Your Version of Afsar Bitiya?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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One post that was in my head when I was inactive here and now that I have come on I decided to make it 😳

If you were to remake Afsar Bitiya according to you then how would you make it? What would be the Storyline and all?
I would show a lot of Prishna obviously, I would show more of Krishna's family and the Singh family happy moments, I would still keep Sargam and Vidyapati, I would actually keep Bihari and Dihati except they won't be nutcases but they would be a childless couple, yep that's right I won't even let that psycho be born and would never cast her in my shows 😆 if the theme was Afsar Bitiya then I would show more about that and if it was not to do with Officers and that then I would make Prishna's lovestory different and unique, I would make Chanchal cupid in Prishna's relationship, I would make Ravi a protective brother who then softens up to Pinto and I would make Manisha's life happy, basically I would never introduce a person like Nirmal in her life and mostly if Prishna have a child then I would show more of them with the whole family 😃
I'm gonna add more in tomorrow as well 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would have loved it like this -

  • Krishna pursuing her BDO then IAS dream...
  • Pintu taking care of his Dad's business and meeting Krishna on many occasions causing them to fall in love...
  • Both not revealing to their families about it but carrying on with their dreams and their family's dreams too...
  • Krishna being a source of strength to Pintu in important decision making especially when it comes to conflicts between Pintu and TTS on business tactics.
  • Babloo being the great noble soul as he was shown...and lots of Sargam Babloo moments...
  • Pintu being a great buddy to Ravi...
Will add more later...just wanted this thread to pick up...

No marriage for Prishna till she became an IAS officer!😃

Where are everyone?????? Looks like only 3-4 people visit this forum now a days...
Have a great day ABians!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely topic Fizu for me would keep the basic structure of the show and the characters coz that alone was what made this show unique. I would also nt include 0,6 in my story dnt think she is needed. Bt definitely would keep dihati and bihari being their mad criminal selves and wanting to be better than krishna's family. Bt they would obviously be shown less.


-my version wnt have a permanent villian or if it did would just be tt coz personally alway thought that since the bdo storyline would offer negative characters no need for a permanent villian in the storyline.

-I would start the show of by showing krishna's journey whilst she was studying the promos would be a major part of the story. Her struggle for her fees, her working whilst she studied to help her pay for her books and her daily needs etc. Bt would still include the prishna scenes we had and would create more scenes around them.

-I would show prishna's family equally for me would have loved to have explored the krishna saraswathie r/ship alot more. And the ravi krishna angle and how they could get close. Would have loved to have shown chanchal more and her struggle as a teenager being influenced by her friends and wanting to be like them. Cellphone story and how destructive they can be if child isnt careful. Maybe her marks could have gone down coz of it. Or she could have met some1 online and he could have asked her to meet him and he would hav been older. Would hav loved to shown the dangers of that with her character. And obviously pintu helping krishna with everything. And as the show went on maybe even have a teenage pregnancy track and we could see how krishna and her family handle that. Her family wanting to take her out of school and krishna fighting to keep her in.


-than the dynamics btw the 3 singh men lord their r/ship was utterly intriguing in the beginning. Would have loved to have shown how pintu eventually came out of their shadow. Pintu -babloo the elder brother small brother dynamic babloo thinking he always knew best and disregarding pintu's opinion would loved to have seen this being brought to a head and pintu realising that babloo's behavior with him was wrong.
-Than tt and what exactly where his feelings for his sons. Always felt like the only person who could have broken pintu's spirit in his family and life was tt. Would have loved to have seen this shown happen in the show and how pintu would have picked himself up.
- Than ganga more scenes btw her sons as well as her husband. Would never make her evil bt would always show as trying to do the right thing by her family. Would have a proper,proper separation track btw pintu and his family and show them realising how much he did for them. And babloo finally turning into a fam man.

-Would have shown what had caused the rift btw babloo and tt as well as ganga.

-the prishna love story would have done it either by showing prishna meeting falling in love bt not admitting it to each other and for some reason separating for a couple of years and than coming back together again. Both having growing up in this time and how they would react to each another than.

- or would get them married as is but before that showing krishna a little more immature and when she gets married bring it out more. Wnt show her being unable to manage family and work the way they did. Bt show immaturity not valuing the ppl around her that brings conflict btw her and pintu. As for pintu would hav shown his downfall being tt that he separates from krishna coz of him only to realise that he had lied. TT could hav somehow made pintu believe that krishna was having an affair with the young guy from work(forgot his name) got her drugged and placed her next to him and pintu finding them together. And when he finds out the truth him not being able to forgive himself for believing the lies or tt for this and leaving krishna and his family bt being unaware that she had forgiven him or that she was pregnant.

-that would have been the way to get her back into their house. And with this track would finally get tt to turn positive and get him to hand over himself to the police for his criminal activities and show the justice system being lenient on him coz he handed himself over to them. Krishna and babloo trying to built up the family and the business. So her being a bdo, helping with the business and being a single mom all at the same time managing these things waiting for pintu to come back.


- pintu on the other hand would have changed his name, cut himself completely of from them and would finally find who he is away from all of them. Find his purpose in life, his talent and only after being success and than going back.

And we once again see the dynamics btw every1 change more matured prishna coming together and tackling everything together as a unit. and just basically more prishna, prishna, prishna and obviously the bdo track.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Fiza,,, nice thread,,,hmmm interesting,,😉
Would have more or less left some things the same but up to a certain point,,, will comment further later on,,,bye
Have a great weekend everyone,,, miss Prishna so much💔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nothing to say here . Sandia , Shanti Di , Fizu U guys said it all . Just want to say that I would have shown more and more of Prishna , Pintu and Krishna and their lives rather then showing anything else . Storyline would have always revolved around Prishna .

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