Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 6

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul a year ago Song changing scene was natural. Jealousy part waa funny.
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 17 years ago KOOL!!!!!! Cant wait for da nxt part!!!! Im sooooo lookin forward to it!!!!!
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago [QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]OMG!!! AWESUM prt!!! like, ALWAYS!!!
LMAO!!! Angad & gay... not out the
closet yet... denial!!!
i was laughing soooo hard.... i cud barely breathe!!! OMG... i LOVE
Akon... nd tht song is like my current fav song... Sexy Back WAS my fav
song... but a looong time ago... Yay... Kripa felt 'a pang of jealously'... it
wont b tooo looong before she starts liking him... coz it usually starts
with jealousy... a blach Hummer.... WOWO!!!! tht is one hot car!!! lol!!!
God... i REALLY REALLY REALLY wanna know wht Angad's gonna do to
Kripa!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue soon!!!

*******thanks for the comments! i really enjoy reading them lol they are really entertaining! arite so in the next part i tweaked the elevator scene so its a little more longer and well you guys seemed to want to know what happened and didnt want to disappoint by having not much happen... anyways im continuing in a couple minutes! and I WANT COMMENTS! so plzzzzzzzzzz LEAVE COMMENTS even silent readers!!!!! (lol now i know why ff writers get so agitated by having so many views yet so little comments LMAO)
monikaseth
monika @monikaseth 17 years ago oh my god i miss 3 parts just read it mindblowing
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 17 years ago aWESOME PART...OOOOO.... angad n kripa in 1 elevator... wonder wats gunna happen!!!!
angullgrl91
angullgrl91 @angullgrl91 17 years ago awesome part. like always. kripa was so funny with angad being gay...luv ur fan fic.
Cytherea
Cytherea @Cytherea 17 years ago hehehhee...lolzzz..tht was hilarious.. ,,,poor angad..kripa just wasted 10 minutes of his time nd effort.. im sure tht hes going to get his revenge soon
PassionsKaSh
Diya @PassionsKaSh 17 years ago lolz...ahahhhaa...good tooooo gooooooood!!!!!!!!!
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 17 years ago fabb part!!! wedding coolio, i have a feeling this will be reallly funnn!! oh gosh, angad hass myyy car, i love that car!!!!!!!!!! (and its in black...ahhh, im stealing it from him)... omggg those wwere all my fave songs!! u know, when im going on a car drive, with my family, to annoy my parents, my sister and i sing smack taht on top of our lungs, and whats funny is that out parents still didnt figuer out taht the song was kinda innapropriate ..... i loveeeeeeeeeeee llllllllllllllllll those otehr songssss lol!! i think i said that already.. .lol.....nywaysss hahah kripa is sooooo doomeeddd!! gay!! denial, out of the closet, i cant stop laughinggggggg hahahahha that was a good one!! i should use it.... hmmm someone is jealousss!! woot!! lol!! omg haha, lmao, i hate when that happens, when i jsut write something, and i like talk to myself and go what the heck is gonna happen now? lol!! so yea, continueee sooon, cant wait to see what happens!! erier10139191.6625578704
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