Ratri os : The Casino Part 3 final part updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
wonderful update. really loved it a lot .aww the RaTri lifting scene was soo cute thank so much for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Az07

Such a lovely update
Ratri as a couple & Raghav protecting Trisha was such a lovely scene
' Tumari weight Kitna hai' & lifting her all of a sudden was the most lovely part
' Tum Itna Bhi Halki Nahi Ho' was hilarious I could imagine Rajbir & Bikram's shocked face seeing them like this
Continue soon

Thanks and Rajbir was shocked as Raghav's hand on Trisha waist and they are too close to each other, this brings feeling in Rajbir's mind that something is between them.
Uma Please update first part of your story 😳
Edited by 1973deepak - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks and Rajbir was shocked as Raghav's hand on Trisha waist and they are too close to each other, this brings feeling in Rajbir's mind that something is between them.
Uma Please update first part of your story 😳


Can v get a scene were Rajbir tease Raghav & Trisha towards the end or confront Raghav about his feelings for Trisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07


Can v get a scene were Rajbir tease Raghav & Trisha towards the end or confront Raghav about his feelings for Trisha

Yes, we will get a scene were Rajbor and all will tease Raghav and Trisha in the last.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When I read in this story about Trisha's short black dress this pic of Aahana came into my mind

She looks hot! Isn't she?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

When I read in this story about Trisha's short black dress this pic of Aahana came into my mind

She looks hot! Isn't she?

Yes she look gorgeous in this dress that's why our Raghav was mesmerized seeing her and can't see anyone else with her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
I just want a suggestion that I should end the story by showing Trisha and Raghav together after they express their feelings or simply like normal case ending with some teasing which will bring them more closure 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

I just want a suggestion that I should end the story by showing Trisha and Raghav together after they express their feelings or simply like normal case ending with some teasing which will bring them more closure😳



I prefer ending them as a couple
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

In the room

Trisha-"oh no hume kuch bhi karke Rajbir aur Bikram ko bachna hoga. "
Raghav-" yes Trisha hum unhe kuch nahi hone denge par uske liye hume in logo ki baat manani hogi"
Trisha nodded in a positive manner and they move out of the room and surrender themselves.
Person with a gun in his hand- Tum dono ko boss ne bulaya hai chup chap chalo aur koi hoshiyaari nahi samjhe.
Trisha and Raghav was on their gun point and was moving towards the casino. Suddenly Raghav stopped and started acting as he had a severe pain in his heart.
Trisha - "Are you ok Raghav"
Raghav(placing his hand on left side of the chest) -"I think its heart attack aahh.. "
Person-" yeh sab natak band karo aur chup chap chalo"
Trisha saw Raghav's eyes pointing towards his left side of the pant where gun is placed. Trisha come closure to Raghav and take out his gun and point towards the person.
Trisha - "move back aur koi hamare peeche nahi ayega get that."
Raghav-"Bikram aur Rajbir kaha hai"
Person - "neeche wale godown me"
Trisha and Raghav move quickly to grab the lift.
Person - "pakado un dono ko varna boss hume nahi chodenge"

In the lift

Trisha - "ab kya kare vo definitely hume pakad lege"
Raghav-"no I don't think so"
Raghav suddenly stop the lift in the middle between 4th and 5th floor
Trisha - "Lift kyo roki"
Raghav - "vo log ground floor par hamara intezaar kar rahe honge par hum direct lift se nahi jayege. We will use staircase."
Raghav move towards stair case and Trisha followed him
They were crossing the 3rd floor and they listen some steps coming from both side up and down
Trisha - "ab kaha jaye"
Raghav think a little bit and hold Trisha's hand tightly and jerk her to the corner and lean on her by placing his right hand on the wall and left hand on her waist.
Trisha - "kya kar rahe ho raghav.. leave me"
Raghav hold her more tightly when she tried to struggle
Raghav bring her face more closur to her and whisper - "we don't have any other option instead of this."
Trisha understand what raghav want to say and paced her left hand across his hairs and right hand on his chest. They were so closed thst Trisha's lips was touching Raghav's cheeks.
Person-"dekho aj kal ke youngsters kahi par bhi shooru ho jaate hai excuse me apne kahi ek ladka aur ladki ko bhagte dekha hai kya "
Raghav move his hand in negative manner.
When they leave Raghav remove his hand from Trisha's waist and leave her freely but Trisha was feeling shy and embarassed.
Raghav -" let's go Trisha

In the casino

Raghav - "Rajbir, bikram kaha ho"
Trisha - "Rajbir"
Person wearing black jacket came and stand infront of them
Raghav-"kon ho tum aur vo log kaha hai"
Person removes his cap
Trisha - "mr. jaiswal aap"
Mr. jaiswal - "ha me aur maine hi mara hai un do couple ko. Muche pyaar se sakt nafrat hai so unhe mar dala par ab tum dono bhi maroge kyoki tum bhi ek doosre se pyaar karte ho hena.
Trisha -" tum pagal ho gaye ho kya Rajbir aur Bikram kaha hai"
Mr. Jaiswal - "tumhare sath vo do officer ha ha ha..."
He clapped and his boys lift up the curtains where Rajbir and Bikram was tied with a rope in a glass chamber.
Mr.jaiswal - "is chamber ki chabi mere pass hai aur isme bas 15:00min tak ki oxygen bachi hai so agar apne sathiyo ko bachna chahte ho agent raghav to yeh gun uthao aur Trisha ko shoot kar do and Trisha tum yeh gun utha ke raghav ko shoot kar do.
Raghav and Trisha was looking at each other and lift up the guns and come closure to each other.
Mr. jaiswal - "koi akhri icha agent raghav"
Rajbir and Bikram was continuously banging the walls of the chamber and refusing Raghav and Trisha to do that.
Raghav-"last time Trisha se kuch kekna hai"
Mr. jaiswal - "very nice keh lo apni premika se"
Raghav came near to her and blink her eyes and said "I love you par hum dono is hi janam me.."
He was about to continue and they both shoot about 9bullet continuously till bullets get over.
Raghav-"par is janam me sath honge. "
Mr. jaiswal and his boys were encountered at the site.

In the CBI Headquarters at 8:30pm

Trisha and Raghav was still in disguise
Rajbir -" thanks raghav and Trisha humara to vaha dum ghut jata agar tum dono time pe nagi ate"
Trisha - "after all the case was exhausting so Raghav take a break"
Trisha's phone ranged and she leave the room to attend it
Rajbir was staring at Raghav
Raghav-"kya ho gaya Rajbir tum mujhe aise kyo dekh rahe ho"
Rajbir-"yeh tumhare right chin par yeh mark kaisa"
Swati - "Raghav yeh to lipstick ka mark hai"
Raghav panicked and remembered that this mark is of trisha
Rajbir - "yeh mark kaise laga and most important kiski lipstick ka mark hai yeh"
Bikram-"aur vaise bhi tumne humbataya nahi hai ki kon ladki tumhe pasand hai
Raghav was totaly embarrassed and Trisha entered the cabin and saw All of the members laughing and giggling
Trisha - "kya hua itni hasi kyo a rahi hai"
Raghav-"Trisha tumhari lipstick ka shade bohot dark nahi hai. (he scratched his lipstick mark) dekho choot hi nahi raha hai and Bikram subah answer to diya tha maine"
Bikram - "kab diya tha tumne"
Rajbir remembered that raghav said Trisha's name and said "vaise tum yeh tissue paper lo iski tumhe zyada zaroorat hai aur agar mark nahi dikh raha to Trisha will definitely help you akhir jo lagata hai vo mitata hai chalo Bikram, swati hume chalna chahiye"
Trisha was blushing and remembering the moment
Raghav-" so kya meri madad karogi "

Hope you all will like it and review upon it.
Edited by 1973deepak - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
wonderful update dear loved it lot

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