SS-KISMAT KA KHEL(every story do not have perfect end) epilogue updatd - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sunet27taherian


if reader cannot understand then not their but its writer's fault sneha

my story has three phase which is going at a time

THE SHIMLA DAYS/PRESENT GREY DAYS! is the picture of present! at present Mahek is dead...she is recalled by her husband Shaurya...and if you read then you will get to know that shaurya is somewhere responsible for her death! he use to tell mahek's story to their daughter Karishma...who is unaware about meherya! she knows mo-nal as her parents...

PAGES FROM THE BROWN DIARY...its actually Mahek's diary...her words and her feeling which she portrayed on various incident! only treasure of Shaurya through which he feels her


THE DELHI TALES is the phase when meherya used to stay together ...it will tell what happened between them! why she's dead and why shaurya hated by almost everyone!

mahek will be introduce through memories of the present characters...she's very much in my story😆 hope I cleared the mess 😆😳


With all these clarifications, if I don't get to the bottom of the story then I'm hopeless case
Sunet. 😒Thanks for the details.👏⭐️

Hope you and baby are doing fine. I enjoyed everything about pregnancy expect
this boxing and football matches inside my tummy. My girl used to start kicking
especially in the noon before my lunch. 😃😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara


Sunet, it's just the other way around. Your readers, meaning me not upto your level.😳
I need to sit tight and read the chapters.😛


gest is there for you dear...go through...I'm sure it will help a lil 😳
Edited by sunet27taherian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART-11

SHARMA HOUSE

Dekhiye! Main aakhri baar pooch rehi hu k aap kaha ja rehe hain? Dekhiye aap please boliye k Aap kaha jaa rehe hain?

Jeevan looked at kanta, he was packing his suitcase...he didn't bother to answer. Kanta now hold his hand...aaap delhi ja rehe hai naa? Mujhko le kar nehi chalengey? Kitni din ho gayi mahek se mili bagair! She was watching her husband!

Jeevan turned towards her: ramesh bhaisaab se main e wada kiya thaa k mai mahek ko pita k kami kabhi bhi mehsus nehi hone dunga! Maine une kiya gaya wada tod diya ! koi mahek ko wapas kare ya naa kare mujhko meeri beti se milna hain! Basss!

Kanta...well aware of this man! He's shy and naive but it comes about his family he becomes completely opposite! She understood that no one can stop him to meet Mahek!So she holds his hand suniye! Aap meri aur didi k liye bhi eke k ticket book karwa lijiye! Dekhiye jitna haq app ka hain utna hi haq unka bhi toh hain aapni beti se milne ka! Something was playing in her mind! She want to send Meera with jeevan so that he couldn't be rude to shaurya...she understood that jeevan is going to bring mahek back!

Jeevan was watching her! He smiled ...tum meri biwi ho kanta! Agar tum samajh sakte ho k mai kiuyn jaa raha hu! Toh phir mai bho samajh sakta hu k tum kiuyn chate ho k Meera bhabi mere saath jaye! Suno! Mahek yaha aane k baad ...tumko sabko sach sach batana hain! Uske liye taiyaar raho! Gharwalo ko jawab dene k aur mehak ko dene liye tumhare pass kya jawab hain ye tum hi tay karo! Utna waqt de raha hu tumko! Ghar ka aur bhabi ka khayal rakhna! Bass bhagwan se ek hi prarthana karna k meri beti mujhko zinda aur sehi salamat mil jay!

Aap...aap train mei jaa rehe ho?

Nehi plane mei! Mai jald se jald mahek k pass pohochna chata hu bass!

DELHI TALES!

Bhaiya! Aapko ek khabar dena hain! Humari naya hotel kholne ka approval humko mil chukka hain!

Shaurya looked at his brother and smiled...Vicky choti choti baton pe khush hona bandh kar do aur badi success k taraf dhyan do! Ye khushiya tab manana jab humara dream project pura delhi par raaj karega!

Waise ye khush khabar aap bhabi ji ko denge naa!

Uska iss khabar se koi lena ddena nehi hai Vicky! Anyway listen...aaj foreign investors' jinki saath humari meeting tha wo log humari accommodation, position and staff behaviour se khush hain but...wo log kaal phir aa kar kuch Indian dishes taste karenge! So we have to prepare authentic Indian dishes! Actually I was thinking to make few cuisines also...

Suddenly his secretary entered...sir! bad news! Karan had an minor accident when he was returning home! What? two brothers are shocked! Karan is the head chef of their hotel and only he can ake Indian cuisines! Now? Two brothers looked at each other! Its not news ...its a bomb!

Shaurya entered into their nest! Nisha was peeling vegetables! She greeted him: good evening! Aap fresh ho jaiye mai nasta laga deta hu!

Bhukh nehi hain! mai aaj raat ko hi kuch nehi khaunga...aap akele hi dinner kar lena!

Par kiuyn? She was surprised but he didn't reply! He went to his room straight and lied on his bed, switched off the light! He was trying his best to calm down! Suddenly he felt soft and cold fingers running through his hairs! Massaging them gently...at he tried to stop her but slowly he started liking the hair massage! Both were silent...shaurya didn't opened his eyes!

Pareshaan hain ye toh samaj liya...thodi si share karenge toh aapko bhi halka lagega aur shayed mai koi madat kardu!

Shaurya was silent, after a long gap when he was asked by mahek : khana laga du?

He replied: mahek! Isi khana ko le kar hi pareshaan hu!

Khana kabhi kisi k pareshani ban sakta hain bhala?

Mere liye haan!

He narrates the whole story and mahek listened carefully! She stood up and said: bhagwan par bharosa rakkhiye! Sab thik ho jayega! Aaiye khana kha lijiye!

Next day she requested Shaurya to take her to their hotel, she went to Vicky directly said him that she wanna help them. Both brothers are in shock. Listen Mahek you don't have to worry! We will handle the problem!

But please aap mujh par ekbaar bharosa toh kijiye! Mahek pleaded!

Par tum waha jaa k kya karoge? Hotel ki dish preparation aur ghar mei khana banana bohot alag hota hain!

Itna dimag toh mujh mei bhi hain! Main waha pe koi gadbad nehi karungi bass ekbaar mujhko le kar toh chaliye!

Bhabi! Aap chaliye humare saath! Mahek smiled and shaurya glared! Vicky said: main iss hotel ka malik hut toh ye mera order hain k shaurya aap bhabiji ko...bhabhi bachao! He hides behind mahek because he saw shaurya picking up heavy paperweight so that he can crush his head with the help of it! But before Mahek saw he keeps it at its place! Mahek ignoring vicky's fear smiled and said toh mai gadi pe jaa k baith ti hu aap dono aa jaiye!

She went to the hotel kitchen directly! Instruct all the cooks how to make authentic Bengali and Punjabi dishes! They obeyed her... Very next moment she put an awkward condition that when the investors will every waiter and waitress should dress just like traditional Punjabi dresses and will serve them in traditional Indian thali...

WHAT THE HELL? Shaurya shouted at his cabin: we will welcome them in dehati attire? Never! She prepared food! Well...lots of thanks to her! Now tell every employee to dress just like the hotel etiquette BLOODY...

but Mahek's brother-in-law did completely different...he ordered everybody to dress up just like mahek said...shaurya skipped his heartbeat seeing them in Punjabi attire in front of the foreigners ...but the investors were amazed to see the Indian culture and tradition...they were heavily impressed by the business trick...shaurya was relived and Vicky felt proud...

one employee asked another: ye aurat jo aaj in dono k saath aayi thi wo kaun hain? Shaurya sir ki biwi hain kya?

Other replied: tum pagal ho? Shaurya sir aur ye aurat? Sir k girlfriends ko dekha hain? Sab modern nehi ultra modern hain!

The two brothers asked their employee: where's she?

Wo madam jo aaj inti help kiya? Wo toh kab ki nikal chuki hain!

What?

haan! Unki haath jal gaye hai naa isi liye Rina usko aap ki ghar drop karne ko gayi hain!

Kya? Mahek ki haath jaal gaya? Shaurya rushed towards home! If she gets to know what his identity is then...

while Rina was in hell shock that he leaves in khanna mansion's servants' quarter! She asked mahek whether she is khanna's house cook or nor? Mahek informed her that she's wife of malik's most loyal secretary!

Madam please don't mind...is Vicky sir your...

nehi nehi kya bol rehi ho? Wo toh malik hain humari?

Toh phir...

tumlog jinko Karela...

Rina thank you very much for taking care of mahek! Now you can go home! Shaurya interrupted! When he entered he saw mahek and rina . rina was applying medicine on her palm! I am here for her! She will be fine ...

Rina looked at her and then looked down...she left!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update di
Plz update asap 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di...Nisha again 😉. This was amazing. The secret was almost out but Shaurya reached on time. How I wished Rina tells but. Never mind. I'm saying it again...it's going amazing. Update soon Di. Wanna know what happened next 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mahek ke pati ... phurrr 🤣🤣
Shaurya lost his control🤣🤣

I was laughing so much while reading this 😆

Even my hubby don't turn when I call him with some respect
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.😳 Tho jeevan ms ko lene ke liye ja rahe hei😲 Kya ms iske saath wapas ayenge. Agar sach bola tho wo pakka jayengi kyonki ye janne ke bad ki uska kud ka pathi use doka de rahe hei . Otherwise she will not leave. Kab tak SK is sach ko chupa payenge ki wo us gar ka malik hei naukar nahi. Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh so she is a great cook also...she is doing her best to win his trust but patah nahi yeh kab samjhyga ... Jeevan coming to Delhi😲
Waiting for next chapter...aaj toh Bach Gaya Shaurya😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sunet MS ko kuch twist deke wapas zinda nahi kar sakthe??😲😭 Whenever I read the update I like it and sochne lagtha hei ki MS zinda nahi hei. SK ne aisa kya kar diya ki wo ithane regret kar raha hei.😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di,another amazing update.but i feel bad everytime, knwing mehak is no more.but their love story is so intresting.do continue soon.n karishma ko uske asli dad se milwa dengi kya aap????atleast sk has some happiness then in his life in the form of his daughter.

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