La Douleur Exquise

La Douleur Exquise Ongoing G

Chapter 5: Drenched in Love

Published On Sunday,Jun 19, 2022 13:29 PM GMT-06:00

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Nushrat @Nush_Rat 1 years ago Beautiful chapter as usual. 👏👏👏

I know, I have said this like millions of times by now but can't help it, 🤭 🤭 🤭 proper context always enriches a story and you my dear friend are a master at doing that. 🤗 🤗 🤗 ♥️ ♥️♥️

I love how you have etched Ranveer's character here. There's just too much depth in him and what I love the most about him is that he's practical. He observes everything and isn't oblivious. Hence his inclination towards Ishaani pains me even more because, despite everything that has been going on in his life, he just can't seem to let her go. 💔 💔 💔

Be it his fear that Ishaani might change after her marriage or his secret wish and subsequent heartbreak that she sees him as her best friend - these feelings came out naturally and struck a chord. 🥺 🥺 🥺

Also, I loved it so much when he promised himself that he'll shelter Ishaani from Baa. I am all for a menacing Ranveer. 😈 😈 😈

For a change, it was good to see Lakshmi in a positive role even though indirectly. 👍 👍 👍

The distinct description every single character got in this chapter is worth appreciating. Specially I loved how you have explored Gauri's inner turmoil here. And the fact that she's so mature and polite, only made me feel sadder for her. It's true - she was indeed the best among them all. 😔 😔 😔

Last but not the least - Baa. 😡 😡 😡 🤬 🤬 🤬 As much as I'm hating her, I am also enjoying her powerful aura. Not to mention how experienced she is and how she manages to micromanage everything around her. Love her or hate her, you can't ignore her. 😈 😈 😈

Can't wait for the day when Ranveer will exact his revenge on this vile woman for everything she had put him and Ishaani through. 😈 😈 😈
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