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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: KBfanNo1

pls post soon Di.......

I will try to post it tomorrow. I have not started it yet. Yaar simbhi ke liye naye naye idea likhne padte hai na.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: KBfanNo1

Di Yeh kab post karogee app

aaj mil jayega yaar. It will be posted today,😊 The best simbhi story in new light.😊
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

App ki sab stories are awesome.... i like all your FFs and you are the best... We love u so much

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kya yaar aap log!! Malum hai shayaad humme es hafte kuch dekhna mille? Asha rakho.....Aab to kuch kuch to hona hi chaiya!!!! Mein intezaar karte karte dhak gayi😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Episode #3 Coming Closer as Abhi gets Hurt

Simi is walking with Abhi holding his hand, The road is completely empty with a car or 2 passing by every few seconds. One car passby closely with few boys making a comment about Laila Mjanu holding hands. Simi gets scared grips Abhi's hand tightly as if she is very scared. Abhi says: simi Daro mat mai huna Aise logoki baate sun kar man se nahi lagate. Mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga. Bhala Matarani ne jab tumhara haath mere haath me diya hai toh Mai kaise. Shayad zindagi me paheli baar aisa kuch karne ka mauka mila hai. Toh Tum daro mat. Mai apni jaan dekar tumari Raksha karunga. Garv se chalo. Hum koi gunah nahi kar rahe hai, Jise jo manana hai woh mane>"

Simi replies: "Nahi re mujhe koi dar nahi hai ab,, Tumhara sath hai tum mere sath ho phir mujhe kis baat .Sach kaha matarani ne tumhe mere Rakshak bana ke bhej diya hai. Mujhe viswas nahi ho raha ke mai aise badmasho ko juto se thaapdo se marne wali ladki aaj kuch bure insaano se dar gayi. Magar ab nahi darungi. Tumhara haath pakadne bhi mujhe koi shram nahi hai, kyon ki mataranine to hamara ye rishta joda hai. Ek Rakshak aur ek abla nari. Sach kahun Kal mai itna dar gayi thi maano mere picche meri maut bhag rahi thi, Gundo me roop me aur Thand ke roop me, magar mera saubhagya tha ki mujhe ek faristhe ke roop me tum mil gaye. Tumne apne badan se apni shirt bhi utar le dedi aur apne aap thand me.. Accha hua tumhe kuch nahi hua, Bhala kaise kuch hota tumhare sir pe meri rakshaki jimmewari jo thi,

Jab tum so rahe the toh Mai tumhe dekhti hi rahi thi. Tumhe shayad laga hoga dekhona ye ladki kaisi pagal hai. Magar mujhe viswas nahi ho raha tha ke mere saamne ek ladka soya hai jo sacche roop me ek farishta hai, Mai kal mar bhi sakti thi. Magar tumne mujhe nayi zindagi dedi. Mai dekh rahi thi farishte kaise hote hai. Aur meri nazare tumhare chehere se nahi hat rahi thi. Thank god you are ok . Meri matarani tumhe sari khushi aur lambi ayu de."

Abhi says: "it is nothing like that. I am not an angel. I am a human with lots of flaws. Probabely more than you know. I was feeling so bad that I was not able to do anything much when your condition was worsening and drinking in front of you, You must be thinking look at this guy he has no shame. But I was so cold I thought I was going to die and forced to drink. I am really sorry about that."

Simi says: "abhi sorry mat kaho. I understand. Lo ye phone booth aa gaya, Ab tum phone kar lo. Abhi says: No you call first. Your parents will be very worried, Simi calls. RS picks up the phone and simi and RS cries. Simi says: "papaji mai bilkul thik hun. Mujhe ek farishte ne bachaya . Woh mere sath hai or mujhe ghar pahochayega. Aap sab thik hona." Rs says: haan beta. Ab jaan me jaan ayi hai. Hum me se koi so nahi paya, Lo manjuji se baat karo." Manju says:" simi beta thik hona . Dekho maine sab sun liya, Tum ghar tab tak nahi ana jab tak sab thik na ho, Aur haan usko apne saath lana jisne meri simi ko bachaya hai. Apna khayal rakhna."

Simi replies: "maa mai phone rakhti hun. Abhi ko bhi apane ghar phone karna hai. Phone ka network milte hi mai phone karke aap ko sab bataoungi. "

Abhi calls his mom and tells her he is ok and he tried to help simi and they got trapped, He lost the network and could not call. Ran out of gas and will try to comeback after dropping simi home.

Anusha Says: beta we were worried, I am so proud of you beta, Please hurry home and be careful and safe, abhi says: mom I will . I will call you soon.

Abhi says: mujhe to bahut bhookh lagi hai, Ky hum dono pass ek dhabe me j sakte hai? Tum chal paogi? Shayd wahan se koi help mil jaye to car me gas daal ke hum wapas chal sake,

Simi says: "chalo aaj tum jahan le jaoge wahan jaoungi . Waise bhookh se mano meri bhi jaan ja rahi hai. Mai sab kuch control kar sakti hun magar apni bhookh nahi. They again walk hand in hand. Simi says: abhi mujhe viswas nahi ho raha kal mujhme bolne ki bhi taqat nahi thi magar aaj man kaheta hai tumse itni baate karun . Tum jaisa pyara dost jo mujhe mila hai.. Waise mai jayda bolti nahi. Magar tumhe dekh kar pata nahi. Shyad mujhe tum jaisa dost aaj tak nahi mila. Aur baato me ye rashta bhi jaldi khatam ho jayega. Kahin mai tumhara sir to nahi kha rahi, wiase mujhe bhi jab bhookh lagi ho to koi bak bak kare who saha nahi jata. Agar aisa kuch ho to bata dena. Mai bilkul chup ho jaoungi Mujhe aaj aisa lag raha hai maano me "Sholay ki basanti ban gayi hun" Simi laughs looking at abhi.

Abhi says: ek baat kahun aapse, aap bura to nahi manegi. Aap ki hasee aur baate bahut pyari hai. Aap hasti ho to bahut khubsurat dikhti ho, Aap hamesha hasati raho. I bet aapki college me kayi ladke aapki ye khubsurat hasee ke diwane honge. Mai aapki juth muth tareef nahi kar raha. Sach me aapki baate aur hasee bahut pyari lagati hai." Simi blushes holding abhi's hand tighter, Abhi looks at her and simi smiles. They arrive at Dhaba, Abhi orders food and brings candy bar for them. Simi initially refuses : abhi says: you need some energy forget about dieting for today. I know ladkiya jayada weight conscious hoti hai. Magar aap jaise hai khubsurat hai. Koi bhi ladka aap par mar mitega. Mai sach kahe raha hun. Aap lijye. Apko bahut accha lagega Khana aane me thodi der lagagi, Chai aa rahi hai. Simi grabs candy bar they both enjoy, Then they sip hot tea talking more. Few more people arrives. Abhi simi is enjoying each other's company,

Abhi goes to talk to some one. Simi is looking at him thinking: abhi is a blessings matarani sent in my life when I needed some one so badly. Kya abhi hi mera pyar hai mera who prince charming hai, I never felt like this for any one before, I don't know what is happening to me, I just knew him for less than 24 hours and yet feels like I know him for years I am really going crazy for him and my heart is wanting him so badly or It is just admiration since he saved me, I need to find out how feels about me before buiding all my dreams that might get shattered soon. For god;s sake he is 4 years younger than me, He might already have some one in his life. Simi stop at once. Simi taps her face. Abhi is coming there watches her and asks: are you ok what happened. Why were you slaping yourself. Simi lied it was just a bug bothering me,

Abhi jokes: dekho aap sab ko pyari lagti ho bugs bhi ab aap ko pareshan karte hai, Simi says aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Tum apne bare me batao. Tumhari koi girlfriend?

Abhi says: I thought I did many but after last night and after seeing you and making you my friend . I don't think I have met any real person yet, Past 24 hours have taught me about life or you can say I got a wake up call from matarani. Now I know what I have to do with my life . I feel like I wasted my life after useless things and made me realize what is more important in life and what gives one pleasure. To tell you the truth when you see yourself standing next to death it makes you realize your mistakes and that you have not done all you wanted to do and time is slipping away and you will never have chance, But now I got a second chance. So I am not wasting it. I really like to thank you for this. If you had not met me. You have changed me completely and I will never forget that. I love to be your friend for life. Abhi asks her about her boyfriend or man in her life.

Food arrives they enjoys food, As they finishes food . Abhi tries to pay bill. Simi holds his hand saying: abhi tumne mere liye kafi kuch kar liya ab mujhe bill pay karne do; Ye mat bhulo I am a working woman and also older than you. Consider this an order, Abhi says jokingly : yes mam and professor too, Go ahead mai aapko rokunga nahi. Maine socha tha aap mujhe badhiya se restaurant me le jayegi, magar ghar ka aapke hathose bana khana bhi chalega, Aapka itni asanise chutkara nahi hoga. Abhi laughs. Simi really likes him. She jokes: you will get both. But how do you know I am good cook. Shayad mere haath ka khana khakar tum khana hi bhul jao. I was just kidding ma always says I am a very good cook, Abhi says: then a deal you have to invite me for home cooked food, Abhi extends his hand. Simi holds it and says: promise.

A guy arrives their with Gas in the can and drops them to Abhi 's jeep. They both are quiet, Abhi fills gas in his jeep and they start back their Journey. They are both in good mood and happy and anxious to go back home to their loved ones. .

Simi says: thank you for saving me, How can I change you? I owe you so much including my life. About boy friend or any man no. Aisa koi aaj tak mila hi nahi. Haan ek ladke se baat chal rahi hai magar mai ab taiyaar nahi hun. Past 24 hours has changed me too. I want to marry some one I really love and admire. Abhi stops his jeep breaking suddenly. Simi finds a road block. With big rocks. Abhi asks her to stay inside and get down leaving the door open. As he is removing rocks he hears simi screaming Abhi bachao. He sees simi fighting with a man looking like a hoodlum trying to grab simi and cover her mouth. Abhi rushes with big rock. But he sees more men coming out grabbing him and trying to beat him up. Abhi beats them up and approaches his jeep, He sees men coming after him He asks simi to lock the jeep from inside and fights with men. Simi is scared as she sees abhi fallen on the ground bleeding and men are beating him up . He tries to fight back , But he is bleeding. Simi can't see him get beat up more and prays to Matarani save my abhi. Bhale gunde mere kuch bhi kare magar abhi ko bachao. Aap unki Raksha karo. Simi hears a siren and runs out on the road and sees a police car she scream standing on the road. Bachao bacho. All the hoodlums seeing a police Van run away. Simi rushes to Abhi and tries to wake him She puts his head on her lap and cries sitting on the middle of the road. She screams for help. Police arrives . Simi tells them everything. Police brings water and splash on abhi;s face. Abhi opens his eyes, One police stops and puts bandages on abhi and at simi's request drive them to nearest hospital. Abhi is bandaged and ask to stay till things are calmer. But abhi is worried about simi. And says: No I have to go drop her, Simi says: No I will stay with you, Maa ne kaha hai jab tak safe na ho tumhare saath hi rahena. Tum kafi hurt huye ho. Tum aram karo. Mai yahan rukti hun.Simi cries Ye sab meri vajah se hua hai. I am really sorry. Thanks for saving me again.

Abhi says: Don't worry I am fine . Please stop crying. Aap rote acchhi nahi lagti. Chaliye muskuraiye, Mujhe pain killer se aram hai ab.. I know your parents will be worried and mine too. Chalo. Mai ghar jake aram karunga. Ab hume kuch nahi hoga I promise. Tum apne ghar phone kar lo. Hum aa rahe hai. Simi calls Manju that they are close by and will be home shortly.

In few minutes simi arrives home and insists abhi to meet her family. And take some rest there . Abhi says: No I will go now . I will meet your family some other time. Simi says: please call me as soon as you reach home holding his hand. And thank you for everything. Please do not forget to call me. She hands him her number and puts his number in her phone. Simi asks him to be careful and come back here if there is any danger holding and sqeezing his hand,, Abhi assures her: I will be fine don't worry and I will call you as soon as I make it home. You take care of yourself and rest.

Simi watches him go as her heart is weeping feeling like she is loosing her best friend she never wanted to let go. She feels like some thing is breaking in her heart and she has tears in her eyes, looking at the jeep going away. Simi wipes her tears and enters her home and hugs her papaji and cries hard.

To be continued.

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Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Very Nice Di.. and Thanks for posting this 1 day in advance..
Its so beautifully described and i liked the way they both asked each other about their GF and BF...
and title is so justified.. coming closer...
and how sweetly can 2 souls meet each other take care of each other ...
I am now more anxious to know how they fall in love ( which looks like Simi is already in) and how the story progresses further...
Very nice as usual...
You really make our weekend glow with your sweet FFs and we can admire our lovely Simbhi more.
Thanks again DI
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
raksha di, nice FFsince its a new one waiting to see where the story leads to
Just i felt that Simi thanking Abhi was a bit more. means thanking him once was ok, but keeping on telling and thanking him , i felt was a bit exaggerated. ( this is just my view point. this is what i felt . )
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so sweet episode di.....
just made little time to read ur FF...
this was splendid episode....
there were glorious moments of simbhi ....
actually always ,devilish goons used to make someone close to each other and here were simbhi....
thanks a lot,
sahanaya...🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Wow di... who knew that the goons will be good for SimBhi. I loved the end the most where Simi thought she was loosing her best friend.. so sweet. love how everything is described and also loved the part when abhi and simi were talking which was most of it. 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just a thought.....I am taking a vote....How many of you think Raksha should quit everything she is doing and just concentrate on writting FF's so we get more than one chapter a week?😆
One vote from me😃
Anyone else?

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