Zoya's love interest idea

Before I share my idea im going to say that it is going to be a little daily soap like, bearing that in mind here it is:

Scene 1:

Zoya and Urmi are on their way home from the cinema and they just happen to decide to walk. On their way home they see a young man in his mid 20s walkin around looking lost. They simply pay no attention to him as they are talkin about their own things. He continues on his way and so do they, when all of a sudden they notice that some unfriendly looking guys are coming up to them. They try to run but are surrounded by about 5 or 6 of them. Then appears the young man and he takes them down. They start to get back up and the young man urmi and zoya run together to CG. As soon as they get there, the girls thank him and inquire as to why he was walkin around near CG. He introduces himself as Rohan, a doctor that has recently completed medschool and was looking for CG as his parents and family were originally from there. He lost his family in an accident and wanted to open a medschool in the town they were from as a tribute to his family. As he is talkin Zoya starts noticing that she cant stop staring at him. He finishes talking and they take him to Sandeep's and ask if he can spend the nite there. Sandeep agrees. End Scene.

Scene 2:

Its the next day. Sandeep wakes up to Rohan making chai for him. Sandeep is pleasantly suprised, but as usual doesnt show it really lol. They begin chatting and Rohan starts to tell Sandeep about his story.

Zoya is sittin at the cafe lost in her thoughts. Urmi comes and tries to talk to her. Zoya is still lost in her thoughts smiling. Urmi pretends to call Rohans name and Zoya looks around trying to find him. Urmi breaks out laughing, Zoya is slightly peeved. Urmi begins teasing Zoya about Rohan. Urmi then says shes going to go see Sandeep and Rohan and starts running to his house. Zoya chases her telling her to stop all the while Urmi is laughing. Zoya catches up to Urmi and as she is entering Sandeep's house she bumps into Rohan. She looks up at him and he starts looking at her(filmy i know lol). A moment passes and Sandeep interrupts them and tells Urmi and Zoya that he and Rohan or going to see if they can get him a permit and loan for openning his hospital/clinic. Rohan says bye and Zoya is at a loss for words. End Scene. Aek Chabhi Hai Padoss Mein! music lol.

Scene 3:

We see Sandeep and Rohan in a rickshaw as they stop at a building to meet a friend of Sandeep's that gives building permits. Mr. Saxena (Sandeep's friend) welcomes Rohan and Sandeep. He asks them if they want something warm or cold to drink. Sandeep and Rohan both get something cold. Rohan starts explaining to Mr.Saxena about how he wants to open up a medical clinic. Rohan tells him that the reason he became a doctor was to save lives. He was unable to save the lives of his parents and family, and felt terrible during the time his family passed away and he does not want anyone to feel as much pain as he did if he can help it. Mr. Saxena is very impressed by this, and tells Rohan that his reasoning behind is very honourable. However, the cost of building Rohan's clinic is not cheap. It would cost 200000 rupees to make a clinic with 6 rooms with in which ppl would be seen by the doctor, one large waiting area for patients and where the secretary's desks will be and finally a small lunchroom. Rohan and Sandeep are disheartned by this. Mr. Saxena tells him that this cost includes the labour fees for the construction crew. The crew are very efficient and can be done the office within 2 months. Mr. Saxena tells them that they have a 2 weeks to decide to come up with the money otherwise the crew will have to start on another project. Sandeep and Rohan thank Mr. Saxena and head out. End Scene 3.

Scene 4:

The 4 deewane are sitting at their usual table at the cafe playing carrom as Sandeep and Rohan step out of the rickshaw and are headed that way. They take a seat at the cafe and the owner comes and talks to them. He starts callin other ppl from the moholla to meet the man who saved to of CG's daughters. Rohan is suprised that everyone knows and tells everyone that he did what any decent young man would do. Sandeep cracks a smile and tells everyone that Rohan is very happy for all the thank you's but now he and Sandeep need to discuss some important issues and would like some time to talk. Everyone goes back to their work. At the sametime after hearing that Urmi and Zoya were in danger, and that Rohan saved them the 4 deewane are jealous and worried about Urmi and Zoya so they run to go see them.

Zoya is lying on Urmis bed looking at the ceiling while Urmi is talking about going shopping. Just then the 4 deewane rush in to see their beloeved Urmi safe and sound. The start talkin about how the whole moholla was thanking this new guy. About how brave he is and how hes such a good samaritan and how they should be doing good things like him. Zoya starts talkin about how great he is. The way he fought those guys was amazing etc. but stops short as she realizes the 4 deewane are still there.

The 4 deewane walk out trying to think of ways that they can impress Urmi. Mushtaq also feels like he did not do his brotherly duty not being there to protect his sister. End scene 4

Scene 5:

Sandeep asks Rohan about how much money he has saved up. Rohan says that although he worked and paid his own way thru medschool, his mama who raised him after his parents death, inherited all the money that his family had. In fact, his mama didnt approve of his nephew not following the family business (wont reveal what it is till the next ep). Rohan tells Sandeep that since completing medschool he hasnt spoken to his mama and he only has 100000 rupees saved up. Sandeep tells Rohan that he can still ask his mama even if the chances are low that he will get money from him. Zoya and Urmis mom hear walk by and hear about what Rohan wants to do and about his situation. Soon the entire mohalla hears and starts discussing about what they can do to help Rohan.

Zoya and Urmi are walkin home from shopping as they see Rohan admiring the fountain in the middle of the moholla. Urmi tells Zoya that this is her chance to go talk to him as Sandeep isnt around and Rohan isnt busy. As Urmi and Zoya approach, they see Rohan suddenly collapse. End of episode...

So thats my idea guys! Id love feed back. thanks in advance!!!

Keep it real and take life easy!

Raoul

Oh my God!, that was awsome! that was a really good script thing.... 😆 if you can, maybe you could make one every week! 😊
STANDING OVATION👏!
My Request: please keep on posting these kind of ideas! Please!👏👏👏

👏 hey i like it n i would soo like you 2 cont please!!!!

hey thats nice 👏

write more please 😳 😳

luv
kanak

great to see that you have started the zoya plot as a new thread...

Great to see our 4 deewane as a part of the story...
Its going great....expecting more....

yeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!
u r awesomme yo!
i lykd it
keep on posting dese kind of stories n plzzz can u make 1 with urmi and sandeep sayinf i love u :p
lolzzzz
😆
thnxxx

I want to thank everyone for all the feedback. Im glad you all liked it!!! Ill try to post my second episode idea asap. Thanks again!

Keep it real and take life easy

Raoul

Alrighty guys here is episode 2!

Scene 1:

Zoya and Urmi rush over to Rohan. Zoya starts trying to shake Rohan awake as Urmi calls for help. Zoya starts saying " Wake up Rohan! Wake up! Plz wake up!!!" with urgency in her voice. A bunch of mohalla ppl come, and the owner of the cafe brings some water to slpash Rohan with. Urmi brings Sandeep. "Sandeep bhaijaan plz help him!" Says Zoya. Sandeep tells her not to worry and splashes him with some water. Rohan shakes his head a little and his eyes open. Everyone is relieved. Zoya is about to hug him, but since everyone is around she clasps his hands in hers and holds them tightly. Rohan suddenly clutches his shoulder in pain. Noone noticed at first, but then they see that Rohan has been shot. Sandeep tells Urmi to call an ambulance. Zoya has tears running down her eyes as she holds his free hand in hers. Sandeep tells Rohan not to worry, and that they will get him fixed up really soon. He tells him to hang on.

Scene 2:

The ambulance arrives rather quickly and the paramedics get Rohan into the ambulance. Sandeep tells the ambulance that he will follow in a cab. Everyone starts worrying, but Sandeep reassures them. He gets into a cab and as he is getting in Zoya tells Sandeep she wants to come too. Sandeep is about to say no, but Urmi gives him "the look" and he tells Zoya and Urmi to get in the cab. Sandeep tells Sujhata that he will call as soon as there is any news about Rohan.

At the hospital:
A doctor comes out to talk to Sandeep, Urmi and Zoya. He tells them that they have removed the bullet and Rohan is out of danger, but he will have to take things easy for atleast 2 weeks. Zoya asks if they can see him and the doctor says yes. Zoya and Urmi rush into the room as we see a small smile appear on Sandeeps face as he walks into the room. Zoya runs in and is about to give Rohan a big hug when Sandeep reminds her that the doctor said that Rohan has to take things easy and not put pressure on his shoulder. Zoya frowns a little and grabs Rohans hand. They both look deep into each other's eyes as Zoya starts getting tears in her eyes.

Scene 3:

Sandeep asks Rohan if he saw who shot him or has any idea of why anyone would try and kill him. Rohan asks if Zoya and Urmi could leave Sandeep and Rohan for a little while as Rohan wants to discuss something in private with Sandeep. Zoya doesnt want to leave, but Urmi makes her understand and reminds her that they need to let everyone in the Mohalla know that Rohan is fine; they leave Sandeep and Rohan. Rohan tells Sandeep that there could be one reason why someone would try to kill him and thats because of his Mama. Sandeep is a little suprised and asks him to explain. Rohan tells Sandeep that despite having all his parents money after they died, his Mama started to do bad things. He infact became involved in the underworld. Chances are that the Mama owes someone money and has not paid them. Sandeep begins to understand and tells Rohan that they should contact his Mama immediately; otherwise, Rohan's life could be in danger again. Rohan agrees, and calls up his Mama and tells him what is happening. The Mama, despite not being happy that Rohan did not get involved in the underworld like he wanted, still loves his nephew and tells him that he will come to CG as soon as he pays his debt to the rival gangs. Rohan is very pleased to hear this.

Scene 4:

We see Sujhata on the phone, hearing the news from Urmi that Rohan is fine. Sujhata comes out and tells the ppl of the Mohalla. Everyone is very happy and relieved. We see the 4 Deewane sitting in the caf when they hear the news. Mushtaq is quiet and in his own thoughts. He is glad that Rohan is alive, as he wants to repay him for saving his sister's life. The other 3 Deewane try and get Mushtaq's attention. He tells them he needs some time to himself and goes off to think. The other 3 are wondering what is wrong with him. Rahul and Hari are about to go after him, but Jugle tells them not to, as he knows why Mushtaq is sad; he tells them and they understand. They start to think of ideas to help make Mushy realize that it was not his fault that he was not there to protect his sister. They decide that Rahul and Hari will dress up as gunde and pretend to attack Jugle. When Mushtaq sees he will come and save Jugle and wont feel bad anymore. They start planning when to set up this drama.

At the hospital:

Rohan's Mama comes with a briefcase into his room. Rohan wants to hug his Mama, but instead he just shakes his hand. Mama is glad that nothing happened to Rohan. Mama tells him not to worry as he has paid his debt and has decided to get out the game for good. Rohan is very happy to hear this. Sandeep tells Rohan he should probably get some rest as the doctor told him to take it easy. Mama and Sandeep come out of the room. As they walk together, Sandeep tells Mama about Rohan's clinic and the situation they are in. Mama tells Sandeep that the money is his and he does not feel he should invest it in a clinic. Mama asks Sandeep if he knows their family's history and why Rohan wanted to become a doctor. Sandeep tells Mama what Rohan told him. Mama tells him that there is something that Rohan does not know and this is the reason why Mama did not want Rohan to become a doctor. The reason is that Rohan's father was always healthy, but after Rohan turned 16, his father acquired a strange illness, for which a doctor prescribed him pills, but the doctor himself did not know what the problem really was. The illness got worse and the doctor did not consult any other doctors to get their opinion and instead told Rohan's father to increase the dosage despite knowing how strong these drugs were. One day Rohan's father collapsed as he had taken too many pills. The entire family except for Mama and Rohan, were driving Rohan's father to the hospital, but on the way there, their car was hit by the same doctor who prescribed the pills. Despite knowing that the ppl in the car were badly hurt he kept driving on leaving the family to suffer and eventually pass away. Sandeep is shocked to hear this. Rohan does not know that it was they very same doctor who was supposed to look after his father that killed his family. Sandeep tells Mama that he can imagine how hard that must have been, and explains what Rohan wants to do for CG. Mama tells him the reason he got involved with the underworld is so that he could he find the doctor and make him pay, but he has seen today as it almost cost his only nephew's life that revenge is not the solution. He tells Sandeep that he needs some time to think about it. As he walks away.

Scene 5:

Its the next morning, as Rohan wakes up and sees a briefcase with a note beside it.

The note reads:

My dear Rohan, I want to apologize first of all, as because of me you almost lost your life. I never wanted to get you involved in all of this. I want you to know that I am proud of you and love you very much. Sandeep has told me your idea and I think its a very noble cause. I know tha whereever your parents are, they are smiling down at you. Ive decided to give you what is rightfully yours, your parent's money. I will keep only a little for myself so that I can go away from here and live in peace away from the underworld. When I find my new home I will let you know. Untill then, get better soon and take care.

Your,

Mama

Rohan has a smile on his face and feels that now his Mama can finally enjoy the rest of his days in peace. Zoya walks in with some food for Rohan. She gives him a big smile and asks him why he is so happy. He tells her that his dream is finally going to come true! Zoya is very happy for him. Rohan starts asking Zoya about herself, her hobbies, life in CG etc. Zoya asks him the same as well.

The camera zooms out as Zoya and Rohan are laughing together enjoy each other's company. We see Sandeep about to come into the room, but after hearing the laughter, he has a smile on his face as he walks away...
😊

Well guys thats episode 2! Tell me what you think! I would really appreciate the feedback everyone!

Keep it real and take life easy!

Thank's!

Raoul

Originally posted by: Night-Wing

Before I share my idea im going to say that it is going to be a little daily soap like, bearing that in mind here it is:

Scene 1:

Zoya and Urmi are on their way home from the cinema and they just happen to decide to walk. On their way home they see a young man in his mid 20s walkin around looking lost. They simply pay no attention to him as they are talkin about their own things. He continues on his way and so do they, when all of a sudden they notice that some unfriendly looking guys are coming up to them. They try to run but are surrounded by about 5 or 6 of them. Then appears the young man and he takes them down. They start to get back up and the young man urmi and zoya run together to CG. As soon as they get there, the girls thank him and inquire as to why he was walkin around near CG. He introduces himself as Rohan, a doctor that has recently completed medschool and was looking for CG as his parents and family were originally from there. He lost his family in an accident and wanted to open a medschool in the town they were from as a tribute to his family. As he is talkin Zoya starts noticing that she cant stop staring at him. He finishes talking and they take him to Sandeep's and ask if he can spend the nite there. Sandeep agrees. End Scene.

Scene 2:

Its the next day. Sandeep wakes up to Rohan making chai for him. Sandeep is pleasantly suprised, but as usual doesnt show it really lol. They begin chatting and Rohan starts to tell Sandeep about his story.

Zoya is sittin at the cafe lost in her thoughts. Urmi comes and tries to talk to her. Zoya is still lost in her thoughts smiling. Urmi pretends to call Rohans name and Zoya looks around trying to find him. Urmi breaks out laughing, Zoya is slightly peeved. Urmi begins teasing Zoya about Rohan. Urmi then says shes going to go see Sandeep and Rohan and starts running to his house. Zoya chases her telling her to stop all the while Urmi is laughing. Zoya catches up to Urmi and as she is entering Sandeep's house she bumps into Rohan. She looks up at him and he starts looking at her(filmy i know lol). A moment passes and Sandeep interrupts them and tells Urmi and Zoya that he and Rohan or going to see if they can get him a permit and loan for openning his hospital/clinic. Rohan says bye and Zoya is at a loss for words. End Scene. Aek Chabhi Hai Padoss Mein! music lol.

Scene 3:

We see Sandeep and Rohan in a rickshaw as they stop at a building to meet a friend of Sandeep's that gives building permits. Mr. Saxena (Sandeep's friend) welcomes Rohan and Sandeep. He asks them if they want something warm or cold to drink. Sandeep and Rohan both get something cold. Rohan starts explaining to Mr.Saxena about how he wants to open up a medical clinic. Rohan tells him that the reason he became a doctor was to save lives. He was unable to save the lives of his parents and family, and felt terrible during the time his family passed away and he does not want anyone to feel as much pain as he did if he can help it. Mr. Saxena is very impressed by this, and tells Rohan that his reasoning behind is very honourable. However, the cost of building Rohan's clinic is not cheap. It would cost 200000 rupees to make a clinic with 6 rooms with in which ppl would be seen by the doctor, one large waiting area for patients and where the secretary's desks will be and finally a small lunchroom. Rohan and Sandeep are disheartned by this. Mr. Saxena tells him that this cost includes the labour fees for the construction crew. The crew are very efficient and can be done the office within 2 months. Mr. Saxena tells them that they have a 2 weeks to decide to come up with the money otherwise the crew will have to start on another project. Sandeep and Rohan thank Mr. Saxena and head out. End Scene 3.

Scene 4:

The 4 deewane are sitting at their usual table at the cafe playing carrom as Sandeep and Rohan step out of the rickshaw and are headed that way. They take a seat at the cafe and the owner comes and talks to them. He starts callin other ppl from the moholla to meet the man who saved to of CG's daughters. Rohan is suprised that everyone knows and tells everyone that he did what any decent young man would do. Sandeep cracks a smile and tells everyone that Rohan is very happy for all the thank you's but now he and Sandeep need to discuss some important issues and would like some time to talk. Everyone goes back to their work. At the sametime after hearing that Urmi and Zoya were in danger, and that Rohan saved them the 4 deewane are jealous and worried about Urmi and Zoya so they run to go see them.

Zoya is lying on Urmis bed looking at the ceiling while Urmi is talking about going shopping. Just then the 4 deewane rush in to see their beloeved Urmi safe and sound. The start talkin about how the whole moholla was thanking this new guy. About how brave he is and how hes such a good samaritan and how they should be doing good things like him. Zoya starts talkin about how great he is. The way he fought those guys was amazing etc. but stops short as she realizes the 4 deewane are still there.

The 4 deewane walk out trying to think of ways that they can impress Urmi. Mushtaq also feels like he did not do his brotherly duty not being there to protect his sister. End scene 4

Scene 5:

Sandeep asks Rohan about how much money he has saved up. Rohan says that although he worked and paid his own way thru medschool, his mama who raised him after his parents death, inherited all the money that his family had. In fact, his mama didnt approve of his nephew not following the family business (wont reveal what it is till the next ep). Rohan tells Sandeep that since completing medschool he hasnt spoken to his mama and he only has 100000 rupees saved up. Sandeep tells Rohan that he can still ask his mama even if the chances are low that he will get money from him. Zoya and Urmis mom hear walk by and hear about what Rohan wants to do and about his situation. Soon the entire mohalla hears and starts discussing about what they can do to help Rohan.

Zoya and Urmi are walkin home from shopping as they see Rohan admiring the fountain in the middle of the moholla. Urmi tells Zoya that this is her chance to go talk to him as Sandeep isnt around and Rohan isnt busy. As Urmi and Zoya approach, they see Rohan suddenly collapse. End of episode...

So thats my idea guys! Id love feed back. thanks in advance!!!

Keep it real and take life easy!

Raoul

Shouldnt Zoya or Urmi faint??? lol