Mehrya FF: Her Undercover Lover -Chapter 10 page42 08/15 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: linlin1911

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Nice start yaar ...
First actually I was really confused.. Sareena, vihaan and all but after reading everything I was quite superb ...
So Mehak has turned into Meera due to her amnesia...
Poor sk, become a worker in his own resort.. And hina became the boss...
She is pregnant, lovely ... Is she know that she is pregnant...
So nice plot ..
Waiting for next update..
Keep going...
All the best...

Aw sorry about the confusion, I dont usually aim to be like that ,so I am glad it made sense the more you read it. Mehek is definitely facing some challanges but already she senses the rightness of being there, poor Shaurya has been demoted now due to what he happens to be wearing the first time they meet😆 I imagine to her Hina seems so sophisticated so 1+1=3😆 and voila Hina is the boss. Seriously though, thank you for taking the time to read and commenting. Since I am balancing 2 FF at the moment it will be back to the other so i can provide my weekly update on it. I will def pm you when chapter 2 of this one is ready.
Kelly
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

So this is flash back to when Mehek came back from the accidents a few months after I'm guessing. Loving how the story is going, and Mehek thinking Hina is Shaurya's boss just made me laugh. Oh and I love the Dr. Aurora character. Hope she makes more appearances throughout the story. Update soon.

Although the prologue began in the present, it was always my intent to begin the actual story from the day Mehek returned. I hope you enjoy what is in store. Also thx so much for your appreciation of Dr. Arora. I am often imagining secondary characters that I end up loving so much that I cant let go of them. As I indicated to bworm I needed a doctor for the chapter so it was very easy to bring Sareena back to life. I am not sure how much longer she will be around, but at the very least she could always return for the vacation redo she will deserve after all of this😛.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update di continue soon 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Kelly
Thank you for PM.

I did time out to read the chapter to take my mind of my work and before i kill someone at work.

So many question still to be answer in the story.

What did happens to mehak?
Where was she all the time?

It was so funny when she was thinking Hina was SK boss😆. I think Hina was going to like it to be SK boss in this story😆

Poor SK must now work as a chef just to be close to Mehak and to check on her all the time.

Hope you update soon😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Nice update di continue soon 😃

Thank you Nandu. I will continue as sdon as I am able😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40

Hi Kelly

Thank you for PM.

I did time out to read the chapter to take my mind of my work and before i kill someone at work.

So many question still to be answer in the story.

What did happens to mehak?
Where was she all the time?

It was so funny when she was thinking Hina was SK boss😆. I think Hina was going to like it to be SK boss in this story😆

Poor SK must now work as a chef just to be close to Mehak and to check on her all the time.

Hope you update soon😳

Hey Cindy , thank you for the comment , but first off let me say I totally get you about work😆. Somedays it is only IF and my writing that keeps me sane.
Love your questions so much to learn for sure but at the same time SK will have a balancing act as he has to now consider his wife's delicate condition when dealing with her.

Now due to Meheks assumption there is to be a role reversal of sorts with SK demotion and Hina's elevation to head honcho...what assistant wouldnt love that. Will this faithful PA take full advantage of the situation😉😆 tune in to find out.

Glad to have you on board for the story and hope you enjoy it as it progresses. Will PM you when the next update gets done.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Hi Kelly Loved it ⭐️
Another cross over from one of your FF 😆
Mehak thinks Hina is the boss 😆
Now I understand the first part why she feared Shaurya would get fired 😆


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Kelly Loved it ⭐️

Another cross over from one of your FF 😆
Mehak thinks Hina is the boss 😆
Now I understand the first part why she feared Shaurya would get fired 😆


Thx Sharlene. I knew of all folks you would appreciate the two new characters. They are just making a cameo but came in handy when I needed some medical expertise.😊
Yes so we have SK dressed up like the help and Hina the height of sophistication its no wonder poor Mehek is confused.
I wonder if SK should be worried now that his PA has the upper hand😆
Thx for commenting. Looking forward to your thoughts of Ch 28 of DTM...very naughty MS in that one😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well written update Kelly...
Loved the way SK was taking care of his wife...
It's good that she is safe and now staying with him but she thinks he is a employee and Hina is their boss 😆
Vihaan and sareena are interesting characters... would love to read more about them .. please continue soon😊
Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome story Kelly ! Very different Mehrya story Don't know why Greys anatomy popped into my head as I read it 😆 . Dr Agarwal and her husband are a lovening couple that are staying at SK's hotel . They just came back from a day of river rafting and ordered lunch when they heard yelling coming from the kitchen . Apparently SK's wife has fallen unconscious onto the kitchen floor and SK collided with a kitchen worker carrying a simmering pot of sauce spilling the sauce over SK burning his hand. Though severely burned SK was fighting the workers that were holding him back trying to take his jacket off to relieve the burn while trying to reach his wife that was non responsive. Hearing the noise Dr Agarwal asked her husband to grab her medical bag while she goes to check out the situation. Maya the hostess comes into the kitchen accompanied by Dr Agarwal who looked around then ordered an ambulance asap . First she ordered the workers to keep SK's hand under cold running water till help arrives then shifted her focus to his unconscious wife . His wife was breathing .After asking a few questions she determined that SK's wife may have had a fainting spell and asked for her to be moved to a room for recovery. SK was tied to the sink for treatment and watched helplessly as they moved his wife out of the kitchen .Dr asked SK some more questions and he informed her that he didn't know of any reason as his wife had just come back today. SK was worried sick for his wife . The dr left him to go be with her when she wakes up to do a thorough exam if permitted . After regaining consciousness the Dr got consent and did the exam . At that time SK had been treated and came to join his wife he saw His PA and mr Agarwal standing outside the suite . Hina briefed SK about his wife's current condition and SK thanked and showed Mr Agarwal his gratitude by offering to comp their stay at his hotel Mr Agarwal refused the offer and opted for lunch instead. Which SK immediately made arrangements for. Dr Agarwal completed the exam and came out to speak with SK she asked about his hand then told SK Meera was fine and now resting and relieved to be back to the hotel. Due to the accident being on the news part of the exam was checking for signs of abuse and bruises but none were present only weight loss Dr asked questions about the couples intimate relationship as she suspected Meera was pregnant. First SK was surprised as to why the Dr was calling his wife Meera when her name is Mehek ? Dr told SK that his wife called herself Meera Sharma. Seems like Mehek lost her memory referring to herself as Meera Sharma only remembers the name of the hotel but not her husband or any of the workers. Mehek felt sorry for SK thinking he was a worker at the hotel that was forced to work even with his sever injury. Awesome chapter Kelly but I have a million and one questions that I'm pretty sure will be answered in the coming chapters but I'm left confused .
Where was Mehek ? How long was she gone? Is that SK's child? If not who's is it? Why does Mehek refer to herself in her mothers name ? And why does she only remember the hotel ? Can't wait to read the next chapter please update soon 😛

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