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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

pls read my story yu na Rutho Hume.it's my first RaTri story

Will definitely read it dear and will review soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Az07

Welcome back Ananya
U r missed so badly
Coming to update I liked the beginning part were they all are at a dinner along with Neha. Nice to see some team bonding and personal life of these Agents. Trisha was so jealous and somewhere she was deeply hurt by raghav's behaviour. That's why she left just like that saying its suffocating here for her. She was being so obvious but fact is that she can't help it no one at her place can. It's normal. I liked to c her behaving like a normal person
Raghav and Trisha knew each other so well and Neha is amazed by this fact
I liked the way Trisha handled the men who misbehaved with her she is right she knows to handle this kind of people. But the most lovely part is Trisha saying ' tum usse Baath Karlo Shaadi karlo muhey Kya?' Even Raghav was stunt he never expected that. It was so clear that it was affecting Trisha and the way he made her accept it is so romantic. the best part is when Raghav asked do you like me? Trisha said no I love you and the kiss 😳
The title gives me a different vibe Dosti ya pyaar does that mean Trisha has to choose between her friend and love? May be I am wrong
Update next part soon
Also if possible please create an index of ur stories you a plenty of them

Thanks Uma for such lovely words, I too missed you all. The meaning of the title is in second part but till then you have to wait. Will be soon back with second part. Will review to your stories. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Such a awesome update dear really loved it soo much. It's was such a awesome confession os .Loved to see their the personal life of our agents.all of them went for dinner and Trisha brought her friend neha with her.loved to see a jealous trisha to see raghav taking to neha and ignoring her .They both know about each others likes and dislikes. It was such a cute scene really loved it a lot . Liked the way trisha slapped the man ...the RaTri confession was sooo cute. The RaTri kiss scene was soo cute. Thanks for such a wonderful update dear .missed u soo much, glad you are back
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: babita..

Nice update Ananya 👏👏

Full of jealousy, frustration and hurt for Trisha 😳
Loved how Raghav knowingly / unknowingly talking to Neha with smiles on looking at Trisha's changing jealous faces.
Liked that they both know each other's likes and dislikes.
I could feel Trisha hurting and leaving the table. But all got into it's place with this act of her 😉
The bad guys were shown the path with Raghav's presence only and one slap of Trisha.
Liked their cute convo and the confession ❤️ Raghav got her beautiful kiss

Jealousy prevailed and resulted in confession, awesome 👏👏
Ananya loves ❤️

Thanks babita, its my pleasure that you like the story. The second part is more cute and light romantic and will give chupke chupke pyaar wali feeling till then wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEKER

Awesome story Ananya ...😊 wao i just love it...👏👏⭐️so cute Trisha is feeling jealous after seeing Raghav with neha and Raghav...😡he is busy with Neha...! ignoreing Trisha's feelings...owww poor Trisha.

and specially i love the seen where Raghav gave hero type entry to save his princess 😳 and asking her whether his presence affect her and she loves him or not. Trisha angrily saying NO to him sooo...cute
Eagerly waiting for the next part sweetie, please update it soon dear...😊
Love you dear❤️🤗

Thanks for such a lovely comments. Second part is more interesting and romantic will update soon , I didn't visit forum for a long time so I don't know your name. Please let me know your name.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ananya sorry I couldn't review in details today..will do that definitely by tmrrw... Actually I s writing the last part of my story so got a bit tired and late...slight viral also. Really sorry for the delay.
But for your convenience, me and Uma have made our story index so that you can easily go through ones you missed...
Hope everything is fine with you now...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Ananya sorry I couldn't review in details today..will do that definitely by tmrrw... Actually I s writing the last part of my story so got a bit tired and late...slight viral also. Really sorry for the delay.
But for your convenience, me and Uma have made our story index so that you can easily go through ones you missed...
Hope everything is fine with you now...

No problem dear, take your time. Thanks for making such a effort uma and manisha, I will post review on your stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Such a awesome update dear really loved it soo much. It's was such a awesome confession os .Loved to see their the personal life of our agents.all of them went for dinner and Trisha brought her friend neha with her.loved to see a jealous trisha to see raghav taking to neha and ignoring her .They both know about each others likes and dislikes. It was such a cute scene really loved it a lot . Liked the way trisha slapped the man ...the RaTri confession was sooo cute. The RaTri kiss scene was soo cute. Thanks for such a wonderful update dear .missed u soo much, glad you are back

Thanks dear for your precious words, Hope you will also like the second part which is quite romantic and flirtatious. Will soon post review on your stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww love the update a lot ananya... Love to see a jealousy Trisha... Trisha nd Raghav know each other so perfectly... Trisha just couldn't bear the conversation between Raghav nd neha... Confession part was sooo romantic...I like the part most where Trisha said that she doesn't like him but she loves him...
Love it a lot dear.. Waiting fr your next story nd again welcome back dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
First of all sorry for being late Ananya..
I just loved how you created the atmsphere where jealousy and frustrations of Trisha were so evident and Raghav was enjoying her expressions.👏
Hmm so they both know each others' choices so well and also about their dislikes.
She felt suffocated as she couldn't see him with anyone else and went outside...😉
She gave a nice and apt reply to the person flirting with her...how dare he...😉
The way he came close to her and she gave in to his proximity and then the confession and the kiss...lovely dear...👏👏👏
Loved this part Ananya...waiting eagerly for the next... thanks..

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