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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

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Posted: 11 years ago

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keshiya

@keshiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

~Edited~
Ohk! I noticed I was the first one to comment well reserve it :p But yeah! I'm happy :D
Way to go girl! You penned it so well. Every emotion were justice to its character.
Natasha very well describes the definition of 'Spoilt brat'. Him being her boyfriend or whatever he is to her doesn't really mean you have him at your toes. Being jealous or insecure of having suspicion of someone in your partner's life doesn't mean you can cross the line of humanity. How could she talk to a person like that and to top it a pilot of your company? No wait she never talked, she demeaned Ananya, spitting ill words at her. The nerve of this girl, she can get into one's nerves at times.
She so deserved a earful from Akaash. *applause*
Had a pleasure reading your story. Looking forward to read more from you in the near future. ;)

Regards,
Dhwani

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Bossqueen

@Brokengirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

That's lovely, alot of intense emotions just as it would probably be in the show with Ananya.

I wanted to ask, how do you go ahead posting a story like this one, do you have to take special permission from anyone? because I've written one as well. Would love to know thanks

And looking forward to more 😉

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Brokengirl
That's lovely, alot of intense emotions just as it would probably be in the show with Ananya.
I wanted to ask, how do you go ahead posting a story like this one, do you have to take special permission from anyone? because I've written one as well. Would love to know thanks

And looking forward to more 😉

Hey thank you so much😊 means a lot ,Hmm..Intense as this would probably be some issue,I always wanted to write Ananya-Natasha-Akash..and especially the faceoff..

Uh..no you don't need to..If there is some violence in the story you can mention as a Disclaimer.

Forward to more😆..sure will try to😊

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Lepzy

@Leprechaun

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+ 23

Posted: 11 years ago

I guess you should continue this.

Nice one...

PM me if you continue.

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Edna_Philip
I guess you should continue this.
Nice one...
PM me if you continue.

Thank you so much..it means a lot..Hmm..I really want to continue..I will PM you surely then😊

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnkitaKaran
Very nice...

Thank You😊..It means a lot

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Live-life

@Live-life

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

So you finally posted it! I am so happy you did. 😳

I just loved it to every word. So Natasha is irritated about Ananya getting close to Akash huh? Well...you just gotta deal with it girl! haha.

I liked the whole concept of Natasha-Akash-Ananya. It was a good base to build on. Hayee. Akash was lost in the thoughts of Ananys...that was definitely one of the smiling moments. I am glad you put their thoughts in italics...it's easier that way.

And then Natasha barges in. And there she is all over him again. Wow that girl is fast. And she even said that Akash loves her? Like seriously...well you can't blame her either...because Akash may not have said yes...but he didn't say no either. Yup mixed signals.

But then he said he only considered them as friends. So...yeah...he should be clear about about what he wants. 😆 And then comes Ananyaaa! This is where the real action starts. Muahah...

She was there for work and Natasha went all Haywire on her...well...she got jealous that much was obvious...but I liked how Akash gave priority to Ananya. It sounds mean but I was like...in your face Natasha. 😛

And then Natasha...vents out all her anger on Ananya...Poor her...what was her fault? She almost cried...That was sad...But I liked how she collected herself together at the last moment and replied back. You Go Gurl!

Wohooo Akash held her back! Haaaiilllaaa. That was cool. And I absolutely loved his reply back to Natasha. It made her leave the room. Woppiieee! I am so mean...😆

Haha. Ananya...was surpsrised at the mention of them being friends! Well this is just the start baby. And what do you know he was still holding her hand when she said to let go. Lol! That was sooo cute! I am serious and another Smiling moment. 😃

I just loved the description in this one and the concept was beautiful. Trust me...you are talenteddd! 😉 I loved this to every word! And dude you seriously need to continue this! I am in LOVE with AKYA! ❤️

Please continueee! and a suggestion from me would be..to make the updates longer..a bit! 😳

Do pm me when you do!

Love ya Muskiii!

Nabi...😳🤗