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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Such a nice update,

Raghav was so shocked that Trisha is getting married with someone else.

I thought that Raghav almost lost Trisha but thank god it's tejal wedding. Trisha is so angry with Raghav, it is justified.

For a minute she scared him too much that she will not wait for her.

Raghav got relieved that she wait for him. He will definitely won her heart but it's not easy to do so.

Now about the case,

The case sounds interesting and Raghav asking Trisha for honeymoon. I could imagine Rajbir and Bikram faces what a shock? But Trisha handled it nicely.

So next part is going to be romantic and full of mischief and flirting.

Please update soon.

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Shaina744

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awsmmm update dear... Trisha's anger was really justified... Raghav left her for his mission without confess his feelings for her but Trisha had waited for him... This shows how much she loves nd believes him... She could not accept anyone in the place of Raghav! so now RaTri s going to disguise as married couple... Eagerly awaiting for next part... Update soon... Nd tnx a lot dear for this amazing part 👏

Edited by Shaina744 - 9 years ago

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Awesome update dear... I read it some time back. My duty was quite busy.. Will try to reply soon, it may take some time, I'm very tired today... Sorry for the delay...hope you understand...

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Awesome starting Uma,,,, ⭐️👏

Raghav had to see this day as what he did ... the consequences were abt to come to him this way..

THe marriage of Trisha to someone else made him thinking of his life dead n gone... he almost had lost Trsiha forever...

But he tried his best to avert the scene.. ! He rushed n for the first time drove so fast not to let Trisha marry ... But she was so fuming that she did not even respond to his confession... n left him crying n bewildered... !

Loved how her mother pacified him n told him the truth of her sis' marriage... he was relieved but felt guilty after knowing how Trisha suffered all these years n was going thru mental trauma...

His guilt made him think of her n he fell for her once again... 😉

Ppl taked abt her n she avoided them... the same time he was at guilt...

I liked how her mother asked him to win her back n promise her that he will never leave her again... !

Now... he is at the office n back as an agent... ! Loved to see him meeting every one n even Trisha n asked for forgiveness..

But more liked how Trisha responded... 😳 Why wud she forgive him so soon... only for taking her for granted as always.. ??/ No .. no this time,,,, !

So the case needs to be go on...

N Raghav is all settled to play hubby to Trisha n landing to that resort as a HM couple... Time to watch out how he will win back her or at least will try his best to..

Romance n comic scenes are in the cue as i hope../

But wanna see RaTri scenes n Trisha taking hell of the time to forgive Raghav...

after all... how dare he... 😉😳

Very nice starting Uma... Loved it n enjoyed while reading n writing abt it too...

Thanks,,, !

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Hi Uma 🤗

I loved the starting and the way Raghav came back after taking revenge from Vidooshak. But is he really dead ??

Now his visit to the CBI. Learning about Trisha's marriage was a jolt to him and her rushed to her home only to ask her not to marry someone else. Liked how he was crying and was feeling so helpless and rushed to her.

Looking at the stunning Trisha made him loving her but Trisha got more angry and left him to cry and lost.

Her mother did a lovely job of telling him the truth and even taking promise from him that he will never leave her again. The past that she told was so shattering of Trisha. He felt so guilty that he felt responsible for what she is suffering today. The tensions, turmoil, pressures from home, taunts from relatives. Everything he felt responsible for.

And now he is determined to win her back with his love and make her the old Trsiha who used to smile and laugh with him.

The case seems very interesting and tough. But at the same time Raghav has a chance to win her back. Disguising as a couple and going to the Honeymoon resort will given him more chances to be with her and ask for forgiveness. He will be able to manao her in the last.😳😉

But the way things take place will be the time to watch and enjoy 😃

Uma, i will be waiting for those cute and RaTri moments when they will be so close but won't be able to go ahead in love as Trisha is full of anger.

Thanks and hugs for this beauteous. Loved it. Loves ❤️

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

First of all sorry for being late...

Started nicely with Raghav coming back after 3 years and the reason why he left cbi and went away nicely unfolded... well presented...surely some stories are meant to be incomplete... just hope he is actually dead...this time he should not come back into their lives again...

Raghav thinking about what would have happened to Trisha over these years, how would she have reacted after he left like this... and the thought that vidushak could not be caught and that was his punishment for hurting Trisha... just shows how much he loves her and cares for her...Lovely👏

He getting the shock of his life when he went to the cbi office... he must have been shattered to hear this... and the way she recognised his voice without even seeing her... the depth of her love has made her so attached to him that she didn't need eyes to recognise him but just her heart does everything for her...

The way she reacted was totally justified... i too stand by her when she decides to not give in so easily so that she is not taken for granted in future...

But i also felt like crying with Raghav when she told him that the marriage would definitely take place.

How relieved he would have been when he came to know that Trisha is not getting married...

Felt so much for Trisha when her mother told him what she had been through when he was not here, she almost lost herself to him and his memories and could not smile since a long time.

But i absolutely appreciate how her family supported her at this time as they didn't want to lose her...

She not forgiving him in office as i think that inside she wants him to manao her, she deserves that for her self respect and for the turmoil she went through...

They deciding to go undercover as husband wife on honeymoon... expect the next part to be full of pranks and lots of romance...

Waiting for the next and final part eagerly...

Thank you for a lovely story...

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Got a bit busy with work will soon comment to the replies
Teaser
Raghav saw Trisha opening her sleeping pill packet and when she was about to consume it he threw it away from her hands
Trisha shouted: what the hell Raghav? Iske Bina Mein Kaise So Sakthi hoon?
Raghav: Aaj ke baad tume yeh pills lene ki Zaroorath nahi hai mein hoon na tumare Saath
Trisha: tumara koi Barosa nahi hai aaj hoga kal Kahi aur chodke chali jaogi mein is pills se Kush hoon
Raghav: nahi Tum aaj ke baad woh nahi looungi aur mein Vaada karthi hoon Tum uske Bina aaram se so jaongi

Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Sucha nice teaser, so Raghav and Trisha sleeping in one bedroom 😉. Poor Trisha takes sleeping pills to avoid stress and sleep. Raghav is so caring for her. Please update soon.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

such an emotional teaser Uma... really touched my heart... Raghav and Trisha together and he realising the psychological stress which he put her into and trying to bring her out of that stress and the need for medicines... i just loved it... waiting eagerly... please update soon...

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: 1973deepak
Sucha nice teaser, so Raghav and Trisha sleeping in one bedroom😉. Poor Trisha takes sleeping pills to avoid stress and sleep. Raghav is so caring for her. Please update soon.

Yes Raghav and Trisha had to share a room as they are undercover as a honeymoon couple
Trisha had gone through a lot of emotional plight during these years when Raghav suddenly disappeared so she had become dependent on these sedatives for normal pills. Raghav wanted her to bring back from that trauma he caused to her heart

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