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Chapter 4: Joie De Vivre

Published On Saturday,Jun 18, 2022 16:47 PM GMT-06:00

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Nush_Rat
Nushrat @Nush_Rat 1 years ago Finally! 😀 😀 😀

I was beginning to worry whether you have joined Ranveer in his sanyas or not. 😜 😜 😜 Jokes apart, welcome back. 🤗 🤗 🤗

As usual, amazing chapter. I loved how the story traces back to the original yet has a distinct flavor of its own. So many things that I wished they had explored in the show have been addressed here. ♥️ ♥️ ♥️

The conversation between Ranveer and Kailash was really sweet. It must be tremendously painful for Kailash to see his son getting treated like s**t and still being loyal to a clan who doesn't deserve his faithfulness. 😔 😔 😔

However, the best part of this chapter for me was the conversation between Ranveer and HP. Here it makes so much sense why he considered his mentor as his God. HP is not a spineless idiot here. He stands by what is right and I loved his gesture for Falguni. 🤗 🤗 🤗

I was really surprised by Falguni's attitude in this chapter. Earlier I got mad when she disregarded Ranveer's pain but here one can see through her eyes. She's not vicious, nor is she oblivious to the truth. But she knows her priorities and at the same time, she has enough conscience to express her gratitude and warn Ranveer of the implications of his actions. 🙂 🙂 🙂

Lastly, the trip to Panchgani had all my heart. I love how you have portrayed IshVeer here. Ishaani is much more sensible and caring towards Ranveer whereas he doesn't look like a fool as I found him to be at several episodes in the show. He is very much human here. He is bound by his duty but he's also extremely self-aware. His wish for the smallest signs that may be in some way, Ishaani too sees him more than as a friend broke my heart. Poor guy's gonna suffer a lot in the future. 💔💔 💔

The chapter was surely worth the wait. 🤗 🤗 🤗 Keep writing more dear. I can't wait to read the next chapters. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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