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Posted: 13 years ago
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Liked it 😛 Hope you continue writing 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyz this is episode 2 of my story of Afsar Bitiya n I hope u like it n I will continue it n if I cn I will write episode 3 2mmrw ok?
N here is the link of the 1st episode if u didn't read it http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2652144

Wen Krishna, Pintu, n Babloo went in they saw no1 in the coaching n then suddenly "Babloo sir's cellphone started ringing"
Babloo: " Hello?" n Babloo sirs mother calls n tells him tht his son was getting wet in the rain n nw has a fever so Babloo sirs mother also said 2 come back with a doctor. Then Babloo sir said ok n hung up.
Babloo: "Krishna, since u came in this rain I wouldn't snd u home without learning anything so stay here while I go home n I will snd a sub teacher (teacher who comes 2 take the teachers place while the teacher us gone) ok?"
Krishna: Ok Babloo sir but why r u going home?
Babloo: "cz my son is sick he has a high fever"
Pintu: "phir bhaiya hum bhi chalengi ap ki saath."
Babloo: Nahi Pintu tum yaha ruko Krishna ki saath
Babloo sir went out n called the sub teacher while he was in the car and the sub teacher didn't answer so Babloo kept a MSG n went home.
Mean while, The sub left his phone 2 get it fixed.
In te classroom Krishna ws looking at the door waiting for the sub 2 cme n Start 2 teach her something new. Krishna ws sitting next 2 the window nPintu ws sitting 3 seats behind Krishna n ws staring at He back of Krishna n told asked her " y r u staring at he door for?"
Krishna: " I am waiting for the sub 2 come.". Then Krishna started 2 study and when she opened her book the wind ws blowing n it ws raining so fast tht her books n her hair n dress started 2 get wet so Krishna stood up n tried 2 close the windows but it ws 2 hard 4 her 2 close so while she ws struggling 2 close the window Pintu ws snding MSGs then finally noticed so he stood up n cme 2 close the window Krishna didn't notice tht Pintu ws coming towards her 2 close the windows so she ws still trying n heh Pinu came n by accident pushed the windows down n his hands were on Krishna's hands n Pintu n Krishna ws staring at each for like 5 seconds n then Krishna moved her hands n said " thank u" n Pintu said "welcome"
(End of episode 2) To Be Continued...
Precap: It turned night n the storm continued while Krishna fell asleep on Pintu's shoulders
Srry guyz I didn't post this on my last post cz it is confusing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Srry huh Monica I didn't write my 2nd episode in the comment I made a new post n Moni y dnt u write a new Afsar Bitiya episode like me so we cn b in the compitition in fact every1 who liked my episode shud make their own episode n guyz do read the new episode I wrote ok?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sukirti Please Use The Same Post You Used For Your First Part Please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awosome scene pia . lovedd it .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome scene love it !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It'll be better if you could post it all in one thread only :) You can always edit the title each time you update more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful I Loved it. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u guyz
Hey guyz I dnt Noe if I could write an episode 2mrrw cz I hve school5 days so if I cn I'll write an episode if I cnt then I'll write an episode next Friday, Saturday, n Sunday? N i cn write only 3 episodes a week unless I hve extra time k?

Krishna goes back 2 her seat n Pintu starts talking 2 Krishna about things tht doesn't matter so Krishna ignored Pintu n continued 2 study while Pintu started 2 snd msgs 2 his frndz then it ws really late n the sub didn't come Pintu's phones battery ws dead so Pintu started 2 talk 2 Krishna and Krishna started 2 b a little friendly with Pintu cz she realized tht Pintu isn't tht bad so while they were chting with 1 another time passed n after 4 hours passed Pintu fell asleep n woke up after 3 hours n till then Krishna ws studying n it turned 7:00 n Krishna didn't noticed the time. After Pintu woken up the lights turned off n Krishna said "arai lights kui off ho gayi"
Pintu said "shayad electricity chali gai. Ruko is closet main ek candle hai"
So Pintu went 2 get a candle but couldn't find it as he couldn't c. Suddenly Krishna screamed "Aaahh!" n hugged Pintu.
Pintu asked "what happened why did u scream?"
Krishna: " there ws something on my hand, something like a spider."
Pintu: (Ha ha)" tum itne jaldi daar gati go?"
Krishna: "toh kya huwa? Hum bhi toh insaan he hai"
Pintu: "ok ok fine I am srry ab toh mujhe choro" n Krishna moved
Then Pintutook out the candle n lit it n Krishna said "thank u"
ThenKrishna sat on the floor at first she thought of going home but then remembered wt Babloo sir asked her 2 do which ws wait 4 the sub 2 get here n after 10 minutes she fell asleep n wen Pintu noticed Krishna sleeping n shivering, Pintu wanted 2 help her so he looked around n then saw a window wide open n strong breeze n rain ws coming in so Pintu tried 2 close the window but it ws stuck so he couldn't close it bur he still saw Krishna shivering so he took the candle n looked in the closet 2 find the jacket he left last time n he found his jacket so he put tht jacket on Krishna n sat right beside her n then suddenly Krishna's head fell on Pintu's shoulder n Pintu fell asleep 2 on Krishna's head.
(End if episode 3) To be continued...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precap: Pintu n Krishna trying 2 open the door of the coaching class n in Krishna's house Krishna's dad is looking at the clock n it ws 1:00 a.m n Krishna still didn't return!

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