Dhabu89 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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So yesterday we saw what might be a long road to the healing process.......So I thought we might want to come up with a story that we feel will do justice to the current storyline. You know note down how you feel they should make-up..this is my version...Hopefully you all will enjoy it😕

It has been two days now that Simi admitted to Abhi about the propasal and about Bhalla moving in next door....Abhi's not talking to Simi and Simi is trying to pacify him but it does not work. They act civil to each other in front of the family members.....But Milli can sense something is off...She asks Simi to help her with the almari and when Simi goes into the room Milli closes and locks the door and tells Simi..."Di meine dekha aab do din se tum aur Abhi ek duje se theek tarah baathi nahi kaarte? Kuch hua kya?" And Simi tells Milli everything that happened and how Abhi found out and what is the outcome of their relationship.......Milli listens in shock and says..."Di aapne Abhi se ye chupake aacha nahi kiya....aur uus din jab Bhalla tumse baat karne ki koshish kar raha tha tab Abhi use maar ni koshish kar raha tha....Aur tumne use roka? kyun di?"

Simi thinks about it for a while and says "Milli mujhe Abhi ke gusse se bohot daar lagta hai....Agar voh Bhalla ko kuch karde ta toh Abhi ko jail ke saaza milti aur mein yahan Abhi ke bina nahi reh pati.....Milli mujhe malum hai meine ye saab chuphake baadi gaalti ki hai...Lekin mujhe tab laaga yehi karna theek hai.... "

"Milli Abhi ne mujhse doh din se baat nahi ki aur voh mere paas bhi nahi aata....agar mein uske paas jaao toh voh ooth kar kahin aur chaala jaata...Muhje samaj nahi aata kaise main aapne Abhi ko vapas aapne paas laaoo.." Milli and Simi hug each other and Milli says "do you want me to go talk to Jeeju for you?....." And Simi says "if he finds out I told you everything I am afarid he will be more mad at me..." Milli says "after all this you still want to hide this from him? Di he needs to know you talk to me sometimes and he won't be mad....But you need to stop hiding things from him......

I know Abhi loves you very much and by being away from you he is hurting just as much....You have to work hard to gain Abhi's trust and then only he will find a way to forgive you. Di you need to keep trying he is going to melt one day....trust me Di"

simi thinks about what Milli said to her and she decides to make an effort towards Abhi. It is in the evening and everyone has retired to his/her bedroom and SimBhi are upstairs...Abhi is looking for a book to read and Simi is trying to get the courage to go talk to him....Then Abhi takes his pillow and goes to sleep in the baarsaati like he has been doing for the past two days...Leaving Simi alone in the room crying....

Abhi is fast asleep and he is wakes up because he feels someone next to him...He turns over and sees Simi lying next to him and with big teary eyes she says "Abhi please mujhe maaf karo....Maine joh kiya voh galat tha..mein kabul karti hoon...Lekin itni baadi saaza maat do mujhe...Mujhe tumhare bina ek pal nahi sona. Abhi I love you and please tell me what I can do to make you love me again?" Abhi is in a sitting position by now and without looking at Simi he says "Simi you are the one who lectured me about rishtey bharoosy ke neev perkhadey hote hai. What abou you? And that day it was a matter of not having enough time alone with you to tell you and what I did. And I did it for the sake of your father and his health. What I fail to understand is how can you keep such a big secret from me and then say you were planning to tell me? When were you planning to tell me if at all......Abhi sits there holding his head in his hands with tears in his eyes and Simi goes near him and puts her head on his shoulder and says "Abhi mein sach kaheti hoon....I was going to tell you but it seemed every time I tried you looked so happy and we were having such a good time enjoying each others company I did not want to spoil it. When Bhalla moved in next door I knew I had to tell you now....But before I got the chance you found the note...."

Abhi and Simi sit there for a while not talking and then Simi goes to hold Abhi's hand while hoping and praying Abhi won't push her away....And he doesn't and that makes Simi happy....She says..."Abhi I know it won't be easy for you to forgive and forget but thank you giving me a chance to prove to you I will never do that to you again." Then slowly Abhi holds her hand as well and says "Simi I don't like to be away from you either but I felt like my world had come crashing down on me...I was the only one you used to confide in and now you not only go and handle the Bhalla situation but you keep me out of the loop. Please Simi for the sake of our marriage and the love we share lets not hide anything from each other ever again. No matter how small that matter would be."

Then Abhi gets up and puts his hand out for Simi and she puts her hand in his with tears funning down her face and they hug and Abhi says lets go inside we have a lot of making up to do and winks at her, and Simi hides her head in his shoulder out of shyness...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Simbhi2 that was so beautiful and if only the scene would go like this it would amazing. I dont mean to be the negative one but I dont think things are going to go that smooth unfortunately.
I can see a long road ahead of us and I dont think that we are going to get SR number 2 for quite a while. I did however love the last part when Abhi winked at simi. Am drooling alreadly thinking about it. On a lighter note you know what they say that make up sex is the best. So lets hope simbhi make up real soon and then YOU KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VA VA VA VOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Must say that my heart went out to abhi even in my mind I can paint a picture of when he was telling simi that his world had come crashing down. I can see his facial expressions as if it was so real and Mili she is the best sister anyone can have. She is an angel and adores simbhi together. She has always been there for simi and will always continue to do so with her love and advise. ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE POST. Lets see how close this comes to the actual scene with simbhi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very well written.👏

Please send this to sun shiners.I scare what khichdi they are going to make.They can make it a better story now like yours.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Ginac and Rumi....and thanks to Krisha for encrouging me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please send this to CVs. Let them learn how to write a scene.
Wish they take all wonderful screenplay of yours into consideration. Shanti also writes it well.
Kya yaar...dekhte hain.
Wish they forego their prestige and openly pick potential screenplay from here
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Mesimi but I thought you would be posting your own version!
I am waiting no hurry but I would like to read your thoughts....And Ginac and Rumi that goes for you too....Actually everyone
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good one yaar.😊 kaash kuch aisa ho jaye. let us hope for the best. awesome 👏👏😊
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Too good yaar just send this to the Sunshiners, i hope they convey the CV's to consider ideas from your wonderful script... I wish they show it this way...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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KYA YAAR mujhe hi April fool bana diya in the month of May

I got up and started to read and my thoughts were you found this article in Telly-😍chakaar .com or somewhere and loved it and kept on reading thinking this thread like the last one may not disappear after i press the like button. After I pressed the like button***** to my astonishment this is all make believe **and I was the one believing it .

Simbhi2 too good yaar but don't do it so beautifully again....... and you may send it to the Sunshine's if you please...... but as rumi wrote thier khichdi is cooked and this is no avail to them at this late of the game and the only thing I may add to this is....

IF WISHES WERE HORSES BEGGARS WOULD RIDE!!!!!!😍

Edited by SaNiCo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaNiCo

KYA YAAR mujhe hi April fool bana diya in the month of May

I got up and started to read and my thoughts were you found this article in Telly-😍chakaar .com or somewhere and loved it and kept on reading thinking this thread like the last one may not disappear after i press the like button. After I pressed the like button***** to my astonishment this is all make believe **and I was the one believing it .

Simbhi2 too good yaar but don't do it so beautifully again....... and you may send it to the Sunshine's if you please...... but as rumi wrote thier khichdi is cooked and this is no avail to them at this late of the game and the only thing I may add to this is....

IF WISHES WERE HORSES BEGGARS WOULD RIDE!!!!!!😍

Thank You Ma'am....I am beyond humbled to think you thought this was a article from chakaar.com or something....I want everyone to post what they feel should happen...I would love to read your thoughts on how this tiff situation should be handled😃
And one more thing I don't think the CV's should read this post there are far better ones from Mesimi, Ssree, Shanti, Raksha and others who have better imagination.......Me I am a hopless romantic.......And after watching Neil I am beyond hopless😆
Edited by SimBhi2 - 15 years ago

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