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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Friends !
I am here with a poem i wrote last night and dedicating it to Manisha, our own " braveheartdoc " !!!!

I wrote about RaTri and their feelings that came to my mind of a scene where they have misunderstood each other and now craving to talk and be with each other ! I have tried it and have name them as :

Shoni and Shona !!!!

Shoni is miles away from me, she is here but i can't touch her
Shoni is the loveliest being i have ever met, but today i am the ugliest to her.

Shona is not here, and i am so alone.
Shona will be here, this is to me very much known.
I know he will come back and hug me tight,
I know he will never let me sitting in hide.

Shoni, i love you AND pls forgive me,
I know my mistakes are not worth even to be count.
Shoni, pls come back to my life, i need you my love,
You have a lovely and kind heart, i know you won't let me have a wound.

Shona, i know you are and will be here for me
I want to have you back to me.

Yes Shoni, pls forgive me and i will never repeat myself.

Shona and Shoni are inseperable, and met again as ONE !
The love is so pure, the beauty lies in their meet.
The care and concern are there, and this is what looks so sweet !


Hope you have liked it ! Manisha, this is for you and for your pure heart Sweetie ! I have no other means to say thanks for whatever U have done for me 🤗

Pls LIKe and Comment, thanks and loves ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a awesome poem babita .
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Awww... that was adorably sweet
Loved it ❤️
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Now this is Fantabulously Awesome... ⭐️👏

Babita... you wrote this... Wow... !!!
I am impressed dear... 👏
Beautiful wordings... so close to heart... so serene a beauty of emotions... n RaTri emotions are very well told... !!! Loved it... !!!!
What a dedication dear... .⭐️ Shona n Shoni for RaTri... Alluring enough... !
Manisha... Hats Off dear... You truly deserve this... ⭐️👏

God bless you both... !!!
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IS THE WORD... ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Babita, it's too sweet 👏
Lovely poetry of RaTri with new names given to them. Loved the names - shoni and shona!
What a lovely dedication Sweetie to the other Sweetie Manisha ❤️🤗

The scene you have taken is too emotional. And Shona and Shoni are truly craving to meet each other, as you have said! What wordings 👏 What a presentation ⭐️
Loved the way you have bring in the expressions of the lovers and their happiness when they finally meet, cos they are Inseparable!!!

Luv ya dear 🤗
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Aww such a cute poem it is... Love it a lot Babita.. Pls keep on writing... Love u a lot... Hats off to you...
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Thanks Babita, Thank you so much for this dedication...😊
awww its so beautiful...so lovely words you have chosen to present a very romantic scenario for our own RaTri...👏
I just loved it dearie...you are a real sweetheart...please keep writing dear...
I loved it...really...👏
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