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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone here I am with my new poem on RaTri...this time I've tried to present Trisha's feelings for Raghav...hope you all like this one too...


EHSAAS

Jab tum hote ho mere aas paas

Duniya haseen lagne lagti hai

Zindagi ki har khushi

Apni si lagne lagti hai

Na jaane yeh kab hua

Kyun hua...kaise hua

Jaanu main bas itna hi

Tum ho mere dil ki dua

Tere har dard ka mujhe hai ehsaas

Teri har khushi hai mere liye khaas

Mere dil ki bas yahi chaahat

Tere dard se tujhe mil jaye rahat

Tera har gham guzre mujhse hokar

Har khushi mujh tak pahunche tujhse hokar

Jaanu main tere dil ka haal

Tumhe bhi har pal hai mera hi khayal

Yeh jo hum dono ka naata hai

Shabdon mein bayan nahi kiya jaata hai

Hum dono ki hai soch alag

Mijaz alag...andaz alag...

Phir bhi hote hain jab hum saath

Adhuri nahi lagti koi bhi baat

Hum dono karen ek duje ko poora

Rahe na koi sapna adhoora

Koi aur yeh samajh na paaye

Judi hain hum dono ki raahen

Mere dil ki sun lo pukar

Is dil par hai sirf tera adhikar

Mere dil mein jagah sirf tere liye

Tum ho bane sirf mere liye

Janti hu main sirf itna hi

Kar lo jatan tum kitna bhi

Door mujhse reh nahi paaoge

Pyaar ki dor se bandhe chale aaoge

Karu main usi din ka intezaar

Jab tum karo apne pyaar ka izhaar

Tab tak har kadam hu main tere saath

Chahe din ho ya ho phir raat

Wo subah kabhi to aayegi

Jo hume ek kar chali jayegi

Hum dono rahen sada saath saath

Thame ek duje ka haath


The End

Written by Manisha...in love with RaTri...

Sorry Uma I didn't know you had difficulty in understanding hindi poems...next time i'll try a RaTri poem in English...please try and read this and please try to bear with me till then...love all of you...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its too good manisha👏👏⭐️ wow it perfectly express trisha's feeling towards raghav i loved ❤️it , words are perfectly used infact it was awesome . Thankyou sooo...much dear
🤗 ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome poem dear... ⭐️👏
Loved to read Trisha's feelings for Raghav... so intense n true... !
Love has engrossed both of them... but only one speaks up at a time n that in the heart... I loved how you have expressed her views of her solace in the union with Raghav... Love possess a beautiful feeling in this poem... !
Simply beautiful... ⭐️👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the new poem dear .will comment soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Trisha's heart out ❤️
Beautiful and a lovely poem Manisha 👏👏 So romantic and full of love for raghav.
Loved the lyrics so expressing the love of Trisha for RaTri and her confession. The wordings tell how she is confident that he too loves her and can't be away from her.

The determination of being together in good or bad, day or night is just awesome 👏👏
Loved it, loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a awesome poem manisha. you have expressed Trisha's feelings for raghav soo wonderfully. loved the wordings soo much .thanks for such a awesome poem manisha. you write such awesome poems
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love this poem a lot Manisha... Trisha s expressing her feelings for Raghav... this poem s excellent... Hats off to you...pls keep writing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEKER

Its too good manisha👏👏⭐️ wow it perfectly express trisha's feeling towards raghav i loved ❤️it , words are perfectly used infact it was awesome . Thankyou sooo...much dear

🤗 ⭐️


Thanks a lot Lavanya, love you for your lovely words...mean a lot to me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Awesome poem dear... ⭐️👏

Loved to read Trisha's feelings for Raghav... so intense n true... !
Love has engrossed both of them... but only one speaks up at a time n that in the heart... I loved how you have expressed her views of her solace in the union with Raghav... Love possess a beautiful feeling in this poem... !
Simply beautiful... ⭐️👏


Thanks a lot for the appreciation...it really motivates me further...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Trisha's heart out ❤️

Beautiful and a lovely poem Manisha 👏👏 So romantic and full of love for raghav.
Loved the lyrics so expressing the love of Trisha for RaTri and her confession. The wordings tell how she is confident that he too loves her and can't be away from her.

The determination of being together in good or bad, day or night is just awesome 👏👏
Loved it, loves ❤️


Thanks a lot dear, glad you liked it...I can't express in words how motivating your words are for me...loves to you...

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