Manju's dilemma as a mother

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

Baithe hai aaj takiye me mooh chupaye huye

shikwa kare to kis se kare

kulhadi jab pairo pe mar di

pakde hai pair uske aaj

jisko pairo me hona tha

kismat bhi dekho kaise kaise din dikhati hai

bete ne chhina sab kuch aaj

jispe umar bhar ke sahare ki aas bandhi thi

betiyaan ban ke rahi hai

sahara jiski umeed na kabhi thi

luta hai aaj chaman ko

bagbaan ne jisko rakhwala samja tha

socha tha banke bete ki ma raj karungi

bana diya hai jisne ye abhsihap umar ka

shikwa kare toh kisse kare

jab paio pe kulhadi maar di

Edited by ramas - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

kismat bhi dekho kaise kaise din dikhati hai

No such thing as pre-destiny . . . all we have are good people and bad people . . .

bete ne chhina sab kuch aaj

jispe umar bhar ke sahare ki aas bandhi thi

Then one is unfamiliar with 'a daughter is a daughter all your life, a son is a son till he takes a wife'

shikwa kare toh kisse kare

jab paio pe kulhadi maar di

kissise nahin shiva karne ki zarroorat (I appreciate the poetry fine) . . . get up . . . dust yourself off and be ready for the next day . . . the Sethis are still better off than most . . . Simi is employed and why Neetu isn't remains a mystery, but she needs to get on the ball . . . and RS needs to file suit against the association (which I think would allow him to ply trade until the issue is resolved?)

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Bun Maska

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice poetry Raksha and touching too....and i agree with SVG.....definately the Sethi's are better off then many others...and they need to get up and fight it out together.....the last scene in which they showed the parents hugging the 3 daughters was too good....thats what i wanted to see...👍🏼

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ramas

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SValeCalGal
kismat bhi dekho kaise kaise din dikhati hai

No such thing as pre-destiny . . . all we have are good people and bad people . . .

bete ne chhina sab kuch aaj

jispe umar bhar ke sahare ki aas bandhi thi

Then one is unfamiliar with 'a daughter is a daughter all your life, a son is a son till he takes a wife'

shikwa kare toh kisse kare
jab paio pe kulhadi maar di

kissise nahin shiva karne ki zarroorat (I appreciate the poetry fine) . . . get up . . . dust yourself off and be ready for the next day . . . the Sethis are still better off than most . . . Simi is employed and why Neetu isn't remains a mystery, but she needs to get on the ball . . . and RS needs to file suit against the association (which I think would allow him to ply trade until the issue is resolved?)

so true I can describe the feelings poetc way better than words. So true daughters are daughters forever and sons are sons till they are married,