Tere Mere Darmiyaan Ratri os updated on pg 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Wao...awsm story... RaTri sceans are awsm nodoubtly... Trisha's sister Tejal...sooo cute name... Raghav said meri Trisha.. Sounds soo romantic ❤️ Nd the scean where Trisha said 'mujhe pata tha tum zaroor mujh tak pouchoge aur harbaar k tarah mujhe bachaoge' this scean shows how much she loves nd believes him...she kept the Rose as her first gift from Raghav... 😳 outstanding creation.. Want more stories on RaTri from you ...tnx fr your story 🤗

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

pls write more on RaTri your stories are simply awesome read some on the QH forum they are awesome

Originally posted by: Az07

That's so sweet of you
I never knew u followed QH
I have started another story on Ratri may be able to post by day after tomorrow

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

I followed QH till AsYa death after that lost interest .wow will wait for your new story

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome story maam really loved it ...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Raghav tried to brush away his fears. He composed himself.

Though he consoled Tejal he himself couldn't stop getting worried for trisha. The memories of his past came back. Once again he felt scared of loosing someone close to his heart.

Before leaving the house he just couldnt stop himself in front of the pooja room for praying for Trisha's safety.

These lines said so much that for me or you... Raghav is for Trisha N vice versa... ! I liked him worrying for her... though his obvious mind will find her safe.. but his conscious mind is fearing her life.. ! Well written n expressed his feelings for Trisha.. ! ⭐️👏

How much ever he tries to show courage outsid it's obvious that he will get worried for her after all he has fallen in love with her. And moreover it's only she whom he has in his life now whom he can think as his own.

Raghav: trisha bahuth acha khana banathi thi?

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Raghav stopped while he was crossing dining table. He could see trisha had neatly arranged the dishes for lunch. He moved towards the table. He opened the dishes. He could smell the aroma of tasty food.

Raghav: waki mein trisha acha khana banati thi khushboo bahuth achi hai.

Rajbir: ha raghav mujehey toh lagtha hai hume ek baar khalene chahiye. Apni boss ki haath ka khana khaney ka saubhay har rooz thodi na milti

I liked this scene... He for the first time comes to know abt Trisha being a good cook... as he has always teased her on this matter.. ! I liked more when he smiled over the food,, n later in her room calling it a Library itself... ! Raghav is touching a fact n feeling the presence of Trisha while knowing her hidden part of life he never knew.. ! Loved the way you have put in the teases n smiles during the tense times.. ! Obviously Tejal had to feel bad.. 😳

Yes trisha always makes his amazed & surprised. That's why he has fallen for her. And yes he has only seen her as a professional women now when he has seen her personal life how responsible & dutiful person she is makes him fall for her even more. Her mere thoughts make him smile that's natural and for tejal she don't know raghav personally and how his nature is so she felt bad.

While searching through her books raghav got a red rose from one of them. He remembered giving a red rose to trisha after clearing his suspension during zorino's case. He smiled & kept it back

Love is at the both ends... just that no one speaks or tell that what they both mean for each other... Gorgeous ... !!! ❤️

Trisha is very much reserved and interovert person. She never opens up about her feelings but it's a fact that she has fallen in love with raghav deeply. She never voice it out. We can't expect her to take the first step. It should be raghav doing that and his past is stopping him from confessing his feelings for her.trisha is a simple person so that rose given by him matters to her a lot.

Raghav: trisha kuch research kar rahi thi aur apni laptop mein usse related notes bhi banathi thi. Mein padtha hoon.

Hamari desh mein har rooz ek police station mein atleast ek ladki missing complaints register ho jatha hai. humari desh mein ladki ya har field mein ladko ko mukhabla karthi hai. Par ladkiya kai bhi jagah safe nahi hai. Iss missing ladkiyo mein 95% ladkiya aaj bhi missing status mein hai. Woh sirf ek ladki nahi. Kisiki beti ya behan ya biwi bhi hai. Kiski puri duniya ho sakthi hai. Kanoon ki haath kabhi kabhi bahuth choti hoti hai"

Lovely...Felt what a great n selfless mind was thinking of saving the girls.. A very good issue you have raised here Uma,,, ⭐️⭐️

I liked Trisha's thoughts.. n the way Raghav got the clue.. !

Trisha being a proved and responsible officer do work on such issues. And how can a fact stays away from raghav ? It's an ugly fact that women are still not safe in our country.

The agent's eyes made her realise that along with her these girls are also kidnapped. She knew she cant panic. She need to deal with this situation somehow. She not only have to save herself but also these girls & also she has to reach the hands behind this.

⭐️👏

And so bravely she did that... She not only saved all the girls... but locked the man n the driver.. n tried to face the culprits... She knew that Raghav will come... she knew that he will save her.. ! Her heart was telling her this... !

Trisha is the most matured, practical & composed one in the entire Cbi team. That's why she is the boss. She knows to deal with situations calmly. And he's her love and faith that n raghav gave her strength to do her duty even when she is kidnapped and trapped in a women trafficking racket

I am sure meri team muhj tak bahuth jald pahujayegi. Muhej un pe poora barosa hai. Aur tum log apna khayal rakhna. I am sure tum log safe ghar pahujayenge. Yeh meri colligue agent raghav ka number hai. Jab tum log pahujayega iss number par contact karna.

She did it all so well... ! Well in time n never panicked.. Bravo... !!! hats off to her faith in her team,,, !!!

She do trust her team a lot she know there capability

Trisha wanted to kick him & run away. But she couldn't even move. She closed her eyes tightly. Suddenly she heard a gunshot. She opened her eyes only to see raghav standing with his gun. She could see that he was clouded with anger. The guy was lying down in front of her wincing in pain as he got a bullet shot in his hands.

Raghav came near him and beat him hardly. He was going on beating him. The guy was shouting in pain. Even when he started bleeding raghav didn't stop beating.

Raghav: tumari himmat kaisi hui meri trisha ko haath lagane ko. Tume mein mardaloongi.

Do i have to say anything Uma... 😳😉 His love made him angry... But in any other situation too he wud have reacted like that.. ! But wud have never said " Meri " to anyone else.. ! 😛

Loved it.. !

Trisha was drugged and almost going to get sexually assaulted. Witnessesing this not easy for Raghav. As she is the women he has fallen in love deeply. So obviously he will go mad and his love and rights on her came out naturally as meri trisha.

Raghav: ha bahuth. Kya zaroorth thi uss ship mein akhele rukhne ki. Life boat mein uss ladkiyo ki saath kyun wapas nahi aayi tum? Aur kisne kaha tume yeh sab heropanthi karne ke liye. Agar waqth par mein nahi aayi toh usne tume.

Raghav took a deep breath.

Trisha hold his hands.

Trisha: kya sirf tume adventeurous bane ka haaq hai. I think ab tume samjh mein aayi hongi ki Jab tumne meri ek bhi baath nahi sunkar apne jaan khathre mein dali meri kya haalaath hui hongi.

Beautiful... 👏 Today i feel they both have confessed... ! N Raghav looked like a lover here who is shocked n worried inside out for Trisha... ! Holding the hands n talking ... eyes spoke n did wonders... I can assume that... ! Awesome.. !!!

How much ever fearless committed officer he is towards the end of the day he too is a human. So fear is natural especially when it someone whom u r in love is in danger u tend to forget ur duty responsibility we only the person to be safe.

Raghav: ek insaan kisi ki puri duniya ho sakthi hai. Jab tum mili muhejey laga ki meri poori duniya wapas mili.

Very well said,,, ! Today he is relieved to find her back... today she is relieved to hear all this from him... !

It was a realisation for raghav indeed what trisha means to him. He can never lose her. After so much happened he has to confess who she is to him & trisha is revealed as she too was waiting for this moment for a long time.

i apologise if i made any mistake. This is my first attempt in crime series.

Uma,,, if this is your first attempt in crime series... then i must get up from my chair n applaud for you... 👏👏 ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

Very well written the plot... very well woven the crime scenes... n very well placed the twists with Raghav finally finding his life.. !

Keep writing more... this story has moved me so much.. that early morning me reviewing here... N sorry for being late.. i was a bit occupied with work.. n other forums... ! 😳

Thanks... ! ⭐️👏

Thank you so much yes it's my first attempt in crime series. And thanks a lot for such a detailed review that shows how much effort u have taken and read the story. Really I don't have words to thank you for such a beautiful review