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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start Tasha 👏👏
Lovely first anniversary celebrated with full fervor ! RaTri looked so happy to have each other in their lives !
Beautiful to see them so happy and close while Raghav doing every surprise for Trisha !
Loved how he did not tell her about his knowing about the anniversary and then surprised her at the midnight and the morning was so loving !
Loved to see them so happy and full of laughs together and inseparable !
Lovely to see them at the office and the whole team together celebrated their lovely day !
The lake scene was mesmerizing enough to take me to the RaTri land ! Beautiful ambience and the dance and then the gift of the world for Raghav !
Today they are so happy to spend a year with each other and the coming happiness is awaited as they will be waiting for their first child.
But there is a role to be played by the destiny ! That's scary and vulnerable.
Will be looking forward for that. Thanks for this story Tasha. ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Huggies tight and loves 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So this was the first part hope you all like it and sorry if there mistakes it's My first try to write such stuff. Pls share your views soon.

There was no mistake done dear ! Truly awesome 👏👏 Keep going !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really loved it Tasha, this was totally mesmerising. I felt totally lost in their love and when this part ended, it left me craving for more. I wished this never ended, so beautiful it was.
The way he surprised her at midnight was so romantic. Today they were celebrating one year of togetherness and he wanted to make each and every moment special for her.
The way he prepared her favorite breakfast was so so cute, the entire team celebrating their special day, they all are like a family now.
The lake side scene was awesome, cute, romantic and beautiful in every sense. The gift she gave him and the way they both are eager to welcome their first baby in their lives... So much expected and heart touching, but the storyline you have chosen is very heartbreaking. Obviously they don't know what destiny has planned for them. Hope Raghav is able to bear that loss and get back his love soon. I can't see them away from each other for too long.
Please update soon. You are just so good, I wonder what were you waiting for till now my dear?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wao tasha i 👏👏 love the first part of the story,it was too, romantic ❤️ wao it was too good 👏👏
i have imagined each and every seen of your story wao the candellight dinner with soft musicand in front of a lake raghav and trisha dancing together wao very romantic and lovely seen . Thanks tasha for such a lovely story please update soon,eagerly waiting for next part🤗🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a lovely start.
Raghav as usual irritating Trisha with his pranks acting like forgetting there marriage anniversary and surprising her by wishing midnight. The arrangements he had done for her the tent, the couple table, heart shaped cake and there masti with cake after that. So cute.
Raghav calling Trisha as a rose so romantic. He did his level best to make there anniversary the best her favourite breakfast prepared by himself and then in office party at mace donalads.
The beautiful date at river side the dance there outfit it was so awesome. Now she gave him the best anniversary gift. She is pregnant. But feeling sad as destiny had to intervene in theses beautiful couple's life
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for liking the update. Will reply to everyone individually tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww Tasha...love this part a lot... Aisa laghi nehi raha tha ki yeh tumhari pahli story hain... Raghav and Trisha's first anniversary... RaTri are playing with cake like kids..nd the best surprise gift s given by Trisha...Abhi se thora darr lag raha hain... Donno what trouble s waiting for them... Waiting fr the next part... Nd tnku soo sooo sooo much for the romantic part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks Shania uma manisha babita and lavanya for liking my first story .thanks for accepting the story inspite of my mistakes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Awesome start Tasha👏👏

Lovely first anniversary celebrated with full fervor ! RaTri looked so happy to have each other in their lives !
Beautiful to see them so happy and close while Raghav doing every surprise for Trisha !
Loved how he did not tell her about his knowing about the anniversary and then surprised her at the midnight and the morning was so loving !
Loved to see them so happy and full of laughs together and inseparable !
Lovely to see them at the office and the whole team together celebrated their lovely day !
The lake scene was mesmerizing enough to take me to the RaTri land ! Beautiful ambience and the dance and then the gift of the world for Raghav !
Today they are so happy to spend a year with each other and the coming happiness is awaited as they will be waiting for their first child.
But there is a role to be played by the destiny ! That's scary and vulnerable.
Will be looking forward for that. Thanks for this story Tasha.⭐️⭐️⭐️
Huggies tight and loves🤗❤️

thanks babita for liking the story babita .really I didn't expect such a good response .I was really nervous after posting this update thanks for liking this update soo much .thanks for liking the anniversary celebration of RaTri. I planned to give some happy moments for RaTri before starting the sad part .Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

<font face="Arial" color="#3300ff">So this was the first part hope you all like it and sorry if there mistakes it's My first try to write such stuff. Pls share your views soon.</font>


There was no mistake done dear ! Truly awesome👏👏Keep going !

thanks dear .Will continue soon

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