OS: Dial M for mobile...& murder! final part pg 7

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Babita

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Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome Sagi 👏👏

Riya has many things to unfold the incident clearly or that she can confuse more, who knows.

The advanced technology has benefits and have bad omens too. The bad elements were after Madhusudan, and he got killed that is named as accident.

Will wait to know more what Riya has to tell the agents.

Loved the narration that gives a visual like we have in the show, thanks !

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hi dear... what a lovely story...
I felt as if am watching Sharad and Aahana come to life... and act in front of me... such was the narration...
Coming to the chapter... Okay Riya has created a lot of suspense... and this Inspector Wagle seems to interest me too... I liked the way the murder has been given an accident's shape...and Raghav's sharp eyes caught that... And Dr. Aarti n Trisha's scene was good as well as rolling of eyes n The biology dialogue was cute... 😛
Let's see how the story unfolds...
And as Bhavit bro said... I too loved Raghav's deduction... it was so real... thank u for that...
Also the way Raghav smirked on being called by his lovely boss... so sweet n so like my Mr. Raghav Charming Sinha... 😉
I can only say II a eagerly waiting for an awsum story from a rocking writer... Update soon!!!
Hugs 🤗

Edited by Amreen... - 9 years ago

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Holla folks... am here again... I have made a banner for this story... Sagi is having a problem uploading the pic so am doing the honours 😉

Hope everyone likes my work in this... 😃