~FATAL ATTRACTION~ SS On MehRya , Chap 10 part B on PG-140 28/01/18 - Page 28

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz



Lol you did gave me a brief feedback before but later was busy pulling my leg with Spanish and Dutch😆

That was not feedback ...I just raised a question...😆...abt mehak's characterization ...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

That was not feedback ...I just raised a question...😆...abt mehak's characterization ...😆


You know how she is ... brave in front of others but when it comes to family she can't take a stand for herself and will be ready for any sacrifice😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


You know how she is ... brave in front of others but when it comes to family she can't take a stand for herself and will be ready for any sacrifice😆

Okay so mehak is typical ...just like the show ? 🤔
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Okay so mehak is typical ...just like the show ? 🤔

Yeah she is ...iam sorry you have to wait for a long😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 3 :

It took really long to write this part... ignore the typos and so sorry I was unable to cover that Mehrya date in this chapter... hopefully will update next chapter in weekdays... please wait for few days for the other story Epilogue also ...it's a request😭😭

After sometime supervisor got the perfect opportunity when there was no one in Mahek's room he fixed the chip inside a bed lamp so that no one can notice it ,and later he informed the same to Shaurya ,who was still sitting insidw the car near her lane , his driver kept on asking him till what time they have to stand here as it's a congested area and people may object if we stay for some more time... Shaurya just glared at him while adjusting headset in his ears , for few minutes he wasn't able to hear anything , but after sometime he heard voice of 2 girls but voice wasn't clear , he was hating all this stalking, he directly wanted to enter the house and get the information but was afraid of the consequences as their friendship can be effected by it , he adjusted the headset volume and now it looked like they were near the place where the chip is placed , he was able to hear voice clearly now ...

Iam not hungry sonal that's why I didn't ate much , Mahek said to Sonal while sitting on the bed , Sonal came and sat beside her but what's the matter jaan ?? tomorrow is your engagement and look you are sitting here making a face like golgappa ..Sonal teased her , look iam already disturbed and now don't irritate me more , Mahek warned her , iam scared Sonal replied while raising her hands but I know how to set right your mood ...Sonal replied with a wink , How ?? Mahek questioned ... Only one thing can set your mood famous golgappa's of Chandni Chowk , Sonal said while pulling her up from the bed ...Nehal entered the room at the same time... Golgappa's yummy even I want to eat ,Nehal said ..Have you both gone mad tomorrow is engagement and chachi will never allow us to go out ...Mahek replied with a frown face , Tu na apna mooh bandh hi rakhiyo (keep your mouth shut) you always talk negative..I will convince chachi just leave it to me , Sonal said irritatingly and pulling back Mahek out of room ..

Shaurya heard the whole conversation but was still wondering who could be his MS out of 3 as all of them were saying they love Golgappa's, he thought about Sonal name , why do I feel I heard this voice before and someone shouting the same name , he couldn't recollect it but he knew once he see his MS his heart will immediately recognize her , he was hopeful that she may come out and he can get a glimpse of her , he was in his deep thoughts when his driver questioned him again...Sir how much more time ?? Shaurya couldn't hold his anger this time he got down from the car and pulled out driver from the seat ...looks like you are in hurry to go back home ... Congrats from tomorrow you will be having full time to spend with your family as you are fired Shaurya said while sitting in the driver's seat , But sir ... before he could say anything Shaurya showed him a finger asking him to keep quiet, driver left the place without questioning anything and he asked his bodyguard's also to leave the place as he has some important work here and he wasn't sure how much time it will take..one of the guard said they can't leave him like that but all his words died inside his mouth when he questioned that even he is planning to get fired ?? All the bodyguard's left the place... Shaurya adjusted headset but wasn't able to hear anything... frustratedly he closed his laptop and punched on the steering wheel, suddenly he heard a girl's voice...Di what's wrong with you? come quickly , ..the girl was wearing a red top and a tight black jeans...this can't be my MS Shaurya thought to himself...he followed the gaze of the girl where she was looking..he saw two girls more coming outside the lane ... where did I saw them before ... Shaurya thought as they were walking towards the car, Sonal was wearing a white short kurti paired with patiala bottom ... No she isn't MS he said to himself...his gaze now shifted to Mahek...who was wearing a pink Punjabi suit ...she was playing with her chunri and clearly looked she was nervous...her hairs were falling on her face and she gently tucked it backside her ears , her eyes were fixed to ground , she is my MS Shaurya said with a smile on his face ...Mahek tu aisy kion chal rahi hai Jaisy tere pairon par mehndi lagi hai ...( why are you walking so slowly as if you have applied henna on your legs ...Sonal complained , Mahek who was in her deep thoughts bitted her lips and walked quickly to join them ...Mahek ..Mahek Sharma Shaurya whispered her name as a prayer , even though he was sure that she was MS but just to get 100% sure he pinged her a message , they were almost near the car and mahek heard the notification tone ...she frozed when she saw from whom the notification came , she didn't had courage to open and check it , a lone tear escaped from her eyes... Shaurya's heart pierced when he saw that tear when he was trying to click a picture of her ... Sonal and Nehal who walked few steps came back running to her... Now what happened ? Nehal questioned her , You both go and have it iam not feeling like eating anything...Mahek replied and ran back inside the lane ...Sonal and Nehal just kept shouting her name ... don't you think she is behaving strangely Sonal questioned Nehal...Hope Di hasn't fallen In love Nehal humored...both giggled and went after her to know what's the matter.

Shaurya came out of his car and wanted to follow them inside the house,he wasn't sure what he should do to get a reply from her to know what she is feeling , never in life he felt so helpless , he realized standing there would make matter more worse as people have started watching him with questionable eyes and he won't he able to stop himself for longer to barge in the house...he calmed down himself and decided to drove back to KM and make some plans to stop this engagement.

Sonal and Nehal tried hard to know why she was behaving starngely but Mahek kept on making excuses , tired of her tantrums Sonal went back to her house and Nehal and Mahek went down to have their dinner,.Mahek was just playing with food, thousands of questions were blocking her head and she had restrictions to talk to the only person in front of whom she is open up and who will have answers to all questions and who can guide her the right way...

It was late night Shaurya was trying to listen the conversation sitting on his king size chair...Mahek was tossing and turning in the bed , Di tu yeh mendaak ki tarah kion uchaal khud Kar rahi hai. ( Why are you jumping here and there like frog ) Nehal complained while dragging blanket...Mahek sat back on the bed , you know na nehal I won't be able to with empty stomach... saying that she went towards the kitchen and made an instant snack to fill her tummy ...she later came back and slept peacefully , Next morning Shaurya's men brought the same supervisor to Khanna mansion , he folded his hand and stood in front of Shaurya, Sir I did what ever you have asked me than why your men brought me here ? He questioned while wiping his sweat from his forehead... Shaurya holded his both shoulders and said don't worry I just want some more information after that you are free to go ... Shaurya asked the information related to groom , supervisor gaved him a big smile and said he was also working in their house and had taken a selfie with him...he gave all Ajay's information to Shaurya and he immediately ordered his men to get all information relating to him ...

After few hours Shaurya's manger came with a all the information about Ajay ... Shaurya went through the paper , as per that he had changed his job numerous times in last 2 years and has a very bad track record, few companies have fired him for misbehaving with female staff and at few places he resigned when staff members have raised harassment charges against him...as of now he had started a business but he had taken a huge loan from the market and his investors have already filed few cases against him... Shaurya wondered how can her family get ready for the marriage with a cheapster like him , he wanted to meet her and stop this marriage at any cost .He sat on his bed and tried hearing the conversation as it may be helpful to reach her , Mahek was wincing in pain , Mahek how did your ring finger got hurted , Sonal shouted at her ...I was trying to help Mansi chachi I don't know how this happened while chopping vegetables...Mahek replied with tears in her eyes...You just sit here I will put a bandage on it ...patah nahi dhyaan kahan rehta hai aajka tera (you always look lost these days) Sonal said while putting bandage across her finger ...Now how will you wear the ring on this hand ?? Sonal questioned... just than chachi entered, it's not a big issue she will wear it on her other hand ...kanta replied while giving Mahek a glass of milk...But chachi everyone says that the index finger veins are directly connected to heart ?? Sonal questioned , kanta glared her ...Yeh sab kitabi Baatein hai Sonal , now make her ready for the engagement parmar's will come in sometime ...kanta said and left the room...Yaar why is your chachi so hell-bent on getting him married to you , Sonal questioned irritatingly ...Mahek kept the glass aside, she is a mother and is worried about my future...Mahek said trying to defend Kanta...So you are happy with this marriage and now mentally prepared yourself to be Mrs. Parmar? Sonal questioned...No nothing like that iam not happy , I would have agreed happily but some how I feel that he is more interested in dowry more than me ,I don't even think he likes me , I can understand that but at least respect should be their in any relation and I didn't liked the way their family kept on keeping conditions before saying Yes for this marriage .. Mahek spoked her heart out in front of Sonal ...she gave him a tight hug and said why don't you talk to chachi and cancel this proposal ?? Sonal questioned...I can't sonal now specially when chachi thinks there is someone in my life , she already thinks I have a BF with whom I talk daily till night...Sonal looked widening her eyes. ..What you have a BF and you didn't let me know about it? No nothing like that he is just a good friend and now I can't even talk to him because of chachi ...Mahek said with a frown, Just a friend haan ?? Sonal teased her ...see that's the reason I wasn't telling you anything...Mahek replied folding her arms...Achaa achaa I trust you Meri jaan that he is only your friend and nothing else...now just sit here else Gabbar will come back...I mean chachi aajaygi Sonal said controlling her laugh... Shaurya closed his laptop... chachi jii you don't have any idea what you have done, he said getting up from him bed ...He looked at the pic of Mahek in his phone gallery and than picked a photo of Ajay which was lying along with his details...and matched it ..Mrs Mahek Ajay Parmar ...he pronounced the name with a yuck face expression..than he picked his photo frame from the table and matched it with her pic...Mahek Shaurya Khanaa ...he said with a smirk , now this looks a perfect pair ...he throwed Ajay's pic on the floor saying...I don't think this langoor is any match for my angel...and every angel needs a devil like me to protect her he said kissing her pic ...

Edited by Shamrouz - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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SK is madly in love with ms. He recognised her angle n now planning to crack that looser ajay. I don't get how her family agreed to marry her with that mean ajay 😕

And the last line u have writren Usk baad to mera dil garden garden hogya
Every angle needs a devil like me to protect her

AGR devil shaurya khana jesa ho to kise aitraz hoga 😆
Thanks for the pm meri pyari baaji 🤗 waiting for the next
And vo second ff pe SR vali update ka kya hua..

Edited by Parud7 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res di yeh Kya surprise hi OMG tnq
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yayyy.. finally u updated shamz. Awesome update waiting for mehrya date. So contunue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Warning... This is not that long as I expected 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anuteja

Res di yeh Kya surprise hi OMG tnq


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