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Posted: 15 years ago
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that good for nothing scum bag RB some one should shoot him. I hope he does not hurt Abhi. great part.
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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What a suspense >< Please continue!! I hope Abhi isn't hurt =[ And this love story can't end! It hasn't even started properly =/

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: .-Wish-.

What a suspense >< Please continue!! I hope Abhi isn't hurt =[ And this love story can't end! It hasn't even started properly =/

That was exactly what I was aiming for, SUSPENSE! I will try to continue soon 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys, I posted this a little early because I know that you were really eager for the next part. ENJOY -

Episode 4 - Abhi Gets Shot

Rajiv fires, aiming for Simi. Abhi pushes her away taking the shot. "ABHI!!!"

He gets shot in the chest, but not the heart. Rajiv laughs. Simi calls an ambulance. Rajiv says not to do that or else she will get shot. Simi says that she doesn't care. Rajiv tries to shoot but runs out of bullets. The ambulance arrives and Simi quickly takes Abhi in ignoring the fact that Rajiv scurried off. She gets into the ambulance with Abhi and sees that he is unconscious. She rips a piece of her salwar and tries to stop the bleeding. "Don't worry, you'll be alright! Can you please drive faster?!!" Simi says. They reach the hospital. Simi rushes Abhi in the E.R. She is crying and the doctor says not to worry.

It is 7:30 PM already. Simi gets worried about her family and what they might be thinking. But then she realizes Abhi is more important right now. She prays for him. It is 8:00 PM and the doctor comes out. "No need to worry, he is okay. Just needs some rest, you can meet him right now!" Simi rushes into his room. Abhi smiles. Simi asks if he is okay. Abhi says that she doesn't need to worry. Simi feels like going down to the ground and telling Abhi that she loves him. But Simi comes out and cries.

Simi wipes her tears. The doctor tells her that Abhi has to stay in the hospital for a few days. Simi says that it is okay. She goes back into the room and tells Abhi that she will come to meet him every day, but now she has to go home. Abhi says okay. Simi leaves and takes a rickshaw home. She remembers the ride she took with Abhi. When Simi reaches home, no one even bothers to ask her where she was. Rajinder is eating with Anuj, Nitu is daydreaming, and Manju and Mili are cutting vegetables in the kitchen. Simi quietly goes to her room.

On the other hand, Abhi is lying in his bed. He calls Anita and tells her everything. He says not to tell his parents. Anita promises and hangs up. Abhi goes to sleep. Abhi suddenly starts coughing and his heart rate goes up. The doctors have to put an oxygen mask on him.

The next day, after Abhi is examined, someone comes into Abhi's room. She is tall, and had a dark sweater on. The person cuts the oxygen. Simi is walking up the hospital aisle heading to Abhi's room. The person had a knife in their hand. Abhi starts coughing again and sees the person. He is shocked. Simi opens the door. Will Abhi get stabbed, or will Simi save him?

  • Please pardon any typos and post comments!

Another twist in the story!

Edited by zfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh no!!! please dont let abhi get stabbed now!!! let simi save him!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Will post another episode soon!

Edited by zfan - 15 years ago
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Episode 5 - I Love You / Rajiv Dies

Simi walks in Abhi's room and sees the person. "Abhi!" she screams. Simi rushes to the person who is in shock. She tries to get the knife out of the person's hand. "Khon ho tum??" Simi says. The person doesn't reply. They continue to struggle while Abhi gets up. The person nearly stabs Simi but Abhi stops her. "Meri Simi chuna maht!" Abhi says. The person pushes Abhi away. Abhi turns to Simi and says that no matter what happens -

- I LOVE YOU! -

The Girl takes out a cloth and covers Simi's and Abhi's mouth with it. The next thing you know, they're blacked out. She puts them on a gurney and puts on a fake nurse suit. When the person comes out with the gurney, nobody questions her. She rushes downstairs with Abhi and Simi and puts them in a car. Then she drives away. When Abhi and Simi wake up, they are at a waterfall. They come out of the car and sees Rajiv. Oh Boy, Not Again!!! Simi thinks.

Also, Abhi sees the girl that was trying to stab him. "We have finally been reunited … bhaiya!" she says. Simi is shocked to hear that the girl is Abhi's sister. She is really puzzled. The girl explains that a couple of years ago, she married against her dad's will and cursed him. They kept arguing and she left home promising to seek her revenge. She also says that her name is Piya.

"So you teamed up with Rajiv?? Typical of you!" Abhi says. Piya says that NOW, Simi and Abhi will die. She raises a gun. But instead, she points it at Rajiv and gives him two shots in his head and heart. Clearly, he died. Piya's eyes wells up and runs to Abhi. She hugs him and says that she learnt her lesson. She says that she teamed up with RB to give him a taste of his medicine.

Abhi forgives her and Simi smiles. She gives Piya a hug too.

Simi brings Piya home and asks her mom if she can stay for a while. Abhi explains everything about Piya. Manju and Rajinder give their consent. Simi takes Piya to her room. Piya says thanks for everything. Simi smiles. Abhi is in the bathroom and is thinking about that he said to Simi. He remembers that he said he loved her and is eager to see how she will react. Simi is thinking the same thing. Piya knows that Abhi loves Simi and thinks - I came here for something else than to mae Rajiv pay. I came here to unite you and Abhi! To Be Continued

Will Piya be able to unite SimBhi? Please comment!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys, PLZ comment. 😊
Edited by zfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update keep it up. I like the new entry piya. I like bold piya way better than dumb cunning anit as abhi's sister.and a great news no more RB that is the best news. I hope we hear the same in KB episode.
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

great update keep it up. I like the new entry piya. I like bold piya way better than dumb cunning anit as abhi's sister.and a great news no more RB that is the best news. I hope we hear the same in KB episode.

Thanks Raksha di, we ALL want no more RB. 😆

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