Romantic Prishna in Patna

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My romantic getaway happens in Patna on Krishna's last day of IAS training; Sargam and Vidyapati are alive, and guddiya's name is Priya.
On the night before Krishna's last day of training, she sits on the bed looking at Pintu while he sleeps, she had just put Priya back to sleep and was thinking to herself how lucky she was to have a husband like him who was so caring and supportive. She bent over and touched his hair then kissed him on his forehead and whispered 'I love you'. Krishna sat there thinking that she'd like to do something special for Pintu as he was the one responsible for all this, but she could think of nothing as she was not romantic as he was. She decided she would ask Sargam didi if she could look after Priya should they decide to stay back in Patna.So early the next morning, Krishna went looking for Sargam didi before Pintu and Priya woke up. She found her in the kitchen as she was preparing Krishna's favourite dish to let her know how proud she was of her and happy for her as well. Sargam asked her what she was doing up and Krishna, who did not know what to say, said she was feeling anxious, and then started talking about Pintu, and how lucky she was to have such a caring and loving husband, and she doesn't know what she will do without him by her side. Sargam looks at Krishna and smiles and says yes, you and Pintu love each other very much, you were made for each other. Krishna then asks Sargam didi "If you wanted to do something romantic for Babloo sir, what would you do?" Sargam surprised by this question, looks at Krishna and says teasingly, I should be asking you this as you are married to romantic Pintu Singh, she then holds Krishna's hand and tells her you can tell me anything, I am your sister aren't I. They both smile at this and sits down to talk.
It's finally time for Krishna and Pintu to leave, Krishna feels a bit nervous and just then Sargam comes over to her and says not to worry everything will be okay, Krishna and Pintu kiss Priya goodbye, then take their blessings from Ganga, Tuntun and Babloo. While on their way Krishna gets a call from Vidyapati who tells her he's proud to be her father, and he was so fortunate to have a daughter like her who fulfilled his dream, he's proud of her belief in truth and justice, and he was so lucky to have Pintuji as his son-in-law, he gives her his blessings and hangs up. Pintu and Krishna continue on their way with their usual chatting but Pintu notices that Krishna seemed a little distracted and asks if everything was alright. Krishna who takes a while to answer, says she was just thinking maybe they should visit the temple on their way, Pintu looks at her and asks is that all, then why didn't you say something, that's not a problem.
When they reached the centre, Pintu rushes to open Krishna's door, he holds her hand and tells her to take care and he'll be right here when she comes out, but he'll just go and have a cup of tea. After some time Krishna comes out, Pintu smiles and goes over to her and hugs her, he tells her he loves her and is so proud of her, although he knows Krishna would not approve as they were out in the open, but to his surprise she hugs him back, say she loves him too and it's time to leave. As she was about to enter the car she remembered the plan, so she sat down, buckled her seat belt and then looked at Pintu, waited until he drove for a few minutes then held her stomach and told him she was not feeling so good, she was feeling weak and feels that she should go somewhere and lie down for a bit. Pintu immediately worries about Krishna's health and says yes he will find somewhere for her to go, then Krishna tells him to go to the hotel they stayed in last time.
When Pintu reached the hotel he goes up to the counter to arrange for a room while holding Krishna's hand, as the man was about to give him the keys, Pintu asks him if he can come along as he has to support his wife as she is not feeling well. As the man opens the door, to Pintu's surprise the room is beautifully decorated with flowers and rose petals on the bed and floor, Pintu immediately tells him this has to be someone else's room so please arrange another one as his wife is not well. He puts Krishna to sit down and follows the man outside who tells him this is their room as arranged by his wife, Pintu gets very upset and tells the man again that his wife is not well and he needs another room. The man looks at Pintu, smiles and says, you are Pintu Singh right, your wife is Krishna right, then she arranged all this, so I suggest you go back to her. Pintu is confused and scratches his head but remembers that Krishna was not herself and seemed a little distracted, and it was she who suggested they come here. He walks back to the room to find Krishna standing by the window, pretending to be angry he goes over to Krishna and tells her that the man insists that she arranged all this. He tells Krishna that he is so angry because he knows his wife and she would never do something like this, and would never pretend to be sick and would never stay away from their daughter. Krishna bends her head and turns away, Pintu smiles and goes behind her, he holds her shoulders but realises that she is crying, he puts his arms around her and hugs her, cuddle his cheeks next to hers, he then kisses her cheek and whispers "I love you, I'm not angry, and I didn't mean to make you cry." He holds her for a few minutes then turns her around to face him, wipes away her tears, kisses her on her forehead, holds her chin and tells her to look at him, which she does, then says 'I love you' rubs his nose against hers and kisses her gently on her lips. Krishna, with tears rolling down her cheeks says "Pintuji, I ...I love you so much, I just wanted to do something special for you, I wanted to let you know that I appreciate everything you do for me, you take such good care of me, I'm, I'm sorry I had to lie to you and keep you away from Priya, I know how much you miss her but I thought it would be nice if we could spend some time together, I'm so sorry Pintuji, please forgive me." Pintu again wipes away Krishna's tears, shakes his head as if to say don't cry, and holds his wife so tight as if he would never let her go, he then says "I love you Krishna Raj" and Krishna in return says "I love you Pintu Singh". They remain in this warm embrace for a while only to be disturbed by the ringing of Krishna's phone, Pintu did not want to let her go but she told him she had to see who was calling. Pintu goes and hugs her from behind as she takes the call, it was Sargam calling to find out if everything was alright, Krishna shyly says yes didi everything is alright and hangs up. Pintu smiles and says, ahhh so bhabi is in on this, hmm.
Pintu turns Krishna to face him, tells her he loves her just the way she is but he is glad she did this for him and he loves her even more and they kiss passionatley,,, he then picks her up in his arms and puts her on the bed, takes off her slippers, then takes off his shoes, goes and sits next to her but facing her, takes out the clips from her hair and tells her he likes when her hair is loose. Pintu and Krishna lovingly look at each other, then Pintu smiles and say to her "So what now madamji?" Krishna smiles and turns away shyly, but Pintu holds her face and tells her she is in charge today, her wish is his command. Krishna looks at him and smiles then says "okay, mmm, maybe you can kiss me wherever you like, for as long as you like, until I say stop, okay." Pintu and Krishna smile with each other, then he says "Is that all, and are you sure for as long as I like, no problem, I can manage that." Pintu then kisses Krishna on her forehead, then her nose, then her lips, then her chin, then her neck, then goes by her ear and blows gently, then whispers "Are you sure you can handle this madamji" then gives Krishna a little nibble on her ears, which make her pull away slightly. Pintu looks at Krishna and smiles as she has her eyes closed all the while, he then goes behind her, moves her saree off her shoulder and her hair to one side then starts kissing her on her shoulder, then across her back, then lifts her hair and kisses her on the back of her neck, to which Krishna begins to move a bit. Pintu then goes to the other side, starts kissing across her shoulders making his way up to her ear and whispers "I love you", gently blows into her ear, and nibbling it. Pintu goes infront of Krishna, whose eyes are still closed and looks at her, he smiles then kisses her on each eye, she opens them and look at him, they both get lost in each other, then Pintu cups Krishna's face in his hands and kisses her passionately for as long as he wanted for their was no word from Krishna. Suddenly Krishna grabs Pintu by the shirt and pulls him down on her, she did not want him to stop, she was enjoying it, but pushes him off a bit and says stop, Pintu looks at her and asks what wrong, she nods and says nothing, "I just wanted to say I love you Pintuji" and they both smile at this. Krishna then kisses him and whispers in his ears his next command, he looks at her and smile and they continue to kiss passionately, as if this day would never end. ❤️
I hope it passes the test as it's my first attempt. Thanks for reading, lisa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow thats an awesome story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is so beautiful...will take us through the weekend with some Prishna...moments...
Please write more scenes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww Excellent👏beautiful scene
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks guys, I lost the story three times yesterday and my laptop keys were sticking all the time, almost gave up, but my love for❤️ Prishna prevailed. 😉Wish I knew how to post a pic, that would have been awesome and complete for me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww...It so Beautiful 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lisa, I love it, Prishna in Patna getting romantic, waiting for more from you :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Fiza, grateful for all your help and support😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow what a scene very very romantic. And i love the name u gave to the baby very pretty.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Sandia,,where have you been,,missed you this week,,all is well I hope,,take care

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