A song for ACHPM - Page 3

Originally posted by: ~Simmi~

well done everybody..👏now my song

achpm ko jee bhar k main dekhu..mujhe haq hai

bas yun hi dekhti jau..mujhe haq hai

😆

dhal rahai pighal raha yeh week dheere dheere

ghat raha intezaar ka waqt dheere dheere

Very nice and appropriate!

Where are you these dayz??

I love the new ID pic!!😃

Originally posted by: nessako

Very nice and appropriate!

Where are you these dayz??

I love the new ID pic!!😃

thanks nessy..main to yehi hoon..how are you?

I know..u like salman too naa..😉 btw..thanks

Originally posted by: ~Simmi~

well done everybody..👏now my song

achpm ko jee bhar k main dekhu..mujhe haq hai

bas yun hi dekhti jau..mujhe haq hai

😆

dhal rahai pighal raha yeh week dheere dheere

ghat raha intezaar ka waqt dheere dheere

wah wah wah.... kiya gana hai.... wah ............ 😉

Originally posted by: nessako

I am in the same boat as you! i really try writing but find it very difficult......😃

What's your origin? I am bangladeshi....i am very bad at my own language as well....😆

hey come on guys ... sing in any language .. sing in english..........we will love it more... become our official sukha singh .... hehehehhehe😆

Originally posted by: Fazila~

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!11 its ok if u cant rite in urdu/hindi.... im sure u can sing in english.............. so how ablout a cool english song.... we will thnk u r our Sukha sinhg jee....hehehehheh😆... where were u yesterday???? u were missed..........im not suppose to be here , but where have u been........😆..i only come here , check n goooo................ciao.. do sing any song that comes to ur mind .....would love to hear it 😉

Yeah, I haven't been able to come online as much in the last few days, we actually had a death in my extended family, so it has been a little difficult to come online, had to drop my mum and pick her up from their house like 10 times a day. The funeral was today and well I guess now I will be online a bit more. I guess I am the the offical sukha ji of this forum....lol. K well let me think of something and I will post it here....do come back to check it...

Originally posted by: nessako

I am in the same boat as you! i really try writing but find it very difficult......😃

What's your origin? I am bangladeshi....i am very bad at my own language as well....😆

Di,

I am actually Punjabi and well I can't read or write pujabi or Hindi. LOL. Sometimes I even screw up on writing english....LOL....hehehheheheh😆

Ok....guys this is what I came up with. Please forgive my hindi but I tried really hard to write this. I took that idea from a poem that one of my friends had read to me a long time ago.....I hope that you guys like it, actually more like I hope you guys can understand my broken hindi. LOL 😆

Aye Starplus tere actions per rona aaya
Jaane kyun aaj tumne mujhe rooliya
Cancel kar diya Aek Chabhi Hai Padoos Mein
Hume tumhre kya begada tha
Yun to har hafta ummedon mein guzar jaata tha
Lakin tumne hamare ummedon mein pani phar diya
Aek aur hafta ab wait karna padeyga
Aye starplus tere actions per mujhe rona aaya
Jaane kyun aaj tumne mujhe rooliya

Originally posted by: honey425

Ok....guys this is what I came up with. Please forgive my hindi but I tried really hard to write this. I took that idea from a poem that one of my friends had read to me a long time ago.....I hope that you guys like it, actually more like I hope you guys can understand my broken hindi. LOL 😆

Aye Starplus tere actions per rona aaya
Jaane kyun aaj tumne mujhe rooliya
Cancel kar diya Aek Chabhi Hai Padoos Mein
Hume tumhre kya begada tha
Yun to har hafta ummedon mein guzar jaata tha
Lakin tumne hamare ummedon mein pani phar diya
Aek aur hafta ab wait karna padeyga
Aye starplus tere actions per mujhe rona aaya
Jaane kyun aaj tumne mujhe rooliya

wah wah wah.....i must have miised it when iwas away............honey ... tu shair tu nahi... magar aaye honey..... wah kiya likha hai..........cool...............

Originally posted by: honey425

Yeah, I haven't been able to come online as much in the last few days, we actually had a death in my extended family, so it has been a little difficult to come online, had to drop my mum and pick her up from their house like 10 times a day. The funeral was today and well I guess now I will be online a bit more. I guess I am the the offical sukha ji of this forum....lol. K well let me think of something and I will post it here....do come back to check it...

im sorry to hear tha...........thats y were u absent......hmmm.........

Originally posted by: honey425

Di,

I am actually Punjabi and well I can't read or write pujabi or Hindi. LOL. Sometimes I even screw up on writing english....LOL....hehehheheheh😆

its ok honey, u can write either in english or french,,,,, as long as u write its ok............we can hear u loud n clear, hehehehhehe