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Keera Singh

@jeetone

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

This is just mindblowing. I love this part.👍🏼

A fearful feeling:I get frightened when I see that Ar..ar lady. She is always shouting and screaming in my presence. She seems to be complaining about me to Papa. My heart beats very fast. I don't know why she does that. I can't understand her. And the other lady ……. I just can't seem to do anything right. I don't know what my fault is. As for Abhi, he's a blow hot blow cold guy. But mostly he's nice. He's my younger brother, na…….

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Pari Arti Singh

@sparkle08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Superb!!!!!!!!Omg when you wrote about Antara saying to she wants to keep her papa with her beside her. 😭😭😭

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Bugger

@Bugger

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

hey skep juss edit ur title when u write it the next day so we the readers will hav an idea tht its updated!!

btw gud work as usual .u hav projected antara's feelings very well...

eeekksss i hate tht arti !! she actually needs to b taught a lesson!!

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

1true love, star1lives, Spirit, Simple

Thanks for saying you found it worth reading ......................................😆

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

My kindred spirits ................ Pen, Paddy, Princess, J tone, Bugs, SamirV and Seema

My kindred spirit all of you

Many thanks to all of you.

😉 😆 🤗

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Staruma, Indracool, Sparkle...........................Thanks so much for appreciating!!! 😊 ⭐️

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Lara

@lovepyar08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Bugger
hey skep juss edit ur title when u write it the next day so we the readers will hav an idea tht its updated!!
btw gud work as usual .u hav projected antara's feelings very well...

eeekksss i hate tht arti !! she actually needs to b taught a lesson!!

Ya these are splendid. Please edit the post. So we can jump to this topic quickly next time. . Love it. Omg. I can also see myself looking thru her eyes thinking these same thoughts. Aarti I despise.

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Bugs and Lovepyaar

I am not able to open the first page of this post. I can do so with only Google Chrome. When I edit, the post becomes garbled. Don't know what to do..........

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Padmajaan

@Padmajaan

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Skep dearest another fantastic moving piece from you as befits the horrible happenings in sweet lil Antara's life today. The poor little mite. Short, sweet, stark, dark with the searing heart rending poem addressed to the only two benign presences that the precious lil one has ever known - mamma and papa, one gone forever and the other missing from the scene and unable to help her. One scare after another for your angel today, the two prankster boys, Billu veering towards the mean today followed by the most horrendous incident ever, the creepy sounding Baba and accompanied by two vixens.

Sheer horror that you managed to bring out so so well dearest darling creative sensitive skep.

THANKS

Paddy

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: lotus1963
Skep dearest another fantastic moving piece from you as befits the horrible happenings in sweet lil Antara's life today. The poor little mite. Short, sweet, stark, dark with the searing heart rending poem addressed to the only two benign presences that the precious lil one has ever known - mamma and papa, one gone forever and the other missing from the scene and unable to help her. One scare after another for your angel today, the two prankster boys, Billu veering towards the mean today followed by the most horrendous incident ever, the creepy sounding Baba and accompanied by two vixens.
Sheer horror that you managed to bring out so so well dearest darling creative sensitive skep.

THANKS

Paddy

Paddy,

I was so horrified myself....................that poor little thing. All those stupid adults and kids have driven her up the wall. I was watching the epi as if I was seeing a horror show....... 😭

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