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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey nikhad here! i was so happy to get such feedbacks and love from my first OS that here yudi girl is with her second one! i can't comment or reply to anyone before 24 hours from yesterday dawn for a forum rule! apologies for that! here comes the OS...


this is dedicated to my prettiest lil sissy gullu(Marzan), my soul sister-bestie Antora and my two wonderful friends+lovely sisters Charu and Saranya di <3
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Morning, sun rays fell on her eyes! anannya moved a bit! slowly she opened her eyes! suddenly she realised it was the report coming day.

anannya: areh! tabhi to bolu subha itna khubsurat kyun lag raha hain!she looked beside her! Akash was in chennai, would be back to delhi by evening! yes, anannya was guessing maybe there was a good news coming so she went through a pregnancy test!

anannya: akash ko report ane ke baad hi batayungi! pehle sure to ho jayu! *she said touching the empty akash's side of the bed with a loving smile*

the doctor would inform her after 4pm about the result! so she thought why not to take a walk through the memory lane! after completing all household works and finishing lunch, she sat on her bed with her Wedding and After Wedding albums! she opened them! she felt like a very soothing brezze went through her body! while looking at them she went through some golden flashbacks!

**How could she forgot her Haldi Night! akash was not allowed to come, yet he came from the balcony! Anannya was sitting in front of the mirror while someone from behind hold her eyes

akash: jis ke liye sajh rahi ho wohi na dekhe to kya faida
anannya: akash?!!

she turned around and they hugged**

**Oh! that Jute Do Paise Lo time! she remembered how much sweet her akash was

shefu: Jeeju! paise dijiye varna jute aur di dono hi nehi milegi
akash: are shefu! jute kya mere kapre bhi le lo bas meri anannya mujhe de do!**

**Areh that morning! uff! anannya turned red...

anannya: akash utho! kam pe jana hain dono ko ( she sprinkled water drops from her hair on his face)
akash (with his sleepy eyes) : anannya itna pyaar se bulayogi to phir to tumhare cockpit mein bhi sone ajayu main

and then he pulled her close**

**And that dreamy surprise!
anannya was out of twon and got late coming back! she was thinking what to cook for dinner, just when her man screamed 'SURPRISE'

anannya: akash ye sab?!!

the dining table was full of yummy home made dishes and all her favourites

Akash: agar meri biwi har roj mere liye itna sara khana bana sakti hain to kya ekdin main uske liye thoda sa nehi? <3 **

Suddenly anannya's phone rang! it was the doctor

anannya: oh! 4 baj gaye?!! *her heart started beating fast, she answered the call and then...*

anannya: a...a..aap sach bol...
doctor: haan! haan!congrats! anannya tum maa banne wali ho! :D

anannya was spell bound and did not know what to do! doctor understood that!

doctor: areh! abhi jaldi hamare intelligence officer ko batao ki junior jasus akash is coming!

anannya blushed and thanked the doctor!

After putting the ohone aside she felt there was an untold peace inside her! she took her hands slowly on her womb! someone was breathing there? this thought gave her goosebumps! she became emotional, the feeling was the best feeling ever of the world!

she giggled like the sun and said
anannya: come soon chota baby *as the baby could hear her*

she thought of calling akash then and then but successfully stopped herself at last! she did not want to miss akash's expressions on this!


Finally it was evening! the new would be father was back! anannya was almost running all around in the house with a big smile and he did not have a single clue why she was doing so! he just guessed something good was coming!

anannya:akash tum fresh ho jayo main tumhare liye juice lati hu!

after some moments she came with a glass of juice smiling like a white pearl in the shell and gave the glass to him!

akash: kiya baat hain anannya! kahi tumhe phirse kisi se pyaar ho gaya kya? *he asked naughtily*
anannya: haan! ho gaya aur kisike pyaar!
akash: kiya?!! *fake angry look* kisko apna hospitaal itna pyaara ho gaya?
anannya: jao akash *softly hit him on arms with her hand* hain koyi bohot sweet, cute sa!
akash: jo bhi kehna hospital jane ki packing karle

anannya then took akash's hand on her womb and said...

anannya: woh upaar se hi aa raha hain akash!
akash: jaha se bhi aaye haat pair tod dun...*realised what just happened* ANANNYA?!!! *he was all blank with happiness and felt his heart might come out* SACHME ANANNYA?!!!

anannya blushed and nooded a yes!
akash got emotional! he did not know how to react! akash's happiness knew no bounds! he started almost jumping!

anannya: tum baap banne waale ho akash aur tum hi abhi taak bacche ho hahaha!
akash: are aaj agar chaand taare bhi laana ho to woh bhi layu
anannya: accha agar aisa pehle paata hota to thoda aur bhao kha leti main!

they both laughed and hugged each other!

anannya: congratulations mr. going to be father! thanks akash for making me complete *she was getting emotinal*
akash: *he got emotinal too* you made me complete too love! aur tumhe bhi congrats mere pehle bacche ki hone wali amma!

they both laughed together again and finally thanked their god for the most precious blessing <3
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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow.. It was so beautiful and lovely.
Aww...
AkYa going to become parents.
Both are so happy.
I loved it.
Do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aakash ka expression dekhne layak thha. Woh toh sach much mein kisiko hospital bhejne ke firak mein thha... Ananya must be feeling sooo happy.
Aww...
I loved this OS a lot.
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Flashbacks were too good... Ananya was so happy. Loved it.
akyaholic thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg it was so magical :)
Loved all the flashbacks
Haldi uff <3
And the way he said kapre bhi lelo but give me my ananya I was blushing at this instant
And the morning wakening scene amazing
And yeah he cooked for her how cute :)
Finally of course the main part "chota intelligence office" thiswas the best line ;)
AT last askash's reaction on hearing the news was lovely <3
Write another one soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Lovely
Was waiting to write abt this feelings of akya by anybody in forum
U gave the story
It's awesome n great work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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owww... it was so sweet...
Maza aa gaya yaar...
Flash backs were really good... keep writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was such a beautiful OS.

I was literally imagining each and every scenes and was thinking oh if I would have been Ananya.☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's a beautiful OS chotti... It's likea real life story...how can u write like this?i like it... U potrait ananya's feelings very well... So akya became a family now... Good work keep going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WoW!!!

Such a nice piece!!!👏

I really want more of it.⭐️

That portion where Akash was going to break the hands and legs of someone... was HILARIOUS...I'm still laughing🤣

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