SS-KISMAT KA KHEL(every story do not have perfect end) epilogue updatd - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is going intensely beautiful Di. I don't know I feel Shaurya is the owner of the mansion like the gatekeeper was about to salute him. I mean y will he salute a co worker. This is going amazing. Update soon Di. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

This is going intensely beautiful Di. I don't know I feel Shaurya is the owner of the mansion like the gatekeeper was about to salute him. I mean y will he salute a co worker. This is going amazing. Update soon Di. 😃


that was the hint which you caught😉 thank you!😃 yeah I shall update whole before my delivery 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-4

Calcutta tales!

A beautifully decorated house seems not less than a palace! In the garden pandals and manndaps are ready! The SHEHNAI is playing and the guests are waiting, the house is celebrating their most lovable daughter's marriage! But something is going wrong; the whisper is brewing among the guests that something is wrong with the bride she denies to marry! Jeevan was sitting in the hall, he was not able to stand any longer, he was completely puzzled, he was blank, how could mehak, is she his very own dear niece? Why she's behaving like a stubborn and rude to her own family? What's wrong with her! Galti mera hai! He said!


Meera and the whole sharmas were at the hall. Everyone is shocked and pale, in anger and in embarrassment! Mehak refuses to marry Ajay! On the wedding day! Balwant and PD literally begged, everybody tried their best to make her understand but she was strict to her stand. Now Ajay's family and sharmas are face to face! The fear of humiliation with facing lot of question shattered these two families! Somehow the groom's family manages to save their back throwing tantrums that the girl is characterless ...and the family is cheat!


Aisi beti hone se naa hona achcha tha! Meera exclaims in grief! Kaise sanskar diye ho tumlog apni beti ko? Someone asked! Arrey aisi sanskar doge; sarr pe charaoge toh beti aise hi naak katwayegi! The members of the Sharma family hung their head due to shame...


suddenly they heard a voice! Mahek ki shaadi hogi! Aaaj ...abhi! Isi mandap pe! Everyone is stunned to see Kanta is coming with Sonal and Mohit! Aaap log shaayed bhul rehe hain k aaj meri aur beti ki bhi shaadi hain! Aaj k din mai koi aanhoni hone nehi de sakti! ...she looked all the faces...read their expressions! Then looked at her husband ...aap aur parjayi ji mere saath aayiye!


Mehak was crying alone in her room! She never imagined in her lifetime that she will be that rude to her family! Mujhe maaf kar diiye! Mujhe maaf kar dijiye! She murmured! Suddenly the door opened! Kanta entered with jeevan and meera, she announced like robot: mehak!Mohit ki shaadi ho raha hai Sonal k saath! Ek hi maandap pe tumhari bhi shaadi hogi! Mere pasand kiya hua ladke k saath! Taiyaar ho jaao! Mehak tried to say something but meera rebuked: aur koi baat nehi! Taiyaar ho jaao!


KANTA'S LETTER TO MEHAK!

Mehak beta! Aaj tumne hum pe jo ehsaan kiya hai! Wo hum kabhi nehi bhulenge! Sirf mere khatir tumko kitna kuch sehna para! Humne tumko jo dukkh diya wo shayed sauteli maa bhi naa de! Meri baat ki yaakin karo! Ajay Permar ki parivaar hi Sonal ki mata-pita ki maut ka zimmedar hai! Wo log insaan nehi; haiwan hain! Par mai naa toh ye tumhari chachu ko bol sakti hu aur naa hi kisi aur ko! Tumhari dadaji ne baat pakki kar rakkha tha! Maine bohot koshish ki thi par...khair choro! Aant bhala toh sab bhala! Aur ye baat mai isi liye bol rehi kiuyn ki... Beti! Aaj tumhare yeh choti maa tumko kuch batane jaa rehi hai! Sapno k raajkumar humesha ghode pe char k nehi aata! Wo kabhi kabhi chup k se aata hai; aur humare zinddegi ko khushiyo se hr deta hai! Tumne sirf mere kehne pe jis insaan k haath zindegi bhar k liye thaam liya! Shayad wohi tumhara raaj kumar ho! Beta! Aur koi nehi! Par hum jaante hai k wo kaun hai! Beta wo tumhari zindegi khushiyo se bhar dega! Wo bohot achcha hai! Bass choti maa ki ek baat maan lo! Aapne dil aur jaan se uski biwi bano! Wo akelaa hai! Bohot akela! Dur kar do uski yeh akela pan! Meri aashirwad humesha tumhare saath rehega! Khush raho! Aabad raho!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res for now for 2 Chapters..
@sunet why don't you send PM to regular readers ??

Ya mein bhejoon 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Res for now for 2 Chapters..

@sunet why don't you send PM to regular readers ??

Ya mein bhejoon 😆


that so sweet of you but yaar sham mai fb pe naa toh kisi ko tag karti hu 😛
aur naa hi yaha kisi ko pm kar k padhne ko bolti hu!😆
adat k khilaf hai!😆
sach poocho toh mai hairan hu!
k itni saari silent readers...mereko laga tha k shayead 500 views hoga! par yaha toh 1000 views hai re baba!😆

by the way waiting for your reviews😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Di I was about to log out and go back to studies and I got to see you updated. I couldn't control but read it before going back to studies. This is growing more and more thrilling now. I want you to update asap. Please 😳. You write beautifully.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

Di I was about to log out and go back to studies and I got to see you updated. I couldn't control but read it before going back to studies. This is growing more and more thrilling now. I want you to update asap. Please 😳. You write beautifully.


I shall try to give two parts in a day😉 if not possible then one part!😆 thanks dear! keep reading...hope I can entertain
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry not able to comment on previous updates
Inserting story ...Continue soon😊😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Sorry not able to comment on previous updates

Inserting story ...Continue soon😊😃


thnx nandu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART-5


FROM THE GLIMPS OF PAST~~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!

Sharma House Hall! The marriage ceremony was over! Every guest left! It's time for bidaai! Today the family is going to lose their two daughters at a time! Sonal is crying like hell! As her husband Mohit, is in Indian Army...he has to return to his work place along with his newly wedded wife...they will start a new life there...in military quarter! Mehak, on the other side, sitting quietly and silently! Every elder member blessed the two couple! Everybody watching Mehak's husband curiously!

All members are eager to talk with him but cannot gather courage! Ravi whispers to Balwant: yeh toh Amitabh Bachchan se bhi zyada lamba hai! Baap re! Shaadi se le kar abb taq ek bhi baat nehi kiya!

Dolly aunt, a relative of Sharmas came with her husband from Delhi for marriage purpose, said: Kanta isko kaise jaanti hai! Sirf wo hi janti hai...aur koi nehi! Aarey aise kaise bina jaan pehchaan k shaadi karwa diya!

PD the eldest yet youngest member of family said: Dolly! Jab bhi muh khol ti hain humesha tedi bolti hai! Aarrey jab Kanta ne thik kiya hai toh phir kuch toh soch samajh k hi kiya hoga naa!


Jeevan suddenly stood up and declared: ap sab log rest lijiye! Kaal shubah train hai! Mujhko aur ghar k bado ko Mehak k pati se baat karna hai!


Everybody leaves except Mehak's husband, Jeevan, Balwant, Meera, Kanta and Ravi and Mansi! They are watching keenly their new son-in-law! Around 26! Giant like muscular body! His sharp nose just like the symbol of aristocracy! His deep intense eyes, his determined chin, he don't seem like other normal guys! No! His gesture his posture is so perfect! His behaviour is so gentle that everyone is amazed... but somewhere there's dominance! What kind of relative of Kanta? She never ever mention about her parental house anytime! How does Kanta know this boy?


Jeevan looks at his wife: Isko hum sab se milwaoge nehi!


Jee...yeh mere mujh bola bhai ka beta hai ...and the young man looked at her for a glance then looked down immediately!

Jeevan now asked him: naam kya hai tumhara?


(after a small pause) SHAURYA KHANNA!


Rehte kaha ho?


Delhi!


Jeevan is little satisfied! Yes! Kanta is also from delhi! She said him when they first met! Wait! Khanna???


Jeevan asks: tum Jath ho?


Jee!


Sharmas are punjabi! Jeevan looks at Kanta like what the hell you have done! She whispered: insaan hai! Meri ek hi baat pe shaadi k liye razi ho gaya! Itna bada sacrifice toh kiya naa! Jeevan nodded!


Ghar pe kaun hai tumhara?

Koi nehi! Main akela hu! Maa baap bachpan mein guzar gaya! Mai Delhi mei mere malik ki quarter mei rehta hu!

Kaam kya karte ho?

Mansion ka aur business k dekhbhal! Main ek...chef hu!

Chef? This profession is generally ignored by middle class Indian! Sharmas exchanged their glance ...


Ravi then asked: beta! Tumko hum ladki waalo se kuch maang hai! Tum...bina kuch liye aise hi razi ho gaye ...shadi ho gaya! Toh agar koi maang hai toh bejhijhak bolo!


Now he lifted up his face! Looked straight! His eyes were so sharp that everybody felt little uneasy!HE smirked and then said: ek shart! Jo aap sab ko maanna hoga!

Kya? shart? kaisi shart?


Aap log ek saal se pehhle aapni beti se nehi mil saktey! he declared!


Kya? Kiuyn? A wave of shock,wonder and fear played on their faces and he read those and smirked again! Ghabraiye maat! Mai aapki beti ko koi taqleef nehi hone dunga! Lein agar aap logo mei se koi bhi ek saal k andar use mile ya baat krne ki kosish kiya! Toh mai usko waps yaaha chor jaunga! Ek saal k baad jitna chahe! Aaplog use mil sakte ho!

Everyone was confused and shocked! Ek saal? Mehak se naa milu? Kiuyn? Jeevan says in anger- ek baat saaf saaf batao! Tum Mehak k saath kuch galat toh nehi karoge naa! Ek aajnabi k haath bina koi khabar liye aapne hi ghar beti ko aise kaise chor du?
dekhiye! Ajeeb cheez kuch kam thoda hi hua hai aaj! He said calmly: shaadi k din achanak shaadi se inkaar kar dena! Dulha badal jaana! Dulhan badal jaana! Bina kuch bole 3 mahina nehi! 3 hafta nehi! 3din nehi! Yaaha taq k 3ghanta bhi nehi! Sirf 30mint k andar mera shaadi fix ho gaya aur shaadi ho bhi gaya! He looks at Kanta! Dekhiye! Aaj 11th January hai! Aagle saal 12 january ko aa jana aap log aapne beti se milne! The man looked at all the family members! Main...Jath hu! Aur ek jath aapne zabaan se nehi mukarta! Aapki beti ko koi taqleef mai nehi dunga! Asli mard kabhi bhi aurat ko taqleef nehi deta!

For the first time they are seeing a young man putting odd points so clearly that strong points are getting weak in front of it! He's so clever ...Balwant looked at Jeevan who was silent, then suddenly he sighed and replied sehi kaha tum ne! Aankh bandh karke jab beti diya hai toh phir aankh bandh karke tum pe yaakin i karna padega! Hum sabko tumhare shaart manzur hai

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