One Question...WHY Mehrya FF Part6 on Pg19 updt. on 17th Dec. 2018 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update Anjali
Loved kids bonding they said to mehek go see what happened there when she saw a proposal scene she thinks about shourya n his proposal




Aww so romantic proposal tha

Both are suffering same pain
What kind of mistake he did yaar
But she never trusts him in future
Yeh Archie ka Kya kissa hi Kya Kiya isne jiss se love birds dono hamesha ke liye alag ho Gaye

I can't see them like that

Beautifuly written their emotions
Pls continue soon

Sorry for late response
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali45

Anu...Krish...Lima...Mishti...Aarthi...

Haseenah...Maya...Manvi...Thabs...Sham
M sry lovelies bt I won't b able to post nxt parts till 25th Sept. or more pls dont forget me bt forgive me 😭😭



Hey Anjali...seeing this now..why what happened ?
Are u busy ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandana2010


Awesome update Anjali
Loved kids bonding they said to mehek go see what happened there when she saw a proposal scene she thinks about shourya n his proposal




Aww so romantic proposal tha

Both are suffering same pain
What kind of mistake he did yaar
But she never trusts him in future
Yeh Archie ka Kya kissa hi Kya Kiya isne jiss se love birds dono hamesha ke liye alag ho Gaye

I can't see them like that

Beautifuly written their emotions
Pls continue soon

Sorry for late response

Ty Anu...finally u gv ur fb for which I was waiting eagerly...he did just a single mistake tht made them lyk this n they r now apart...yeah it would b difficult for anyone to trust d person who betrayed him so badly n here he had not only betrayed bt broke her trust too so she can't b able to trust him again he hv to make her trust again for which he hv to do hardwork 😆
Archie toh bs 2-3 parts k liye hi aayegi aur usme hi bhut kuch kr degi vo chudail😡 well she is d soul reason for our MehRya separation...m glad u liked it...maafi toh tbhi milegi jb nxt tym tym pe fb dogi😆
Will try to post nxt one tomorrow as was free for 2 days whn hubby decided to help me in my work...tk cr...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thabassum..



Hey Anjali...seeing this now..why what happened ?
Are u busy ?

Yeah Thabs I m n would be till 25th...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Anjali aaj nahi hoga Kya
Kal MeRI di our jiju ayenge phir busy ho jaungi
Pls try na

Ha pakka agli bar jaldi doongi Mera fb 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Anjali aaj nahi hoga Kya

Kal MeRI di our jiju ayenge phir busy ho jaungi
Pls try na

Ha pakka agli bar jaldi doongi Mera fb 😛

M done wid nxt part dear...just doing final touch up...just wait for sometime n it will b here😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hii guys...I was not able to control myself so I pen down its next part...


After completing some work Mehak stretched herself on chair and got up. She went near window and saw some children playing in park. She smiled seeing them so happy.
"How happy they are na mam..."
"Yeah...children are like this only...they smile with whole heart not fake their smile..."
"That is mam...and see how much their parents love them and playing with them..."
"Hmm...by the way how is your papa?? Is he fine now??"
"Yes mam...he is improving day by day...and used to get happy whenever I went to see him...you know he used to say me his princess..."
"Girls are princess of father..."
Kaina left. Mehak recalled how Shaurya used to demand for a cute girl like her and she blush everytime.
Flashback
"Shaurya...where are you...I have something for you..."
"I am here my love..."
Mehak turned and saw Shaurya standing with a fake baby bump. She giggled seeing him. He blushed like a newly wedded bride. She pulled the pillow from him and he pulled her by waist. He pecked her forehead and rubbed his nose on her.
"You know what...I went to hospital for collecting reports and guess what??"
"Are you pregnant?? Wow am gonna become dad...I am so happy..."
He started jumping in happiness and hugged her tightly. She was shaking her head in disbelief as her husband is so excited for baby. She hold him.
"I am so happy Mehak and from now you won't work and maa papa will be super happy..."
"Shaurya stop day dreaming...am not pregnant...Aditi and Himesh are going to be parents...not we..."
"Ohh...I think you..."
His smile fade away and turned his face. Mehak felt sorry for that as she is not yet ready for child but he want to have a child whom he would love a lot and shower all his love on the child. She hugged him from back and interwined her fingers with his. This time he was really sad.
"I am sorry Shaurya...I am really sorry...but you know na that I am not ready yet..."
He turned and hugged her. She rubbed his back.
"I am not sad Mehak...just little disappointed...don't worry...now call Himesh...he will be super happy..."
He broke the hug. Mehak cupped his face and gently pecked his lips. He smiled.
"Shaurya...please don't be sad...okay now let me what you want a boy or a girl??"
"I just only want a girl like you...chubby and cute who will take care of me like you do...and scold me whenever I do something wrong because a daughter is always like mother who teaches us like a mother do..."
"Hmm...but no one could love you like I do not even our daughter..."
"Aww...my wifey is jealous of our daughter...so cute..."
"Whatever...but I..."
"I know my jaan that you love me the most...okay..."
"Hmm..."
He grinned and took her in his embrace. He kissed on her crown and she smiled.
Now
Mehak went out and got busy in guiding her staff for some new recipies then her friend Sonal came and blindfolded her. She turned and removed the cloth. She was shocked to see Sonal standing in front of her.
"Sonal..."
Both hugged each other. Mehak excused herself and went in her cabin with Sonal.
"How long there was no seen...where were you haan..."
"Mehak..you know na that I just get married..."
"Shut up...it has been 7 years of your marriage...just married..."
"I forgotten but I just become mother na..."
"Oh yeah...where is Aman and Mohit??"
"Actually ma want to spend some time with Aman so I left him with her and you know your brother in law Mohit...he have to go in some meeting so he didn't came..."
"Its okay...but you have to come with them on Chiku's b'day..."
"I will try but its upto them..."
They talked for some more time and Sonal left. Mehak again get busy with her staff guiding them the work.Shaurya was sitting in his room when his phone buzz. He took his phone and checked it. There was an email. He opened it and go through it.
"Oh God...I have to attend annual function in St. Philips School day after tomorrow...god damnit how could I forget it...ofcourse I will forget...as you are not with me..."
He turned and gazed at their picture that Mehak hanged on the wall so that they will see each other's face when they both get up.
Flashback
Shaurya and Mehak came Mumbai first time after they get married. As soon they came Mehak came to their room and hanged the frame there in front of bed.
"Mehak...why are you hanging it here??"
"What do you mean by this??"
"I mean...why here??"
"Hmm...so now you don't want this frame here...okay I understood you don't want to show this to your other girlfriends...I know that...you are so bad...go I don't want to talk to you..."
Mehak put the frame on bed and sat there with a sad face. He chuckled and went to her side.
"Mehak...listen to me jaan..."
Mehak turned her face. He hugged her. She struggled to came out of his hold but he was so strong. He kissed on her coller bone and bite her earlobe that made her hiss in pain. He sucked that and started making random patterns on her waist. It was badly affecting her and she want to hug him but controlled herself and hit him with elbow. He ouches and she escape showing him her tongue.
"Hmm...playing games with me...wait Mrs. Khanna I am coming to you and then you won't get any chance to escape..."
He was blabbering while running behind her.
"Try Mr. Khanna...I am not so easy to be catched..."
"Really??"
Her smile disappeared when she heard his husky voice. She bite her lower lip and turned. As she turned he pulled her and she crushed on his hard chest.
"You are caught up Mrs. Khanna..."
He smirked making her blush. Her face became red like tomato. Seeing her blushing so hard he took her in his embrace.
"I was asking the reason to you not opposing you..."
"I thought that you are opposing me so I said that to you..."
"One more thing Mehak..."
He broke their hug and cupped her face. Love was clearly visible from his eyes.
"Only you made space here in my heart...it beats for you only and you are queen of this heart and this heart is so silly...it says that it want to say to a girl who took care of it more than her life and it had found the girl..."
Both chuckled and he carried her in his arms in bridal style.
"What are doing Shaurya?? Put me down..."
"No babes...not so easily...you have to face this..."
"Face what??"
"My wild side..."
"I had already faced that day before yesterday's night..."
"Have you said something??"
She quickly shaked her head in no and hid herself in his chest but he had already heard that. He took her in kitchen and made her sit on kitchen shelf.
"What you are upto??"
"Just be quite and look at me..."
"But..."
He sealed her lips with kiss. She blushed and hid her face in her palms. He smirked and started making something with mangos. She was quietly watching him because if she open her mouth then he will repeat his action. He looked at her and smiled.
"You know what Mehak...you are so shy ut when it comes to me then you became wild..."
She didn't answer just blushed.
"See...what you have done to me last night..."
He removed his shirt and shown some nail marks to her. His back was almost covered with her nail marks that she dugged when he was becoming so hard.
"Are these done by me??"
"No no...day before yesterday night I was left with a wild cat so she scratched my back like this...but it was not you..."
He made face and wore his shirt. She pulled his shirt's coller and wrapped her legs around his waist. He was looking at her with awe as he was confused that HIS MEHAK is so shy and today she is doing this.
"You know what Shaurya...whenever you come near me I lost myself to you and let you give me sweet torture..."
He smiled and kissed her cheek.
"I know baby..."
"Oh god you made me forget...I have to hang the picture on wall..."
"But why??"
"Because till we are here I want we both to get up and see each other..."
"That's good...carry on...I am making your favourite Mango Dessert..."
"Aww I love you Shaurya..."
"Because I am making that..."
"Yeah ofcourse..."
"Whaaat..."
"You can cook na that's why I fell in love with you..."
"Hmm...whaaat..."
She quickly jumped from the shelf and ran to the room. He smirked and continue making the dessert for his love. When he was done then he went to their room and was shocked to see Mehak in his shirt with hairs tied in a bun. Her creamy legs were making him crazy.
"Mehak..."
"Why you forgot my suitcase..."
She turned and looked at him with cute angry pout. He recalled how he replaced her suitcase with that one in which there were all short dresses as he don't want her to wear suit there and want to see how she looks in those clothes. No doubt he will go mad on him when she will wear them but still he want her to wear them.
"I want to see you in my clothes..."
"Fine...I will wear these clothes only...whether I have to go out..."
His eyes popped out. He don't want anyone to see his wife as its only his right to see her like that. He went to her but she was smiling.
"The SANSKARI GIRL inside you won't let you do so..."
"So get me my clothes..."
"Are you done with hanging the frame??"
"Yeah...but my clothes..."
"I will give you if you wear those short dresses too..."
"I will...but I won't go out in those...I will wear them for you only...and one more thing...you won't put off the frame...promise me..."
"Okay done...now come and eat what I had made for you..."
She smiled and hugged him. They both sat together to have their meal.
Now
He went downstairs and started making her favourite dishes. He was looking outside from the window of kitchen. He saw two girls waiting for someone. One was elder and other one was younger. The elder girl was standing quietly while the younger girl was running here and there. She was looking angry on something. She was cute with chubby cheeks and the angry pout was suiting her more. He smiled seeing her anger. He recalled the wordings of doctor when Mehak was pregnant.
'Our daughter would be like her Mehak...I am still not able to forget that day when I got to know that I gonna to be a father...I was on cloud nine but because of my one mistake you left...leaving me alone in the selfish world...'
He wrapped up the kitchen and decided to went out for getting some fresh air. He went out and saw the girls still standing there. They were Riya and Mahira. Shaurya was continuously looking at Riya as if he recognised her that she is his daughter with her antics. Mehak's face kept coming in front of his eyes. He still remember the day when she left leaving him behind due to his one mistake. He can't tolerate more so he turned her face away and left from there. Riya's water bottle slid from her hands and as she went to take that from road a speeding vehicle came and hit her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks.for.the update Anjali 😛
Loved it and Beautifully wriiten chapter ...I really loved the way you could relates the incidences and flashback from their past . Mehrya both at suffering without each other emotinally .
But both are quite successful in their business ventures ...that is good ...so finally shaurya sees his daughter but till.now don't know the truth ... I hope he find out that soon but before that he has to save the lil.riya from accident . I hope he will save her just in time .
Eager to know further ...please continue soon and thanks for the PM😛
Edited by AD04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Been update Anjali
You wrote very well past and present situations
He wants her to wear his shirt so he changed her bag 😳
She wants his cltclotbut when he denies she threatened him to go with this outside too 😛
Aww how she scrachesc his body really she is wild Cate no doubt in that
When he saw Riya he imagined her just like mehek
Hope he saves her in time
May be now the time is close to k ow about his daughter and his beauBeaut wife

Oh god what mistake he had don e yaar
Kahi ek rath drunken state me kuch kiya tho nahi just like in serial Jo voh archie blackmailing him

Pls continue soon
And how is your work going on dear
Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for the pm dear...it's really great one...pls continue soon...so shaurya imagine Riya as his daughter...n pls tell me quickly what he has done wrong... because of which mehek left him..pls continue your other FFS also...

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