Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 4

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul 1 years ago Ak scene was funny.np necklace scene was romantic. The last scene was funny.
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago haha thanks! i hope ur going to love the continuation from the last part too!
[QUOTE=Iqbal Neha1]that was really good
it looks as if anjali and kavya are getting closer loved the idea of a paint fight.
angad and kripa are too good love the way they annoy each other shows how much there care 4 each other.
neev and prachi hope they realise soon that they are more than friends
love the way you described the relationship between the three pairs
its mind blowing
cant wait 2 read the next part
[/QUOTE]thanks thanks!! im happy your liking it so far!
[QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]AWESUM prt!!!
i am NOT liking the FF so far.... i am loving
it so far!!!

awww.... Kripa's soooo cute.... scared of Saw movies??? r they really tht
scary??? i never watched them sooo!!! sitting on Angad's lap???
haiiiyyy... i wis I cud sit in his lap!!! jk... their fights r tooo cute
too!!! i LOVE it!!!

Kavy & Anjali... coloring each other... sooo cuteee!!!! although... i
prefer not getting painted on... KA r strting to get through a
conversation without biting each other's head off!!! niiiccceee!!!
hope they strt to 'like' each other soon too... nd then fall in loooove!!!

Neev & Prachi r soooo adorable.... falling on top of each other.... classic....
hehehe.... not tht i didnt like it... i LOVED it... God... why did they have to
get interuppted by the crazy laughter??? ruin a perfect moment... ughhh...
hehehe... hope they too realize their looove soon... sooo then there can b
lovey dovey moments... which i TOTALLY adore btw....

YAYAY!!!! the next prt will b romantic.... CANNOT wait to read it.... soooo
PLEASE continue soon!!!!


p.s. sorry for being late!!!


[/QUOTE]HAHAHA!!! lol well apparently the Saw movies are scary lol every time the movie comes up in discussion ppl always cringe talking about it! lol i wish i could sit on his lap too no jk... alrite its a joke lol hehe well of course Kavya and Anjali are gonna fall in l
angelic shaz
shazeena @angelic shaz 17 years ago amazing!! every1 is soo good and like how u portrayed their friend ship is realli good cnt wait 4 next part keep the gd work up u r doing a fab job !!!!
Cytherea
Cytherea @Cytherea 17 years ago awesum update yaar,,,all 3 of them are the perfectcouples...lolzZz..wonder when they'll realize they luv each oder..
berkeleygirl818
Rutu @berkeleygirl818 17 years ago AWESUM prt!!! i am NOT liking the FF so far.... i am loving it so far!!! awww.... Kripa's soooo cute.... scared of Saw movies??? r they really tht scary??? i never watched them sooo!!! sitting on Angad's lap??? haiiiyyy... i wis I cud sit in his lap!!! jk... their fights r tooo cute too!!! i LOVE it!!! Kavy & Anjali... coloring each other... sooo cuteee!!!! although... i prefer not getting painted on... KA r strting to get through a conversation without biting each other's head off!!! niiiccceee!!! hope they strt to 'like' each other soon too... nd then fall in loooove!!! Neev & Prachi r soooo adorable.... falling on top of each other.... classic.... hehehe.... not tht i didnt like it... i LOVED it... God... why did they have to get interuppted by the crazy laughter??? ruin a perfect moment... ughhh... hehehe... hope they too realize their looove soon... sooo then there can b lovey dovey moments... which i TOTALLY adore btw.... YAYAY!!!! the next prt will b romantic.... CANNOT wait to read it.... soooo PLEASE continue soon!!!! p.s. sorry for being late!!!
Iqbal Neha1
Samina @Iqbal Neha1 17 years ago that was really good it looks as if anjali and kavya are getting closer loved the idea of a paint fight. angad and kripa are too good love the way they annoy each other shows how much there care 4 each other. neev and prachi hope they realise soon that they are more than friends love the way you described the relationship between the three pairs its mind blowing cant wait 2 read the next part
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 17 years ago [QUOTE=Numera*]

lol, i never watched any of teh saws eaither!! heard a lot about them though!! lol ure lips are sealed ugh
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 17 years ago Excellent part... it was soooo cute n funny... i jus love all 3 couples n i absolutely luved da endin of da last part it was soooo funny n sweet
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago lol yea i wanted my characters to be more childish and the stuff they do sorta reflects that lol with the paint and all. im trying to put like a lot of teenage like activities throughout the ff, since they are in college lol. thanks a ton!
[QUOTE=lil_desi_goddes]i just read your ff.. and i loved it immensely!!

please do continue!!





[/QUOTE]thanks for reading! hope u liked it!
[QUOTE=*dels*]hey!
sorry for the late reply! i actually read it in the morning but
couldn't comment! your ff is really cute and sweet & i love it! do
continue soon[/QUOTE]lol better late then never jk! im glad u like it!
thanks!
my fav is ak lol but i try to spead the part out as much as possible throughout the three couples. i like to put more funny stuff with ak but its not always the case lol, you'll c! thanks, its nice to know my attempts to make it funny werent futile! [QUOTE=erier101]lol!!! lmao, that was hilarious!! soooo cute!! dun have
words for it!! found it hilarious when kripa got creeped out watching
Saw!! and yay, Kavya-Anjali playing with the paint, sho cute
... i haev a feeling Neev-Prachi will realize their feelings for each
other sooner than the rest of the couples!! cant wait for romantic
moments!! continue soon [/QUOTE]aww thanks so much! im speechless from knowing that ur at a loss of words lol. lol Saw was the only thing that came to my mind when thinking scary movies cuz apparently its really gory, i however havent watched any of the Saws- i gotta work on getting updated on my scary movies lol. hmm nice prediction though my lips are sealed so u never know... lol *********i thought i would get the replies done now! thanks guys for commenting! and those that didnt tsk tsk lol jk. i'll continue tomorrow for sure so keep a look out! and i hope u guys like the ff so far! leave comments if you haven't already lol! c ya tomorrow!Numera*39189.9485532407
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 17 years ago lol!!! lmao, that was hilarious!! soooo cute!! dun have words for it!! found it hilarious when kripa got creeped out watching Saw!! and yay, Kavya-Anjali playing with the paint, sho cute ... i haev a feeling Neev-Prachi will realize their feelings for each other sooner than the rest of the couples!! cant wait for romantic moments!! continue soon
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