Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 5

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul 1 years ago Ak kiss was romantic. Sad that they decided to forget it.
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago [QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]OMG!!!!! tht was an AMAZINGLY RIDICULOUSLY GUD prt!!!!
running out of
adjectives!!! i LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!! OMFG!!!! they FINALLY
kissed.... i like passed out... hehehe.... not really!!! but tht was
sooo... idk the word... but AMAZING!!! i had a goofy smile on my face
when i reading this prt... it was ssoooo cuteeee!!!! thnk God they r
not going to break their friendship over a kiss!!! coz tht'd b too sad!!!
i mean... i am sad tht they still havent realized their feelings for each
other... but its better than not being friends at all!!! YAY... i am sooo
happy after reading this prt... but idk why... hehehe.... i need to calm
down nd stop babling... God... i am sooooo hyper!!!! hehehe!!!! i
CANNOT wait to read more.... so continue soon!!!! [/QUOTE]
lol thanks a LOT!! loved ur comments lol funny girl! their friendship is too important to both of them! lol glad i had that effect on u lol!
[QUOTE=lil_desi_goddes]wow!! they kissed!! amazing!! brilliant!! wow!! i loved it!![/
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please do continue soon!





[/QUOTE]lol thanks sooo much!![QUOTE=angullgrl91]omg. ur such a good writer. that last part was
sooooooooooooooooo romantic and it was soooooo cute. cont soon. cant
wait 4 ak 2 get closer. [/QUOTE]aww soo sweet! lol gotta love the romance lol! i cant wait for them to get close myself lol jk!
thanks a bunch!
muni ur soo sweet for saying that lol but seriously your too good yourself!! hands down ur one of my favorite writers![QUOTE=nehagupta_9]Awesome part... it was quite unexpected for both of
them i am sure about dat!!!!!! Glad that it didnt effect their
friendship, but i wonder when they r gunna realise their feelings!!!!!
[/QUOTE]yup it was quite unexpected! thanks! *****lol thanks for the comments lol actually when i was writing the parta couple weeks ago i ended up having them confess at the end and next day i was like WHOA, getting ahead there arent we lol but i do know a
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 17 years ago Awesome part... it was quite unexpected for both of them i am sure about dat!!!!!! Glad that it didnt effect their friendship, but i wonder when they r gunna realise their feelings!!!!!
munizaaa
Muniza Abdul @munizaaa 17 years ago CAN'T breath!!! Wow numera, can't believe never read any of your FF's before, you are an awesome writer. Loved the last too parts. Cont. Soon PLZZZZZZZZ.... munizaaa39191.3353240741
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 17 years ago awesome part!! fab kisss ....really romantic!! continuee soon
angullgrl91
angullgrl91 @angullgrl91 17 years ago omg. ur such a good writer. that last part was sooooooooooooooooo romantic and it was soooooo cute. cont soon. cant wait 4 ak 2 get closer.
lil_desi_goddes
Aakriti Mehta @lil_desi_goddes 17 years ago wow!! they kissed!! amazing!! brilliant!! wow!! i loved it!![/ COLOR please do continue soon!
berkeleygirl818
Rutu @berkeleygirl818 17 years ago OMG!!!!! tht was an AMAZINGLY RIDICULOUSLY GUD prt!!!! running out of adjectives!!! i LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!! OMFG!!!! they FINALLY kissed.... i like passed out... hehehe.... not really!!! but tht was sooo... idk the word... but AMAZING!!! i had a goofy smile on my face when i reading this prt... it was ssoooo cuteeee!!!! thnk God they r not going to break their friendship over a kiss!!! coz tht'd b too sad!!! i mean... i am sad tht they still havent realized their feelings for each other... but its better than not being friends at all!!! YAY... i am sooo happy after reading this prt... but idk why... hehehe.... i need to calm down nd stop babling... God... i am sooooo hyper!!!! hehehe!!!! i CANNOT wait to read more.... so continue soon!!!! berkeleygirl81839190.7220949074
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