Confused soul SS - pt 6 on pg 6 - no PM/scraps - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: pd786



Hey Kirti
I have been a part of this forum for 3-4years
I meant part of ZW forums



I found the zw forum about 2 or 3 weeks back
When I started watching the episodes , I think it was when there was like 4 episode released by then
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: pd786

Nice part

Hope to see more of veer aliya
I like this aliya veer bond
Veer is stalking her right?
I wanna know veer's motive of coming to life beat
Update soon
Waiting for your scrap



Thanks for liking the part
Yeah veer is a bit like a stalker but there will be a bit of twist once I figure it out
About his reason, that will come in time
I will definitely make it a bit interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: purplebunny

Hey kriti!
Preety here[;-)] !
I m loving ur story still wondering veer's char positive or negative...
Hey I agree that veer aaliya bonding is nice but plzzz make it ishaan aaliya pair:)
I love them sooo much!
And update soon n plz pm me:)



HEy preety
Thanks for the comment
Still working on figuring out what character veer is going to be
About the relationship it is going to be mystery for now
As I am not sure which direction I want to take it yet
Will PM or scrap you when I update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Jessicarh

Aww..it was soo adorable n cute(aliya-veer)❤️
Loved it again..keep writing❤️
You know what..this veer thing is getting more n more interesting day by day 😈
aur waise bhi ab cleaning ki responsibility veer ki hai..so now he must be only knowing where all her stuff are😆



Awe
Thanks for the comment
I see you caught the cleaning part ..
I almost forgot that bit but subconsciously remembered it
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely updates

cont soon



Thanks
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Part 3

At life beat

Aliya was walking with veer to the reception desk, when from the other side ishan and malivika come and spot the two coming. Ishan again gets a wired feeling of seeing them both together. Where as malivika is happy think that aliya has finally left her ishan alone and no one will break them.

When aliya spots them

Aliya - morning dr malivika, ishan

Malivika - good morning dr aktar (sorry can't spell her surname) , good morning dr veer

Ishan - morning

Dr veer - morning, sorry I need to go, aliya report to later on the progress of the patient

With that veer left the three. After veer exit malivika also left as she was called. Only ishan and aliya where left standing there. Aliya was still feeling uncomfortable with ishan standing next to her. So she...

Aliya - okay ishan I have to go as well, I need to get ready and go check on my patients... Bye

Ishan - hey hold a min, I need to talk to you about something important

Aliya thinking - oh god is he going to give more details on his and malivika relationship... Please god save me I don't want to hear this please.

Whiles aliya was busy talk with herself and god and was thinking what wrong with her, why has she not replied. With this he snaps his figures in front of her face. Aliya come back.

Aliya - uuummm ishan, actually I am a bit busy right now, can we talk later, please

Ishan thought for a min and said okay we will chat later and he let aliya leave. Aliya took a sigh of relief.

Both of them were unaware that somebody was watching there interaction.



Okay I am going to leave it here
Don't kill me because of the cliff hanger
I had time to write the update since it takes me an hour and half to get to work each way so i thought instead of sleeping on the train I might as well write the update
So hope you guys like
Looking forward to reading who you guys think it is
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: don girls



I found the zw forum about 2 or 3 weeks back
When I started watching the episodes , I think it was when there was like 4 episode released by then


i found it like a week ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: don girls



Thanks for liking the part
Yeah veer is a bit like a stalker but there will be a bit of twist once I figure it out
About his reason, that will come in time
I will definitely make it a bit interesting


you're most welcome
veer needs to be a positive character yaar
wanna see kushal punjabi as a positive character coz most of the time he is a negative character
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
omg veer is pakka stalking aaliya
is he like a crazy mad lover?
ishaan doesn't like veer close to aaliya, why so?
anyways nice update
it takes you one and a half hour in train? oh god
so update soonest
waiting okay?

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
jst read all parts..its good..plz continue soon n pm me too plz

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