Prishna OS: Love Will Find A Way Part 3 Pg 9 - Page 7

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Hey guys, I have finally written Part 3, and it may seem rushed even though it took me ages to write, but anyway hope you all like it, and do comment and criticize, I would love to read your feedback on this Part. Enjoy.

Part 3:

The next two days were going so slow for Pinto. He just couldn't wait to see Krishna again. If only there wasn't a tradition of not meeting bride before the wedding, Pinto would have been running to Krishna everyday. He had to find a way to meet her. Pinto was walking around the house not knowing where he was going; all he was doing was thinking of Krishna and just Krishna, she was all he could think about. Krishna had stolen his heart and now was taking over his thoughts as well. He had to do something to meet her, but what?

Suddenly he sees and hears Sonu running around acting like he is riding a Motorbike and he gets and idea. Pinto goes up to Sonu and asks him if he wants to go on a bike ride, Sonu is full on excited and replies "Yes I want to go on a ride". Pinto smiles and says "Ok then let's go" he quickly grabs his bike keys and takes Sonu on a bike ride. On the way he went to Krishna's house but he had to go secretly with Sonu, so he decides to go through the Window again but this time by another route. Pinto says to Sonu "Ok Sonu you had your bike ride and now you have to do something for me" Sonu replies "What shall I do Chachu?" Pinto says we have to as quiet as possible so no talking for now, Ok? Sonu agrees to do this so Pinto and Sonu start going in and they reach the Window and through it Pinto sees Krishna and starts admiring her and smiling.

Sonu who is behind Pinto sees Chanchal behind them with her hands on her hips. Sonu was just about to tell Pinto but then he stops and remembers his Chachu say to him to not to talk so he leaves it. Chanchal, to get Pinto's attention coughs. Pinto gets startled by the noise and turns around to see Chanchal standing there. Pinto was shocked and didn't know what to do, he asks Sonu "Sonu, if you saw her then why didn't you tell me?" Sonu replies to Pinto saying "Chachu you told me not to talk so I never". Pinto remembers him saying that to Sonu and lightly smacks his Forehead and says to Sonu "I didn't mean for you not to talk at all". Sonu was about to reply but only to be interrupted by Chanchal who says "I'm still here and you two are still not supposed to be here, remember Hone wale Jijaji you can't meet Didi before the wedding" Pinto was disheartened and looked through the Window again to see Krishna.

After that, Chanchal sends Pinto and Sonu away saying that they can meet Krishna in the wedding day itself. Pinto was riding home still thinking about Krishna while Sonu was making bike noises like he normally does. As soon as they reach home they see the whole family standing there waiting for them. Pinto knew what was going to happen and was trying to think of an excuse. Ganga asks Pinto where they were. Pinto quickly replies that "Sonu wanted to go for a ride so I took him, right Sonu? Didn't you have fun?" Sonu replies "Yes I had fun and we went to Krishna Chachi's house as well". Pinto just registered in his mind that Sonu had told them what he went to do and tries to cover up but he couldn't. Ganga says "Listen Pinto, its just a matter of 1 or 2 days then you will have Krishna with you all the time" Pinto looks down like how when a mother is telling off her little son and the son just listening and looking down. Ganga tells Pinto to go to his room. Pinto replies "Ji Maa" and heads of to his room.

Pinto goes to his room and decides to call Krishna. So he calls her and Krishna answers the call. Krishna who is shy at the moment says "Hello"; Pinto was just about to reply but got interrupted by Chanchal yet again. Chanchal says to Pinto "Jijaji, what did I say? You can't meet Didi or talk to her until your wedding day". Pinto tries to stop her "But Chanch..." And before he could complete what he was saying Chanchal cut the call. Pinto says "Loh even talking to her is cut off for me, now what else can I do to meet her?"

Finally the wedding day had come and everyone was preparing for it. Pinto was trying hard to sneak out of the house to see Krishna but his Dad and Sonu were with him like Bodyguards. Pinto didn't know what to do, he tried calling Krishna but only to find out that Chanchal still has her Phone and will not let him speak to Krishna just yet. Tuntun caught Pinto trying to call Krishna and hence took his Phone too. Tuntun says to Pinto "What is this Pinto, why are you soo impatient? You will get to see Krishna soon." Pinto went red and didn't say anything.

Ganga came in with Pinto's Sherwani and told him to wear it. Pinto who was impatient was thinking "If I get ready quickly then we might go to Krishna sooner" and decided to quickly get ready.

They had finally reached Krishna's place with the Baraath and Pinto was looking around everywhere to see if he could get a glimpse of Krishna. Sargam sees this and nudges Pinto saying "Devar Ji, you won't see Krishna just yet, just a little bit more time left".

After all the rasams for the Welcoming of the groom were done, Pinto was taken to the Mandap. Krishna was also taken to the Mandap and Pinto couldn't take his eyes off her. She was looking as beautiful as ever. Krishna came and sat next to Pinto.

All the wedding rituals were done and Pinto and Krishna were now married. Krishna couldn't stop crying and so were her family. Saraswati was crying the most as her daughter was going away from her. She goes up to Krishna and gives her blessings to her and Ganga sees the emotional scene of Krishna and Saraswati and goes up to Saraswati saying "Don't worry, now Krishna is not just my Daughter-in-law, but my daughter as well, I will take care of her and will make sure Pinto does as well" and she gives Saraswati a reassuring smile. After the Bidaai bit was done, Prishna were heading off to the Singh House.

When they finally had reached the house, and the Welcoming Ceremony was done, Pinto and Krishna were shown to their bedroom which was nicely decorated by Sargam. Sargam didn't let Pinto in the room just yet. Bhabhi and Devar have their little Nok Jhok and Sargam finally let's Pinto in. Pinto sees Krishna sitting in the middle of the bed feeling shy, he closes the door behind him and he goes and sits next to her.

He removes her veil and just looks at her; he says how happy he is that Krishna is finally his. Krishna smiles even more and looks down. He lifts her chin with his finger, he closes in for a kiss and Krishna feels shy and turns away. He decided to go slow and helps her take off her jewellery. He then gently pushes her down, turns the light off and the rest is up to you to imagine. 😉 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fizu Awosome Chapter yaar. OMGG I was laughing while reading SONTU scene .Gunde Bete ne phasa diya apne laadle chachu ko 😆 . I can very well imagine the scene on Kinshuk and tht Kid (who playes Sonu) 😆 . How cuteee innocent Sonu is .awww 😳 And Last scene is so romantic . I was blushing while reading it .And I imagined what I wanted to 🤣😉😳 .Please Do Write more . U are so good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beeeatuiiiful part Sonu is so so so cuteee. I loved the part do write soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful...loved impatient and romantic Pinto

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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na jaane woh din kab aayega...lovely Fiza...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Fizu Awesome
I could actually see the bike scene with Pinto & Sonu
& last part very Romantic
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Awesome Chapter Fizu , I was smiling from start to end
really beautiful . Do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Wow great writing Fiza! great last scene..LOL Wanted more though of romance like a actual KISss 😳

Your really goooddd though Keep writing more and update ssooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Read second & third part together ... nice, cute, lovely OS dear ... u write very well ... keep it up ... do write some more stories ...

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