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Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

Thank you nab,will reply to your comment later😊

Originally posted by: keshiya

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Ohk! I noticed I was the first one to comment well reserve it :p But yeah! I'm happy :D
Way to go girl! You penned it so well. Every emotion were justice to its character.
Natasha very well describes the definition of 'Spoilt brat'. Him being her boyfriend or whatever he is to her doesn't really mean you have him at your toes. Being jealous or insecure of having suspicion of someone in your partner's life doesn't mean you can cross the line of humanity. How could she talk to a person like that and to top it a pilot of your company? No wait she never talked, she demeaned Ananya, spitting ill words at her. The nerve of this girl, she can get into one's nerves at times.
She so deserved a earful from Akaash. *applause*
Had a pleasure reading your story. Looking forward to read more from you in the near future. ;)

Regards,
Dhwani

Originally posted by: Live-life

So you finally posted it! I am so happy you did. 😳

Yes I finally posted it...I am happy too..And happy to see that you finally posted the comment😊

I just loved it to every word. So Natasha is irritated about Ananya getting close to Akash huh? Well...you just gotta deal with it girl! haha.

Hmm...yes even in the serial she is...and I am sure there will someday be an outburst...Ananya getting close? Basically even Akash is getting close to her ...I mean as friends ,they are in a comfort zone orelse that Get a Grip would have not been there😊

I liked the whole concept of Natasha-Akash-Ananya. It was a good base to build on. Hayee. Akash was lost in the thoughts of Ananys...that was definitely one of the smiling moments. I am glad you put their thoughts in italics...it's easier that way.

😆 He is actually thinking about all the events of that day..which definitely involves Ananya so yup indirectly..

And then Natasha barges in. And there she is all over him again. Wow that girl is fast. And she even said that Akash loves her? Like seriously...well you can't blame her either...because Akash may not have said yes...but he didn't say no either. Yup mixed signals.

Yup why not? that is what she thought.Yup it became a mix of things,whatever happened is not anyone's fault as such.

But then he said he only considered them as friends. So...yeah...he should be clear about about what he wants. 😆 And then comes Ananyaaa! This is where the real action starts. Muahah...

Huh yes that is where everything becomes deadly..and all those taunts come in.😕😆

She was there for work and Natasha went all Haywire on her...well...she got jealous that much was obvious...but I liked how Akash gave priority to Ananya. It sounds mean but I was like...in your face Natasha. 😛

😆 Akash gave priority to important work dear.Remember when Natasha came she said "imp.work" so that "imp.work " of Akash was a sarcasm.

And then Natasha...vents out all her anger on Ananya...Poor her...what was her fault? She almost cried...That was sad...But I liked how she collected herself together at the last moment and replied back. You Go Gurl!

Yup she had to reply back😉

Wohooo Akash held her back! Haaaiilllaaa. That was cool. And I absolutely loved his reply back to Natasha. It made her leave the room. Woppiieee! I am so mean...😆

Yup..Akash can do that...you remember he once shouted at Natasha in the serial.Ofcourse she had to leave the room..The person who's room it was ,was not supporting her so how can she be there😊.

Haha. Ananya...was surpsrised at the mention of them being friends! Well this is just the start baby. And what do you know he was still holding her hand when she said to let go. Lol! That was sooo cute! I am serious and another Smiling moment. 😃

Yes I wanted to put these smiling moments..not too cheesy..Yup she was surprised at him calling her his friend😊.Yup this is just the start.

I just loved the description in this one and the concept was beautiful. Trust me...you are talenteddd! 😉 I loved this to every word! And dude you seriously need to continue this! I am in LOVE with AKYA! ❤️

Thank you soo much..it means a lot.Sure I would love to continue..I am really happy with the response😊.

Please continueee! and a suggestion from me would be..to make the updates longer..a bit!

😳

Longer? 😆 Sure will try to make it long if possible😊.

Do pm me when you do!

Love ya Muskiii!

Sure I will PM you🤗

Love you too Nab😊

Nabi...😳🤗

..😊..🤗

Originally posted by: usaonly

Very nice story can't believe it your first OS. Hope you continue soon.😊

Originally posted by: khadupam

Good start
It's nice

Originally posted by: rev4eva

A very nice OS for a first attempt... Hats off to you gal... It's really nice to see how Airlines brought out the writer in you. I'm looking forward to reading more from you dear...

Originally posted by: Live-life

Nawww Muskiii! I love you reply to my comment!

😆 Well I am glad you like it. Haha.

I am really happy that you a re going to continue this. So excited!

😃