~Fatal Attraction 2~ SS on Mehrya Epilogue updated page 89(07/05) - Page 70

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva200

Lovely epilogue

Thanks for the pm


Thanks for reading Diva 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sham di mein kahan jau aapse update mangne😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
👏 what an exciting story Sham ! You kept us on our toes from start to finish 😆
Fatal attraction is an understatement 😕 . Was amazed how many times they have been attacked in a single month since they got married . SK was amazingly patient waiting for Mehek to understand his love for her hoping she will one day love him back. The Valentine's party was amazing and one of my favorite chapters . The misunderstanding she had with SK when he had hired mohit was the first step in starting to openly show her admiration and gratitude towards him the office apology was cute and really funny as she willingly walked into the lions den on her own two feet. Meheks friendship with Vicky is really cute but little did she know she was opening a Pandora's box when she opened that cabinet and took a step into SK's past😕her defenses started breaking and the wall she put up to protect herself came crumbling down being replaced by guilt as she discovered he knows everything about her but she knew nothing about him including his birthday. As she tried helping Sonal she was unaware that by doing that she has placed a huge target on her own back as vickies mom thought she was pregnant and needed to be eliminated! Luckily SK tracked her !when he nearly died trying to save her in the jungle that was the finally straw that finally exposed her true feelings for him and finally admitted her love for Sk. Took her long enough! Was really surprised me and felt extremely bizarre was Mehek trying to commit suacide when she discovered her own pregnancy. 😕 thinking by doing that she was saving SK ? No idea how that would protect him? Luckily Vicky saved her and the hospital restraining order mess was hilarious 😆 ! Chachi is really dumb thinking she can keep SK away from Mehek . The month anniversary was so beautiful with the renewing of their vows she finally felt married to him .What blew me away was how Vicky sacrificed his life inorder to save his beloved brother from the greed of his own parents. Hats off you nailed it! The final episode and epilogue felt like scenes out of a movie awesome job!!!
Although extremely late giving my fb had a blast reading this story ! Thank you so much for sharing it with us and really excited to dive into your next masterpiece. 🤗
Edited by Houstonmom - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sham forgot to mention looks like uncle cleaned out this thread as well most of your links are off by one page I can usually find it by going to the page before the one in the link. Was frustrating at first like searching on a treasure hunt till I figured out the pattern 😕. For future readers you may want to fix the links on the first page or they won't find the chapters .
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Posted: 7 years ago
I have no idea where did I stop ,on this one 😔
Hmm ...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Read all the remaining parts ...from cahpter 13 I guess...
I really like the way story this story of yours started ...
Shaurya marrying Mehak forcefully...against her wish ...after being her online buddy ...and Mehak not being able to trust him completely and after knowing abt his past and present ...the way she was scared of him ...but I guess shaurya's love for was genuine always ...that's y he took care of everything she cares for...like helping Mohit ...but misunderstandings were at best that time...it was really funny Mehak got trapped along Shaurya on his cabin 😆...poor girl...
After knowing about shaurya's past and his family Mehak had other feelings for Shaurya now ...respect and care...
It was great twist , shams ...Sonal pregnancy was considered as mehak's and Svetlana already trying to kill her ...
But this ambush brought MehRya closer 😳...and I really love the way ...how Vicky was a obedient and submissive brother here 👏...he was beside his brother and Bhabhi all the time...
His bond with Mehak and shaurya great to read...
Mehak took a disastrous step to end her life after knowing that she is pregnant ?that was really a stupid move after knowing what she means to Shaurya ...but loved the way she confronted Kanta chachi's for her husband and unborn child...

And the sad part was Vicky sacrificed himself paving the peaceful way his brother to live his life , happily and the promised he made to cum back in his life was lovable ⭐️
MehRya had their own moments of happiness ...sum where far living with there whole family ...Vicky was back and Mehak again was about to give Shaurya another bundle of joy ...
Arman here was for nehal ? 😆 nice imagination thou ...

Loved the ending ... MehRya forever ...❤️
Great story , nice twist and lovely plots ...totally loved the way u penned this down ...this was little different from other stories and as I said..you are getting better and better in writing romantic stories...good job love ❤️👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

👏 what an exciting story Sham ! You kept us on our toes from start to finish 😆
Fatal attraction is an understatement 😕 . Was amazed how many times they have been attacked in a single month since they got married . SK was amazingly patient waiting for Mehek to understand his love for her hoping she will one day love him back. The Valentine's party was amazing and one of my favorite chapters . The misunderstanding she had with SK when he had hired mohit was the first step in starting to openly show her admiration and gratitude towards him the office apology was cute and really funny as she willingly walked into the lions den on her own two feet. Meheks friendship with Vicky is really cute but little did she know she was opening a Pandora's box when she opened that cabinet and took a step into SK's past😕her defenses started breaking and the wall she put up to protect herself came crumbling down being replaced by guilt as she discovered he knows everything about her but she knew nothing about him including his birthday. As she tried helping Sonal she was unaware that by doing that she has placed a huge target on her own back as vickies mom thought she was pregnant and needed to be eliminated! Luckily SK tracked her !when he nearly died trying to save her in the jungle that was the finally straw that finally exposed her true feelings for him and finally admitted her love for Sk. Took her long enough! Was really surprised me and felt extremely bizarre was Mehek trying to commit suacide when she discovered her own pregnancy. 😕 thinking by doing that she was saving SK ? No idea how that would protect him? Luckily Vicky saved her and the hospital restraining order mess was hilarious 😆 ! Chachi is really dumb thinking she can keep SK away from Mehek . The month anniversary was so beautiful with the renewing of their vows she finally felt married to him .What blew me away was how Vicky sacrificed his life inorder to save his beloved brother from the greed of his own parents. Hats off you nailed it! The final episode and epilogue felt like scenes out of a movie awesome job!!!
Although extremely late giving my fb had a blast reading this story ! Thank you so much for sharing it with us and really excited to dive into your next masterpiece. 🤗



Maya thank you so much for this detailed feedback🤗
It was like a synopsis of the whole FF ...I enjoyed reading it from your pov 😳😳

Mahek at that moment went weak and took a extreme step ...and Vicky also took a strong decision to end this problems...it was hard for me to write this coz my stories will always end with a happy ending...😆😆


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

Sham forgot to mention looks like uncle cleaned out this thread as well most of your links are off by one page I can usually find it by going to the page before the one in the link. Was frustrating at first like searching on a treasure hunt till I figured out the pattern 😕. For future readers you may want to fix the links on the first page or they won't find the chapters .


I need to take out separate time for this ...it's a tough job... don't know what was uncles problem😡😡
Will try to fix it slowly
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you puja 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..


Read all the remaining parts ...from cahpter 13 I guess...
I really like the way story this story of yours started ...
Shaurya marrying Mehak forcefully...against her wish ...after being her online buddy ...and Mehak not being able to trust him completely and after knowing abt his past and present ...the way she was scared of him ...but I guess shaurya's love for was genuine always ...that's y he took care of everything she cares for...like helping Mohit ...but misunderstandings were at best that time...it was really funny Mehak got trapped along Shaurya on his cabin 😆...poor girl...
After knowing about shaurya's past and his family Mehak had other feelings for Shaurya now ...respect and care...
It was great twist , shams ...Sonal pregnancy was considered as mehak's and Svetlana already trying to kill her ...
But this ambush brought MehRya closer 😳...and I really love the way ...how Vicky was a obedient and submissive brother here 👏...he was beside his brother and Bhabhi all the time...
His bond with Mehak and shaurya great to read...
Mehak took a disastrous step to end her life after knowing that she is pregnant ?that was really a stupid move after knowing what she means to Shaurya ...but loved the way she confronted Kanta chachi's for her husband and unborn child...

And the sad part was Vicky sacrificed himself paving the peaceful way his brother to live his life , happily and the promised he made to cum back in his life was lovable ⭐️
MehRya had their own moments of happiness ...sum where far living with there whole family ...Vicky was back and Mehak again was about to give Shaurya another bundle of joy ...
Arman here was for nehal ? 😆 nice imagination thou ...

Loved the ending ... MehRya forever ...❤️
Great story , nice twist and lovely plots ...totally loved the way u penned this down ...this was little different from other stories and as I said..you are getting better and better in writing romantic stories...good job love ❤️👏


Thank you love ..🤗

I am happy that your life is back to normal now 😛

Vicky had a important role to play here ...😆

Coz of him mehrya lived a happy life ...shaurya had started taking special care of him as his son ...lol I don't know why I brought Arman here ...he was such a innocent face don't know how CV's made him a terrorist 😆

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