya, this is for you" and hands her a bouquet of flowers. Ananya gets surprised and accepts it and says "Thank you Captian". Akash says sorry to her. Ananya says "What for?" Akash says "I was rude with you in the evening and I'm sorry about it". Ananya says "It's okay Captain". Akash says "Even after all that you came back for me" and says "Thank you so much". Ananya gets shy and nodes her head accepting his thanks. Then he takes his leave and after he leaves Ananya embraces the bouquet with lots of love.

I did not expect that you would surprise me by turning up at my door with a bouquet. To tell you the truth I really liked it. And looking back I realized that it was the first time on that day that we addressed each other by our names. And I think that from that day I might've started having feelings for you. Then she drifts off to sleep.

TBC

Chapter 4

Edited by saito - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Wow!!!! it's marvelous ...loved it so much ... truly awesome
plse update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Truly amazing and lovely..
Flashback was lovely.
Continue sooonish..
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
THIS WAS SOMETHING MORE THAN AWESOMEEE :') saito wonderful job...i was lost in it..and was getting lost in my airlines momeries :* thnks a looot!
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Awesomeness.Akya moments were aamazing.BTW,what actually happened to aakash?

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