New Ts -Shuddh Desi Romance..updated FINAL PART on page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii forumites..
This idea came to me so Just wanted to kno ur opinion about this..
Would u all like to read an os(might be a ts) entirely about Ratri romance..?? It will be purely Ratri..ka romance.
Let me know...
If I get sufficient response I will pen it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Of course I am in for it




Missing Your Updates at U Me Aur Hum...
Hope ur exams get over fast.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa




Missing Your Updates at U Me Aur Hum...
Hope ur exams get over fast.. 😊



At the moment I just can't think more
Only medical things are coming out
I will definitely join u guys soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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me too super excited.of course want it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ya sure...waiting eagerly for this...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sure dear,RaTri romance is always welcome 😉
Plss do start sooner !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Of course annikaa
Plz continue I just love it

Waiting for ur update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07



At the moment I just can't think more
Only medical things are coming out
I will definitely join u guys soon




😆

come soon...with ur awesome ideas. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1:

Raghav had been in Mumbai for more than 2 weeks.While Trisha had been in Delhi itself.Raghav had actually left for a single case for just 4-5days but that had got extended due to another case.Trisha had lately been busy with a case in Delhi.Both of them missed each other and spoke daily but only for few minutes as both were really very busy.

Raghav returns after 10 days.He directly reaches the office from airport, he cant wait to meet Trisha.These 10 days were like a decade for him.When he reaches he sees Trisha he walks towards her.Trisha greets him with a brief hug."Kaise ho...mazaa aya Mumbai mein.."
Raghav.."Mumbai khoobsurat city hai lekin phir bhi wahan khoobsurati ki kami hai."winks.
Trisha smiling.
Trisha-"Ab tum aa hi gaye ho toh please get back on your paperwork. Aur inn dono Mumbai waale cases ki report bhi tumhe banaani hogi.Okay.I think you should get going.Main bhi chalti hoon chief ke saath meeting hai.."
Raghav looking at this workoholic lady with this belief..looks like she dint miss me at all.
Gets on his work.

Sometime later:Trisha's cabin.

Raghav enters to find a Trisha with papers all over her desk.He nods his head "iska kuch nahi ho sakta.."
"Hi Jaan.."
"Raghav main busy hoon",withou looking up.
R-"Tumne realise bhi kiya main 10 din ke baad aaya hoon..."
T-"Ofcourse...Raghav...waise tumne lunch kiya..?",looking up at him...
R-"nahii..
Trisha..hand him over a packet which contains 2 rolls."khaa lo..tumhe bhook lagi hogi.."
R-"Aur tumhe..."
T-" maine brunch kiya thaa toh pate bhara hua hai."
Ragahav looking annoyed "Trisha kya tum meri patni hoo...I mean tumhara pati 10 lambe dinno ke baad wapas aaya hai aur tum kaam mein busy hoo ,tum mjhse theek se mili bhi nahi.."
Trisha gets up and hugs him.."offo Raghav...Tum bhi naa, tum jaante ho kitna sara kaam pending haii..."
(They had got married a month back and immediately after thy had comeback from honeymoon Rghav had been sent to Mumbai)
Raghav still looking the other way.."Acha hota main mumbai mein hota.."
Trisha looking at her dramebaaz husband.."Raghav...I love you..." kisses his cheek. "Ab kaam hai toh iss mein mera kya kusoor?"
Raghav still annoyed.."hhmm"
Before going he pulls her into her arms ..
Trisha.."Yeh kya kar rahe hoo koi aagay toh..
R-"Toh kyaa...maine apni biwi ke saath romance kar raha hoon."
Kisses her on her cheeks..gives a peck on her lips and leaves before she starts lecturing him.
Trisha..I love you Patidev"

After sometime Trisha decides to check on Raghav.
(She had purposely finished all her work early so that she colud spend the evening with him.)
When she goes she find him on a call.
Raghav on phone
"Hi preeti..kaisi hoo?
Acha abhi se hii mujko miss kar rahi hoo...smiles
Dont worry main jaldi se waapas aane kii koshish karoonga..
Arey mera bas chaltaa toh main mumbai mein hii rehta lekin wo meri boss thodi kadoos hai..har waqt kaam kaam karti hai..he laughs..
Ok promise.
Arey haan baba main pricess ke saath flim bhi dehkoonga aur tumhe shopping bhi karaunga.pakka.bye.

Trisha jealous.Looks at him very angrily.Goes to him..
"Maine ghar jaa rahii hoon. Bye."
Before he can ask any questions she leaves.
Ragha at once understands she is angry and realises that she might have heard d conversation.
Smacks his head.
"Lekin Trisha itni jaldi.."Realisation dawns over him.He remebers how she was working since morning.
He quickly finishes his work and leaves to spend time with his beautiful wife ,who would be a hot volcano at present.Somewhere in his heart he feels very happy to see her possesive and jealous side.
Smiles and leaves.

P.S.
Hope u all like it..
Became a little longer so this will be 2 shots.
Romance coming up in the next part.
Please do like and comment.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update sweetie...
So they got married a month back and had to be seperated for 10 days...hmmm ...bichadne ke baad milne ka mazaa aur hi hota hai...
But yahaan to workaholic patni aur shararti pati...kya hoga in dono ka...

Interesting Annika...there is another character...to make Trisha jealous..👏
Waiting for the next part dear😊

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