Chapter 3

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hi frnds this part is the continuation of the 2nd part on page 3rd.... so here is it Big smile

same part.... in the continuation of the 2nd part

as for a while the scene shifts to the present in the jail, when aman smiles and tells about the fights which were regular at his home, 13 years ago... and then the lawyer smiles and says

L: SO, your mother loved u very deeply, A:- yes... she understood me better than my father, (he again smiles and says) she always used to save me from my father's scoldings. L:- what happened then???,

A:- sir, i was a very ambitious guy, my intention was never to live an ordinary life of a shopkeeper's son... i wanted to achieve something big in life.. one day it happened that.......

scene again goes to the flashback.....

those days, my father's friend's son Harry was my best friend, we spent our childhood together, and my father always used to praise him ... he was doing a job in a multinational company in mumbai,

scene shifts to Darjeeling in the flashback

Harry:- how r u my frnd??? Wassup??, A:- yaa, everything is fine…, H;- today uncle(aman's father) came to my house…he was quite worried about you aman, why don't you join him in the shop, A:- no harry… this is what I don't want from my life… I want something more… H:- what u want to do???, A:- I want to become a fashion photographer.. A:- did u tell this to uncle… (aman makes a face and says) A:- no, not now… H:- why??? What r u waiting for??, A:- harry, I am waiting for the right time… u know I did a course in this, but my carrier cannot see the light of the day in this small hill station.. I need to go to Mumbai… but how will I get the money… and if my father gets to know about it, he will like, kill me…. H:- don't worry, everything will be fine, if u don't mind, shall I talk to uncle.. A:- ohh no… don't do this.. I know how to handle my old man (harry laughs)… BUT HARRY… frnd like u live in Mumbai… can u do me a favour?? H:- yaa sure… plss tell me, A:- day after tomorrow, u r going back to Mumbai, can u arrange me a place to live, I will manage everything after that… H:- so u have decided???( aman says wid confidence) yesss…. H:- but, do take care of the old man….(aman smiles) A:- ohh sure, I will….
   
Now the scene for a while shifts to aman and the lawyer, and then aman says

" and then harry leaves for Mumbai, as I told him to search a place for me to live, he did exactly what I told him, after one month..i was sitting in a cyber caf and was searching some big companies addresses in Mumbai, from where I can start my work with… after sitting there for more than an hour, finally I got the address of a fashion company of mumbai, who want new and fresh talents to work with…. And from here I got my way… I took the address and after a while I got a call from harry"

scene again goes to the flashback

H:- hello aman.., A:- hey.. harry.. how r u my frnd.. H:- I am fine, and I have a good news for you, A:- yes… and that is, H:- well I got you a place to live, now u better pack ur bags and come to Mumbai… (aman gets very happy and relaxed..) A;- ohh thanks yaar.. thankyou very much.. H:- never mind… n one thing more I am sending you some money, u will need it in your journey to Mumbai… A:- OHH THANKS YAAR… I don't know, how shall I say thanks to you.. I think u r better than my old man… (harry laughs) H:- but did u talked to your old man… A:- no yaar, I have to talk to him, H:- WHAT.. u didn't even talked to him… c'mon what are u waiting for??? In one week u have to move from Darjeeling to Mumbai….Go and talk to your father, and tell him about it… A;- yaa yaa I will…. H:- yaa, anyways take care…byeee… A;- yaa byeee…
[aman now thinks, that how he will talk to his father about it]

scene shifts it's evening time… aman was in his room and in tension he was roaming from one corner to another corner of his room… and when his mother see him in tension she comes inside the room

"Aman's mother":- what happened aman??? (aman looks at her mother in tension, but tries to smile and says) A:- nothing mom.. it's ok… Mother:- no son?? It doesn't seem to be ok…(and then she goes near aman and keeps her hand on his shoulder) Mother:- tell me aman.. why u r looking so tensed… (and after asking so many times, aman atlast speaks the truth, first he holds his mother's hand and then he says).. A:- mom…. Do you want me to become something big in life???, Mother:- well, I think every mother wishes that… A:- mom, you very know that I did a course in fashion photography and designing, Mother:- yes…, A:- mom, now I am getting a chance to make my dreams come true… mom I want to go to Mumbai.. (his mother gets tensed…. And says) Mother;- Mumbai ?????, A;- mom listen to me… the kind of life I imagined for me, it will never be possible in Darjeeling… as there is no opportunity here, M:- look son?? I don't have any problem with ur ambition BUT…. (and when they see at the door.. aman's father was standing and he heard the conversation of his wife and son… and he gets very angry.. and without uttering a word.. aman's father goes to his room, and then aman's mother also goes to aman's father to make him understand and aman was standing there silently)….

Scene again shifts to the present in the jail

A:- that day a big fight happened in the house… but who knew that this was my last fight with my father…

Scene again shifts to the flashback

[Aman's mother, goes to her room… and aman's father was changing his clothes with anger]

[Aman's mother a little bit nervous to talk, but she gathers some courage and breaks the silence]…

Aman's mother:- look, please listen to me… (aman was standing at the doorstep of the room, and aman's father was keeping his clothes in the cupboard silently, and the aman's mother again calls)… please… listen to me for once… (and then aman's father looks back at aman's mother in anger, and shouts) aman's father:- PLEASE NOW KEEP QUIET… ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!!!! (aman's both sisters comes out of their rooms and stands at the door step, aman's mother was quite and listening) Aman's father:- YOU!! YOU R THE ONE WHO SPOILT HIM…. But sudha…now u crossed all the limitations… what u said?? U have no problems with his dreams… u know what, even I don't have problems with dreams….(and then he moves towards aman and says)… BUT… there is a big difference between dreams and reality…. You should see your status before dreaming.. I know how I am taking care of this family…. U r having two sisters, I am saving money for their marriage.. BUT YOU… such a shameless creature…. INSTEAD of helping to save the money.. u want to waste my savings in your stupidity… A:- DAD!! This is no stupidity… I very well know what I want from my life, I do care for my sisters… but it does not mean that I sacrifice my carrier for them….. (aman's father looks shocked and shattered about what his son was saying) Aman's father;- what u said???? Come again, what u said??? , A:- I SAID… that let me live the way I want… let me pursue my carrier… and one thing more.. just because u gave shelter to me, it does not mean that I am going to take the headache to save money for my sisters's wedding.. (now his father looses his temper, and after a pause he says) Aman's father;- r u watching ur son sudha… look at him, what he is saying… he is saying why he is going to take the responsibility as a brother…. NOW LISTEN TO ME AMAN…. I want you to choose either your carrier or this family….

Scene again shifts to the present in the jail and the lawyer says to aman

Lawyer:- and you defiantly chosen your carrier??? Isn'it… (aman looks at the lawyer and says) A:- yes……

Scene again goes to the flashback….

Aman's father:- (he gets shocked… and the he says to his wife)… sudhaa, tell him to pack his bags, … and leave the house right now….and tell him.. to never show his face again… Aman's mother:- NO PLSSS.. don't do this… he is our one and only son…. Aman's father:- sudhaa, a person who runs from his responsibility can't become a son nor a brother…. Tell him to get out of my house……(this completely hurts aman's ego, he packs his bags and in the night he leaves the house in anger.. aman's mother and sisters try to stop him but he do not stop and when he was leaving the house his father was sitting inside and crying silently)….

Scene now comes back to the present in the jail and aman talking to his lawyer

This was my last meeting with my father…. I never knew that destiny will play such a cruel game with me…. (and aman's lawyer was listening to him silently)…

This part ends here…. Keep checking this fanfic. I will update the third part very soon… till then read it and do comment…….. Embarrassed Big smile Smile




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