An AkYa FF: An Enigmatic Charm ( Chapter 5, 9/11/14) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am seriously really amazed by the fact that I got so many likes, views and comments and that's all I needed for you guys to know that I will be continuing this. I had written this way earlier than I intended to but due to some spam reason I just couldn't post it, so guess what people, I wrote the entire chapter AGAIN for you peeps! :D. Love ya and I really appreciate it that you guys care so much to actually give me feedback.

Chapter 3:

"You will pay back badly this time. You seriously will" A dark and mysterious voice growled to himself as he looked at a photo. He will make her life a living hell. She shouldn't have done that; she shouldn't have messed and played with his once raw feelings. If he was a toy for her than this time he was better, stronger and powerful than anyone else. He hated her with a passion; she was the only one who could actually make him feel vulnerable and weak with her presence itself. He had to stop giving into his desires.

"Stop it" he angrily yelled at himself. That girl will be the death of him.

But he knew better than to do that. He smirked to himself for a while as he remembered that his dear ol' friend had given someone her photo. And he realized that the someone he was talking about was none other than the Akash Saluja himself.

"If you screw this up even a tiny bit, you will repent in Captain Akash Saluja." He laughed evilly to himself. He knew that nobody could stop him for what he wanted to do.

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The tension surrounded the cockpit so much that even a knife could not cut to justify it. Both of them were suddenly awkward around each other and didn't know what say. They knew that as soon as the person beside him/her would speak they would get into an argument in no time. So, Akash kept his distance to himself while Ananya too was glad that he was not near to hear. They were at quite relief and peace for a while yet couldn't help but steal glances from each other. Both of them, from the corner of their eyes could see the other person looking at them and couldn't help but make the situation more awkward.

(Scene from the show, made minor changes) :-

Suddenly they were alarmed by the aero plane shaking and knew that they had some major turbulence going on that could affect the passengers badly.

Fear clenched Ananya's heart because she knew what exactly she had to do but was nervous if something bad may happen. Akash noticed this and took control of the situation in hand.

He suddenly did something that might have put the passengers in danger or so what Ananya thought. She took a deep breath and started taking the controls on the opposite way of what Akash was taking. The buzzer of the aero plane was constantly ringing throughout which created more panic for the passengers sitting behind.

Ananya started getting angry since Akash was definitely handling the situation in a wrong way because the altitude of the flight should have lowered not heightened more.

"What are you doing, Captain?!!" Ananya asked anxiously, why was he so hell on bent on doing on what he thinks is right? "The altitude must be lowered, why are you flying it higher?"

"That's what you learned right? Fly the plane higher." Akash chuckled slightly while Ananya glared at him. This was one disaster of a flight!

"No, but look according to the case on 7th October, 2008 there was an exact same situation which occurred in flight QF72" She replied pretty panicky since god knew what Akash was planning to do.

Wait was Akash doing this on purpose to kill me? Injure me? To put me back in my place? Wait, what? What the hell is wrong with you Ananya, it is not the time to crack jokes right now was all she thoughts of when suddenly everything was back to normal. Huh?!

"You are amazing First Officer, you remember the date of the case and also the flight no.? Yup, you are dangerous." He replied back in mock appreciation and sarcasm which was clearly dripping out of his words. Was she underestimating him? Woah man, um okay.

"Bu-but how?" She replied back in shock

Akash said nothing and neither did Ananya because she was pissed off at him. No, actually she was angry at herself, how could she let him outsmart her? Where as, Akash on the other hand could not wait to get out of the flight since that First Officer was actually annoying the bug out of him. As soon as the landing ended, Akash quickly took off his coat from the hanger, put it on himself but didn't leave without saying... " Don't you even dare outsmart me."

Was he a mind reader as well? This was the second time he had left her speechless. She closed her eyes, took deep breaths and turned to calm her rage down slowly but casually. How is it that he was the only person who can annoy the bug out of her? Ughh.

She, First Officer Ananya Rawat strongly disliked him, Captain Akash Saluja with a burning passion.

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Okay, that's it guys. Hope you liked it, if you did please make sure to give this a like, a comment and all the good stuff. See you guys soon and also if you want a PM, please please PLEASE sent me a buddy request, I haven't sent out any PMs for this chapter since it is getting extremely confusing. So yeah, leave more suggestions on what track I could take this on and the twists or turns I could give to this story. Peace! ALSO, Have a very happy, fun and a sage Diwali! ❤️

Edited by dreamy_dazzler - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
In the very first flight.,Akya are on edge of their attitude. Very Nice

I wonder if Akash was really angry or he just got annoyed. Ananya is quite stubborn in this story. Its really going to be fun to have them crossing each other's way.

Loved the update, do update soon. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
cool update
wonder wats going on in akash's mind
& yes he surely is a mind reader
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Good going ..!
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome loving it!! Update soon till then love you...muuahhh 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome loving it!! Update soon till then love you...muuahhh [;)]
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Pamper1

In the very first flight.,Akya are on edge of their attitude. Very Nice

I wonder if Akash was really angry or he just got annoyed. Ananya is quite stubborn in this story. Its really going to be fun to have them crossing each other's way.

Loved the update, do update soon. Thanx for pm.


Haha! Yup. Both have huge egos in this story.
You will have to find out 😉Ananya is quite stubborn as well, didn't want to keep it too original either. Glad you find this nice.

Thank you so much ❤️It means a lot to me! Sure i will update it soon. Your welcome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: GORIJOSHI

cool update
wonder wats going on in akash's mind
& yes he surely is a mind reader


Thanks!
Yup, Akash sure is bipolar 😉
Our Akash surely does have super powers!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Atiyu

Good going ..!
Please update soon


Thanks! Glad you liked it... 😛
Surely will do
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Akira925air

Awesome loving it!! Update soon till then love you...muuahhh 😉


Thanks!!!! Love ya too 😉❤️

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