RaTri SS : Black End!! Chapter 3 on Page 21 - Page 17

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks Amreen for this wonderful update. The update gives the story twist, Raghav's intelligence was shown through decoding scene. I love the paneer tikka scene, Raghav can cook food. The words like sweetheart, darling, baby etc used by raghav for Trisha shows their love. Plane hijack past of raghav was showing his bravery.I am really glad that DNA report were negative. Each character was well portrayed. The mystery of word-BLACK is still left I think this is some what related to the title of the story. The children were so scared and were missing there parents but at the same time strong due to their believe that their parents will take them out from this problem. Trisha and Raghav reached Alipur and know about the garage... I am sure that next part will be interesting and waiting for Trisha 's dangerous avatar *fingers crossed *😊

Thank u so much for such a lovely review!!
It gives me immense pleasure to see u guys liking this story so much... plz keep loving like this!!
And yes... BLACK has been revealed in chap 3...
Hope u like the twists... plz read n tell me 😊
And for dangerous avatar... well sorry but u need to wait a lil more 🤣
Lots of love
Amreen

Originally posted by: SanaaMalik

Ammu yaar you r amazing I'm eager for the next bit I can't wait forTrisha's new avatar I know it will be amazing I hope you carry on writing ..
😃 Ammu r I wait Trisha's avatar know will be I you writing

Thanks a million sana...
Loves ❤️

Originally posted by: Az07

As usual a great update
I feel so bad for the poor kids
Trisha is so heartbroken & helpless. She used to be strongest among the entire team. Now it's not our Agent Trisha only a mother & that's absolutely how every mother reacts FB scenes are awesome & loved the way how the case develops

Thanks Uma... She is vulnerable as a mother but as an officer she will soon emerge as strong again!!!
Stay tuned 😉

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

ammu tu agent ban ja yaar tu to raghav se bhi intelligent hai

Thanks yaar... par mai medicine me hi theek hoon 🤣

Originally posted by: Shaina744

At first thanku so much...fr the story... Bohot tang kiya tujhe sachme...for that I'm really sry... Kya karoon ab itna interesting story likhegi to 2nd part padne k lia tang to karna padega ...ths part s really amazing... The code has impressed me...wao...tujhe to Agent Raghav ka writter hona chahiye tha...nd bengan ka varta.!!!!!I don't like bengan ka varta too...paneer tikka padkey mere muh main paani aa raha tha...yameee... Raghav's angry wala look was really awsm...Tnk god wo DNA match nehi kiya...bechare Rish nd Reha...2dn se bhukha...waiting fr a mother's dangerous look..and after reading your story I have to say that 'main Teri haire jabri haire jabri fan ho gayi) [collected from your tweet]

Thanks sweetie...
Muaaahhh... Thanks for so much tareef 😳 😃
Am so happy that u guys found the mingling of flashbacks and the present nice...
Hope u like the next one too...
Thanks again... ❤️

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update ammu loved it a lot so the terrorist grp has kidnapped Raghavs kids cause of him their hijack failed .it's soo sad na ki sirf apne boss ko Rera Karne ke liye hijack kidnapping aur bomb blast. really I fell very bad for the people who die in these(and neeraja dekhne ke baad aur lagta hai). thank God ammu ki wo body rishab ki nahi thi. ammu Tu agent ban ja yaar Tu toh Raghav se bahut intelligent hai .really really loved your writing skills .again the family scenes were soo cute .rish rea not liking baingan and their sweet dad making paneer tikka for them and trisha argument with Raghav was really very cute could imagine that scene .rish and rea hungry since 2 days .jaldi se jaldi let RaTri find their kids ammu .the code was sooo awesome ammu .Really tujhe ye sab soojhta kaisa hai .thanks for dedicating this update to me ammu .and sorry for nagging u dear .

Thank u so much Tasha... its the bad truth ki aaj revenge k liye kuch bhi kiya jaa sakta hai... I hope I was able to pen the things nicely.. (coz my Name is Amreen and I am not a terrorist... 🤣 )
Flashbacks.. Thanks for loving them so much!!
Hope u like the next part too!!
Read n lemme know!!
Loves ❤️
Amreen

Originally posted by: KS_Minion

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Wah Amreen. Lovely story so far! I'm enjoying it. I've stopped watching the show, but that doesn't mean that I can't enjoy the stories on them! Thanks for the PM!😃</font>

Thanks Shreya... hope its up to the mark... after all who can judge a crime story better than u 😳
Glad u liked it!! 😊

Originally posted by: babita..

Nice chapter and good progress in the case. At least we come to know what the culprits are and why they are against Raghav.

Hii... Thanks babita...

Loved to see Raghav feeding his loving wife though dunno he himself has eaten or not. Liked the emotional couple so attached and concerned !

It was such a warm scene when Raghav comes to know that DNA result is negative and Trisha comes to console Raghav becos she was only thinking of her own pains.

When beloved is stressed how can he not be concerned... and abt DNA test... I couldn't have let anything happen to my Raghav's kids...😃

Trisha is a lil less expressive bit she loves him n her kids.. she has to come to him at the end of the day...

So he has not let her know about the dna test, right ??

Nope!!

Decoding the code was full of Raghav's brains. He dissected the right words and they hinted the right path.

Would be looking forward what Taureef has in his limits. The khabri is settled, just wish the kids are located.

He is my Sherlock Holmes and Harvey Specter ka mixture... Sharp, Handsome, witty...😳

To know Taaruf ka kya hua... tune in to chap 3!!

Lovely and cute kids recalling their sweet days, it was worthy of reading but got so emotional.
Good going Amreen, congrats to the ones whom you have dedicated. 👏

Thank u so much again...I always love ur reviews..

Will wait for the next where the Mom Trisha will have a dangerous avataar all for her kids and her nation.

Raghav in disguise ?? Interesting 😛

Thanks and loves ❤️

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Amreen, dear sweetie 🤗

Hello 🤗

Fine update with very intelligent moves. 👏 The flashback was much needed to know Raghav's dedication but the outcome is so harsh that his own kids and 13 more places are in danger.

Really... thank u so much bhabhi!!

Watching the kids with your pen made my eyes wet as well as red. I'm so angry with the cruel ppl who have no hearts to mankind and maintains the heart for religion.

Even I feel bad to write such things 🤢

But that's the sad truth 😭

Loved to see Raghav preparing paneer tikka, yummy wala 😛 Though i love bharta, but PT is all the above in the delicacies 😉

Same here... love PANEER TIKKA😛

Lovely remembering of the good days, but gloom is bounced back and tears are unstoppable. The decoding is interesting and very cautious. Liked to see the parents keeping their cool amidst the tension and gloom.

The couple helping and understanding each other is so obvious in this need of the hour. Loved to watch it from the hubby's and wife's heart!!!❤️

Yes... gloom is bounced and the pain is hard. But when two people who love each other come together... fighting odds becomes easier by each other's support!!

That's what will happen with them too... just a lil patience...

Glad that u liked the flashbacks😊

Alipur can be the clue to their destination. And this is what i've grab from the last lines. Khabri indeed will help them out and Swati's new hint has boost Raghav fully.

Well am happy to say u have caught it🥱

More clues and decoding coming up😳

BTw, i loved them both winking at each other at the times of tears and tensions. The chemistry between the two has emerged out so beautifully. ⭐️

Will wait for Trisha's dangerous guise and Raghav in disguise. 😳

Awww.. Thanks a lot...😳

Luv ya Amreen, ❤️🤗 next time pls do send the link individually.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice chapter Amreen.. ⭐️👏

Thanks a lot bro... this was the bestest review ever... Thanks for the lovely words of appreciation!!

Came to know the hijack that was averted by Raghav.. n the result is his own kids are kidnapped... ! Merciless ppl... 😡

I don't understand ki kya kehkar yeh log brainwash karte hoge ki the members stoop low and think twice to even kill people 😭🤢

Nice description of a hubby takiing care of his wife... n relieving himself of the dna test getting failed.. ! Feeding a wife is a treat but to a crying wife... its like crying in heart n feeding.. !

Awww... thank u 😊

Now that the Mr. Hubby in u speaking na...😳

Loved the past days of Raghav's family... n Trisha as usual in a bossy way but tamed by Raghav once again ... as usual... 😉

😛 😆

Danger to hai... But when Raghav is there no danger or so can be a tension in any ways .. ! The code is full of clues n i can see the Black as the end of the search.. ! Wud like the decoding of BLACK in the next... !

Yes... Raghav us here so don't u fear...😃

Next chap definitely has decoded the "BLACK"

Nice to see you researching the Delhi n its outskirts... ! You have worked upon it.. good.. !👏👏

Thanks a ton 🤗

Now as they have reached the Alipur n the new path is so clear to them... i so wish the poor n cute n innocent kids are found safely ... !

Rishabh the big bro looked so mature wiping n relieving Reha... Cute n very sensitive... !

Thank u again... 😃

Trisha kya.. any mother will become dangerous for the ppl behind her kids' distress... ! Wud love to watch it ... ! Interestingly Raghav will have to disguise himself n reach the culprits as one of them... or is it like... Releasing the culprits n then stalking them in disguise.. ??/ 😳

Plz tune into chapter 3 😉

Waiting eagerly for the dhishoom dhishoom n the happy family together again... !

Pakka dishoom toh bohot milega abhi 🥱

God bless you for this fab update... !

Thank u so muchhh!! 🤗

Hey dear... you can write the scripts ... try them... SK retweets you... you can give him your stories... i am sure he wont be left unimpressed... 😳

⭐️👏