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Poems are one of my passions and whenever admire on any subject matter, try to post a few lines to that topic with certain lines....
It's a new day, a new start, the cyclic motion from Sun to Moon to Stars,
Day begins, wear the smile, the designer covering, shows you polite & bright,
But Still the same mind, the real, the same, the Mind,
The Mind, is truth beneath designer wearings & colored hairings,
The Mind, ugly, beautiful & ambiguous,
The origin of love, lust, hate & greed, cause of success & failure in need,
The Mind, truly omnipresent, during depression & enthusiasm.
Mind experienced it all, in real, in practical,
ups & downs, tears & smiles, many faces of human in life,
It thinks & it feels, the Pain and joy after Pain,
achieving single gain after thousands efforts gone in vain,
After a long time, Mind discovered the mantra of life,
The Life, a journey without miles,
meeting uncountable minds, minds carrying truth & lies.
But still I feel it is just a start, to reach the Stars!
It's a new day, a new start, the cyclic motion from Sun to Moon to Stars,
Thanks for reading it......Subbu